I Can See Status Prompts!

Having read up to Chapter 18, I really have something to say: 1. The social background is chaotic. A small town with 17 villages under its jurisdiction has no distinctive local products and does not seem to be a major transportation hub, so it cannot support the prosperity described by the author. 2. An imbalance in the balance of power between the opposing forces.

The protagonists of time-travel stories often forget that they are modern people and think of themselves as people from ancient times.

I eat so much, how can I find the time? I spend all day eating.

That's outrageous! Grain is over 100 coins a pound! How are ordinary people surviving?!

The idea is good, but the writing is weak, the plot is clichéd, and the whole thing is filled with redundant and unnecessary explanations and setups. Don't tell me you're so good, you write it yourself; go read the novel and see if you can even finish it.

I don't quite understand what you're saying. Your writing isn't that great, and you just keep adding "1+1+1". What is the ratio of this "1" to a normal person's? Is it 1 point per second or 1 point per minute? You haven't explained any of this clearly. What's the point of reading this?

Let me share my thoughts. I couldn't continue watching the gang killing scene. It's not that there are any major flaws or clichés; the plot itself isn't bad. The main problem is the writing style; it doesn't capture the feeling. The protagonist seems to be played by one of those young, pretty-boy actors.

Doesn't the protagonist practice martial arts? Doesn't he go find a couple of martial arts manuals to improve his strength? I've already read almost 100 pages and I still don't understand.

Eating is too troublesome for the protagonist; let's change it to absorbing spirit stones after he breaks through to the Innate Realm.

There's not much to say. It's a headache to read. Most characters will end up in the palace, and even if they aren't deposed, this book won't become popular.