The Immortal Shepherd-Farmer

That's a terrible thing. How can he be so eager to sleep with any woman he sees? He's not an ordinary person anymore. How can someone who cultivates the Tao go so far without such self-control and vision? Besides, you're already leveling up so quickly, why don't you just stay home for a while and level up faster? There's no rush for exploration.

I feel like the male lead is a lecherous monster. Would a normal person get aroused when they see a beautiful woman?

There's a problem: his own brother, Li Youshan, had been helping him from the moment he entered the mountain gate until he left, but who knew that not long after his brother died, he took his wife as a concubine and even made excuses, saying that he had sympathy for widows 😅!

The writing style is decent. However, it feels too bland and lacks highlights. As someone who transmigrated from modern times, aside from buying a piece of land, there's no difference between the two. Perhaps modern agricultural concepts could be used, combined with cultivation techniques, to achieve this.

Who is this Liu Yu? Cultivating immortality and marrying a widow with a child? What kind of immortality is that?

The protagonist himself isn't very skilled, and he's burdened with raising a bunch of weaklings. He'd be better off starting a sect and focusing on cultivating those with high talent and good character from a young age.

Stop talking nonsense. Given the current state of cultivation/farming novels on Qidian, this book is definitely a three-star pass, no debate there. The plot is reasonable, the writing is a bit weak; if the writing were truly excellent, it would be a four-star book. There's not much to argue about. Some people ask what's wrong with the women?

A fool who's been a fool for years, once he leaves the sect, every woman is interested in him. Ha! Can this be any worse? The romance scenes are like a mass-produced harem drama. You need to put some effort into it. The women you write are like rural characters who get horny at the sight of a man.

The writing is bad enough, but how did this reborn, intellectually challenged, and weak old pervert survive three chapters? Of course, it's the protagonist's halo and the author's arrangement!

This is utterly terrible! Aside from being a lecherous lunatic, the protagonist is completely oblivious to basic common sense. All the dialogue either creates conflict or is just empty boasting. He should stick to writing lighthearted urban novels. Many toxic novels at least don't make mistakes in the most basic things; this is like reading a self-contradictory kindergarten story. In short: utterly amateurish.