From the Start, I Refined an Entire Sect

Tsk tsk tsk, let's hear your comments in Chapter Twenty-Eight. 1. The system appears very rarely in Chapter 28. It devoured the protagonist's sect and gave him a powerful lightning spiritual root and a matching technique. 2. It's another story about a protagonist who tries to survive, and honestly, I'm tired of it.

What's the point of a female lead in this kind of story? Could she even write one? She just adds unnecessary flaws.

It seems like nobody's reading this, but I'll still mention it anyway. Please feel free to share any good opinions or suggestions in the comments section. As a newbie, there are many things I don't understand. Please forgive me, experienced folks. Also, this book is a light novel, so if you don't like it, feel free to leave a comment here. I should be able to handle it.

A system that destroys families and causes death? With a name like that, there's a female lead? This female lead must be the system's creator, right?

Having read over 70 chapters, well, the minor flaws are acceptable, but it feels a bit bland and the pacing is a bit slow… It's tasteless to eat, but a pity to throw it away.

Having read up to chapter 12, the plot progression felt too forced. This senior sister is completely useless; she even sabotages things behind people's backs? She hasn't taken on any disciples for a hundred years, and now that she has, all she does is sabotage? If she doesn't have resources, she should fight for them herself. Sabotaging others is disgusting.

I didn't understand Chapter Seven. Since spiritual roots are set up, why not cultivate a technique without any elemental spiritual root instead of one's own? This is like refusing to call your own father and instead claiming someone else as his father.

To be honest, if you come in based on the introduction but don't see the system or use the refining function, it gets boring. If you were to temporarily stay in another sect, secretly refine your skills in a different sect, or have a sect's buildings mysteriously disappear, plus some funny events, and level up by relying on connections to get into a sect, that would be quite interesting.

I've read 54 chapters. Author, shouldn't you revise your synopsis? It's completely useless. The protagonist refines his own sect at the very beginning, but doesn't gain any benefit. By chapter 54, we still haven't seen him use this refining ability. Why make it the protagonist's greatest skill? With such incredible skills, he could have easily refined that monster, yet he was still being chased around like a dog?

This kind of training feels like such a waste. I thought there was a space where I could refine the sect's treasures, spiritual soil, pills, medicinal herbs, buildings, and formations.