The Emperors of the Apocalypse

A good book, but it also has some poisonous points. The writing in the early stage was very good, but the sudden emotional drama is a disease of literary youth. The habit of readers of online articles is that if my girlfriend dumps me, I will treat her as if she does not exist. I can chat occasionally, but it is too poisonous to still think about it and say that this is my life. It is too poisonous to write this in Internet articles. Of course there is no problem if the author is willing to write this. The problem is that you are going against the habits of most readers. There may be dog-licking, but there is no foreshadowing of emotions and no personal feelings. For readers, the protagonist's ex-girlfriend is just a passerby, and even has a grudge. A small number of people even think that it is best to live as humble as possible. Again, it is true that the protagonist is extraordinary, but it is very problematic not to share it with Qiao Anfeng. If you don't share a person who is loyal and abides by the law in the apocalypse and even knows how to adapt, and saves the protagonist's life, what are you thinking? Your protagonist is not a high school student. He is in the second grade of middle school. I think he should understand the importance of uniting strength, right? What's more, only the protagonist knows the path to transcendence. The protagonist is always at the forefront. What are you afraid of? Even if it is something that I am not afraid of sharing with the country, do I still have to wait for you to prepare a few plots for the protagonist to grow up before sharing it? Your protagonist is not a high school student. As I said before, it doesn't matter if you don't care about your grades. Just write whatever you want and be yourself. My words are not right either. If you care about grades, you are going against the habits of many readers. I have nothing else to say. I only saw the plot of the protagonist's ex-girlfriend and abandoned it. I am also a layman, an ordinary reader. Even for comments, I only dare to use a small account built within a year. It's just that there are too few good apocalyptic articles. I would like to offer some comments before I leave.

It can't be so bloody, right? 😢 I really don't want to mess with the protagonist like this. I feel like I will explode if I do it. I think it's better not to write about being abandoned. It hurts to see it 🤔🤔🤔

The idea is good, the subject matter is good, but I don't know how to write it later. No matter what the environment, human beings live in groups. Writing about the doomsday is a dark type of lone ranger. Basically, the book is hopeless and has its tail cut off. Human beings live in groups, and I have never seen a human being who can live alone for 10 or 8 years. Human beings are also selfish, but when you live alone, you will find that you are no longer selfish. Saving and protecting others is not as good as saving and becoming stronger. The protagonist is already on the road to transcendence. If your sister is an ordinary person, you can only rely on the protagonist's halo to ensure that you will not die, but in this way the plot has already been guessed. The end of the world is not easy to write about anyway. I hope the author will take into consideration when writing that where there is light there is darkness.

The writing is really good, but I don't know why I really don't want to see this female protagonist.

I feel like the protagonist deserves to be betrayed and die. I hope the author will let the protagonist die after being betrayed.

There are too few updates. I feel like I will finish reading it soon.

There will be no chapter after Chapter 28. Most book friends are obsessed with an unfounded woman. The rhythm is okay, but the logic is really bad. If you know how to be extraordinary, and you are already extraordinary and can activate Wushuang, why don't you first find a way to improve your sister's strength (you have also seen your sister starve to death). Who can understand this logic? Let's talk about scientists. It is obviously to pave the way for opening up the extraordinary way. Coupled with a country's careless friends, labor and management would not believe it otherwise. As soon as the extraordinary path is revealed, the protagonist is the first gear, the second gear who kills zombies, and the protagonist's sister is the third gear, it's fucking outrageous. What to write next? The protagonist is destined to be ahead of everyone. He plays alone, and his base is broken

It feels okay, much better than many novels, but the main reason is that this emotional scene is really nerve-wracking and cannot be written well. You can write less. The problem is that you write so much.

My ex-girlfriend has abandoned me. One of the reasons is that the cause of the disaster is not mentioned. The black villain is not clear, so the problem is not big. But on the road to transcendence, alas, one person can achieve the goal of chickens and dogs ascending to heaven. The main character is too independent. The main reason is that the writing is not good or bad.

Why are the updated chapters duplicated?

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It's so confusing that they all repeat chapters.

It's really hard to see one in two days

The beginning of the story really surprised me. When there was no heroine at the beginning, the protagonist was calm but still retained a little bit of humanity and selfishness. He could accept a pair of sisters if he had the conditions, and he would not leave any consequences if he encountered ill intentions! But everything has changed since his girlfriend came out. If there is no such heroine, if the protagonist upgrades slower and the journey of survival in the apocalypse is more thrilling, maybe this book will become a god. The author obviously does not describe hallucinations very well, nor does the inner portrayal of the characters, but this is not the key. If you pay attention to a good book, others can read it! I just felt that after more than 20 chapters, the flavor changed and I no longer felt it. It was too poisonous! He might have given up on himself later! The emotional portrayal of the characters is really problematic. The appearance of his ex-girlfriend is too far-fetched. He and his sister were reborn and starved to death. Hasn't his ex-girlfriend never been to their house once? No matter what the reason is, if you don't go, you just don't go! Then the emotional drama with that girlfriend directly turned into a literary youth, and he even set up a memorial for his confession. Being abandoned means being abandoned. Others don't have to tell you that they abandoned you. What are you? The boyfriend who helped him awaken her was also directly abandoned?

Hahaha, it's so funny, only two people commented, so I'm going to make a comment too 🤓

The author is so miserable. 11 Of the comments in December were for book promotion.

The writing is very good, why are there so few people?

The writing is very good. In recent years, there are very few apocalyptic themes that really make people want to read it. Come on.