Cave Borer

Please stop writing instructions (✪▽✪). I don't pay to see you write instructions.

Jiangjiang left little footprints here, and moved a small bench to sit on it. I brought my own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to read the big book~ By the way, I want to ask for a mutual visit, ^_^

I accidentally read this book and I thought it was pretty good, but the number of words is too few and it's not enough to read. I hope the author can do it faster.

The author seems to think that readers hate female characters. In fact, it's just that your writing skills are not good enough. What you hate is just the female characters you write... If you write well, it's a beauty mark, but if you write poorly, it's hemorrhoids.

Wonderfully written. But, is it time for the heroine to come on stage? The description of the later war is very detailed, but I always feel that it has some shortcomings and is not as exciting as the beginning. Moreover, the perspective is too focused on the protagonist, and so far there is no supporting role that can be called a major one. There is only the first male and a bunch of extras, but no first female, second female, second male, and third male. If you watch it too much, you will get tired of it.

The writing is pretty good, similar to Mortal Flow. It's just that some details were not handled well, and the transition was a bit stiff. But it is undeniable that it is indeed a good book. I hope that the next plot can be polished up.

This novel is not popular. The more I read it, the less interested I am in it. It is still a eunuch or something without a heroine. Most people in the comment section said that I like it and have collected it without a heroine. As a result, this novel became popular, but not at all. What's even more sad is that there are not many people in the comment area. From this point, we can see that whether or not to include a female protagonist has nothing to do with whether the novel is popular or not. It is even better if it is written. Not including only one protagonist requires higher writing skills, and the author obviously does not have the ability. Otherwise, if it becomes popular early, wouldn't it be without a female protagonist? Why don't they support it? There are not even a few deacons in a group of trainees.

In fact, the outline of this book is well set and very attractive. It's a pity that the author probably doesn't write many novels. There is a big problem that there are 50 words for fighting and 500 words for noun explanation. This greatly affects reading. At first I thought I was just starting to write, but I wasn't sure. It turned out that there were more than 200 chapters, and there were still two lines of fighting and two pages of instructions... Maybe it was not deliberately thinking about water. When I changed the map and met the fifth prince, the three puppets were instantly separated by just a few lines. It turned out that it took thousands of words to describe the psychology of the fifth prince. A mortal actor wrote more details than the protagonist's psychological activities?

It's not like a novel about cultivating immortals, but more like a fantasy novel In addition, the level of improvement is too slow. It has been more than eighty chapters, and I have been staying in the first realm, refusing to break through until my death. The first thing is just for the sake of a few insects, but the second part is just to lay the foundation and cultivate to the limit... The author has always emphasized that the protagonist has the resources and the ability to cultivate the first realm very solidly and solidly But what is the use of this? It is not a profound stage that can affect the final immortality, and if it is broken through, it will leave hidden dangers. I really don't believe that if you break through, you will leave irreparable hidden dangers. Refining the essence is so troublesome No matter how good the foundation is in your first realm, it is unprecedented and unprecedented. What's the use? This is very unreasonable, and the strength is completely inconsistent with the realm. The realm hasn't changed much. Each enemy is stronger than the last, but they all end up killing him. Isn't this a joke? Anyway, I can't understand why current authors have to suppress the realm of the protagonist. They won't break through if they can, and they constantly cross levels to kill enemies. Although it is standard for the protagonist to cross levels, but deliberately create it, is this necessary?

When I read a book review that said it didn't have a female protagonist, I decisively collected it.

Since it is a classical cultivation of immortality, can we not use rice? It's not that troublesome to measure the size

I've read more than 100 chapters, but I can't remember or understand the levels. It's so hard to remember! I don't even understand what the Divine Presence Stage Kung Fu is! I haven't understood the other types of exercises yet, it's so dazzling! I don't even understand the various races in various places, as well as the sinner race and so on! I'm really tired from watching it and can't remember it! Isn't it better to just practice Qi, build foundation, golden elixir, and Nascent Soul? It's too tiring for you to be unique.

If a book doesn't even have outstanding female characters, it's impossible to become popular.

As you read on, there are many interesting places, which are quite good. Immortality leads to immortality, and one walks alone. Apart from anything else, even the Zhang Daoling Celestial Master family has not circulated the love story of their ancestor Zhang Daoling. Those who complain about the lack of female protagonists in the comment area, according to a real person, are just things whose three legs become weak after seeing a woman.

I really can't stand it any longer. The instructions are long and long. I'm too tired to read them. I just want to have a good fight. There are all kinds of exercises and application instructions. After I saw them, I just skipped and read them. I basically ordered them all within a few chapters. But with the way you write it, I have no choice but to abandon the article!

When I gave the jade pendant as a gift, I couldn't stand it anymore.

It's very well written, it's really easy to live in, and the content is handled very delicately.

This is not a novel, this is expository writing. . So tired

The signing contract has been sent out, and the signing status may be changed in about a week. Interested friends can invest in advance~

When I first started watching it, I thought the golden finger of the Borer was quite innovative. Its ability to store water helped the protagonist get through the difficulties in the early stage. However, since it is a world of cultivation, this kind of super-power-like ability is definitely not enough. At the time, I thought that this golden finger would gradually become useless as the protagonist cultivates. However, the author controlled it very well. The water storage ability gradually changed from the main offensive method to the auxiliary ice-making ability, without completely losing its existence value. Especially when the blood poisoning ability of the borer appeared later, I realized that I was overthinking it. This golden finger is really powerful, and it can radiate to the level of cultivation, making the protagonist continue to become stronger. I really look forward to the protagonist finding all the borers in the future.

The logic is good, the character creation feels okay, the plot is relatively reasonable, and there are many outstanding things in it, such as Jiuxue's ability and Kongmen's explanation. The only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is the sentence break in the article. Why should a sentence be cut off in the middle for no reason? It makes people feel uncomfortable while reading and cannot continue reading smoothly, just like drinking water and suddenly choking on it.

Come on! I invested 200,000 words in a new author's work before signing the contract. It will be strongly recommended tomorrow. Qidian will not forget every author who has written a good work. If you have the resources, you can find an editor to submit and sign it.

How could I possibly be able to find such a useless novel?

Just skip the first 10 chapters and read the rest, it's not bad

I support you. The setting of this book is very good. I read it accidentally and couldn't put it down.

Vote~(￣▽￣~) and congratulations on signing the contract ^_^♪!

At the beginning, I gave away my birth token 😰

It is indeed a good book, but I am not optimistic about the setting of the practice system. There is also an assumption about the contract: Can the strong enslave the weak through contracts? Can we also use a contract to prevent the mentally retarded from resisting?

Let me ask you a question. In Chapter 8, the protagonist is a person who does not know martial arts and has no martial arts talent. Why should he be kept? Don't understand

Why do you always feel so frustrated?