A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Shared Cultivation

The writing is terrible, it reads like a middle school essay or a diary. How dare someone write fanfiction without even understanding the original novel? What are thousand-year-old spiritual herbs? Can they be sold so easily? Even herbs that are only a few hundred years old are fought over by Golden Core cultivators.

You can give up now. You're ungrateful and blame Han Li for distancing himself. You should just leave the Seven Mysteries Sect yourself. 1. Why won't you warn me about being wary of Mo Lao? 2. He won't be left with the remaining techniques and spells of the Everlasting Spring Skill. Han Li is very loyal and righteous; if you can do even one of these things, you'll reap extremely high rewards later on.

They all worked for others' benefit and were severely poisoned.

I read ten chapters, and it felt like a monotonous account of events. There was absolutely no sense of immersion. Furthermore, the protagonist was too arrogant, recklessly displaying his abilities.

It feels like the author is writing a diary; many things that could be described in detail are only briefly mentioned. Why don't you just show us the outline?

Good heavens, only 20 or so chapters, but the content is at least several hundred chapters of the original novel.

Well written, don't write it again next time.

Hoeing the fields at midday, sweat drips onto the soil. Who knows that every grain in the bowl is the result of hard work?

I don't understand why the author is so obsessed with the unit "hundred million." Hundreds of millions of Gold-Eating Insects, billions of Mysterious Heavenly Vine, power hundreds of billions of times that of a True Dragon—they claim divine consciousness exceeding its limits will be sealed, but infinitely strengthening the physical body is fine?

I looked at a few. It's like writing an essay.