I Can See Status Prompts!

After reading Chapter 18, I really have something to say: 1. The social background is chaotic. A small town with 17 villages under its jurisdiction has no special local products and does not appear to be a major transportation thoroughfare. It cannot support the prosperity described by the author. 2. The balance of positive and negative forces is imbalanced. According to the author's estimate, 100% of the total population of the town and its villages will not exceed 10,000 people, or even only five or six thousand people. The government's strength has not been stated clearly, but the strength of the counter-mountain village can be estimated. More than 20 men capable of holding knives have been deployed in the town, and the deputy village leader can directly use dozens of men who can ride horses... This is a large village with at least 400 front-line combatants and a total of more than 2,000 people. It is not much smaller than the town. The local area simply cannot afford it. 3. The author does not have rich social experience. Let's not talk about why there are multiple pawnshops in such a small town. According to the character design given by the author to the Gao family, the Gao family's pawnshop mainly purchases fur goods. There are no relatively stable hunters to provide fur goods. This ridiculous thing cannot happen in reality. Realizing this supply and demand relationship, at least on August 15th, the pawnshop will prepare a mooncake-like gift for the hunters who supply the goods. 4. There are too many details missing, so I won't go into them one by one.

Time travel protagonists often forget that they are modern people and regard themselves as ancient people.

You eat a lot, how can you have time? You have to eat all day long

It's really poisonous, the price of food is more than 100 cents per catty! ! ! How did the people survive? ? ?

The creativity is good, but the writing is not good, the plot is cliché, the whole setting is explained in nonsense, and the explanation is cumbersome. Don't tell me that you can do it. You can write it and you can do it. Read the novel yourself and see if you can continue reading it.

I don't understand it a bit. Your writing is not very good. Just +1+1+1. What is the ratio of this 1 to a normal person? Is it 1 point per second or 1 point per minute? These are not clearly explained. Let me take a look!

Tell me your opinion. I couldn't stand the part about gang killings. It's not about poisonous points or routines. There is basically no problem with this. The main problem is that my writing skills are not good enough and I cannot express that feeling. It looks like the pig's trotters are the kind of young meat actors.

Don't you practice Kung Fu with Pig Horns? Don't you practice Kung Fu? Why don't you find two Kung Fu secret books to practice a little and enhance your own strength? There are almost 100 of them, and I can't even understand them.

It's too troublesome for the protagonist to eat. After breaking through the innateness, he should change it to a soul-absorbing stone.

Nothing to say. It gives me a headache. I will probably go to the palace. Even if it is not scrapped, this book will not become popular.