A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Shared Cultivation

The writing is so bad. It looks like a junior high school composition. I am writing a diary. Mortals dare to write fan stories without understanding it. What is the thousand-year elixir? Can you sell it casually? Hundreds of years have caused golden elixirs to fight for it. In the original work, Uncle Lei didn't show any shame for the centuries-old elixir. The protagonist also sells several thousand-year elixirs in the same place. In the original work, Han Li is so careful when selling elixirs. He is simply seeking death. He sells Dabai. Isn't it good? In this way, the Yuanying monks have long been squatting to kill people and seize treasures. There is also the Ascension Conference Arena. Most of the monks later have talismans, and they can't break the protagonist's defense. Talismans have become cabbage. When did the casual monks become so rich? It is completely inconsistent with the original work. What is written? In the Scarlet Trial, there are not many core disciples of the big sects who have talismans. Are we reading the same book of Mortals?

You can give up. You don't know how to behave and you blame Han Li for being alienated. You can escape from the Qixuan Sect by yourself. 1Won't you warn Mr. Mo to be careful? 2 I won't leave him the remaining exercises and spells of Changchun Gong Han Li is very affectionate and righteous. As long as you do one of these things, the rewards will be super high in the later stage.

They were all used to make wedding clothes for others, and they were severely poisoned.

After reading ten chapters, it's like a running account. There is no sense of substitution at all. Moreover, the pig's feet are so flamboyant that they can display their abilities unscrupulously.

It feels like the author is writing a diary. Many things that could be written in detail have been summarized in one stroke. Then you might as well take out the outline and show it to us.

Goodfellas only has about 20 chapters, and the content is at least several hundred chapters of the original work.

Nice writing, don't write it next time

It's noon on the day of hoeing, and the sweat is dripping from the soil. Who would have thought that every meal on the plate is hard work?

I don't know why the author is so obsessed with the unit billion. There are hundreds of millions of gold-eating insects and billions of Xuantian fairy vines. Their power is hundreds of billions of times the power of a real dragon. If the spiritual consciousness exceeds the limit, it will be sealed. Is it okay if the physical body is infinitely strengthened like this? There are levels of power in the mortal world, and unlimited expansion of low-level power does not have much effect. No amount of foundation building can defeat a Nascent Soul. Can the resources of the spiritual world afford 600 billion true dragons?

Saw a few. Just like writing an essay