A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: The True Spirit Realm

The real work of the protagonist, Palm of Heaven, was an opportunity given to me by Han Tianzun. If you snatch it away, aren't you afraid that Han Tianzun will slap you to death at some point? Don't grab the opportunity, the protagonist is completely obsessed with profit!

I recently read several other mortal fanfics, including Scientific Cultivation of Immortals, Mortal Immortals, Casual Cultivation, etc. Each protagonist has his or her own characteristics. Luo Hong's various refining materials are not a problem. Lu Yunze's unbridled imagination, extended heaven and earth refining methods, various refining methods are very good. After Wang Li strengthened the little green bottle, he used various fancy operations to lay out the human world with the general trend, and the pattern came up. Now the protagonist's characteristic is that there is no shortage of various things, whether it is materials or elixirs, but his own characteristics are missing. Every time he finds various things to integrate into himself, and there is a lack of creation. Obviously there are a lot of good things, but there is little creation. It stands to reason that whether it is refining weapons or elixirs, there is no shortage of things to practice, but the protagonist always finds other things to use the true spirit mark to brush, and no new things are produced. Compared with other fans, except for the big one, there are very few other exciting points, that is, he is not a new entrepreneur. The author can refer to it, and I hope the author will make progress.

This protagonist is like a fool. He can't fight or do things well. He was raped and taken supplements when he first entered the immortal world. Afterwards, he still behaves like that. He is so careless and careless. He doesn't think about what will happen if others want to kill him. He relies on useless rules, right? After a fight, he pretended to be dead, and said that others did not follow martial ethics and whipped corpses, and the life-saving things were not on his body, but in the thatched hut. He had to rush to wherever he was being chased. The protagonist was too stupid. This is a biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. I am speechless.

It was so poisonous that I couldn't stand it anymore, so I took it. According to the common sense of the five spiritual roots, you can't even break through the fourth level of Qi training. You also let others test your spiritual roots, and you still practice Qi to perfection. You clearly tell others that you have a valuable treasure. If there is an alchemy monk like Nangong Wan in the Immortal Ascension Conference, they will definitely beat you to death, search for souls, refine souls, seize treasures and kill people.

This is the stupidest doujin protagonist I have ever seen. He has no brains. He looks like a high school student who has never been out of society. He may not be as smart and cautious as high school students nowadays. During the Qi training period, you have to buy magic weapons, but the author actually wrote that someone is selling magic weapons, which is simply outrageous 😅. Li Huayuan has been practicing Tie Jing for more than ten years (Is it an iron Jing? I can't remember clearly). The protagonist takes a big piece of it without thinking about whether there will be foundation building or pill formation to kill him. The plot is similar to a running account, and the more you watch it, the less interesting it becomes.

Whether it is doubling the energy. Still this book. They all looked speechless. The things pig's feet can get are so awesome and supreme in other worlds, but when it comes to pig's feet, there is no lower limit. The biggest trick is, but the stupidest pig gets the biggest beating. Obviously there is a hook, but I want to change the plot, but I am afraid. . . . . .

This is one of the most disgusting novels I have ever read. The writing is so bad that I even vomited out the food I ate. What a talent.

Inexplicably, the protagonist is just thirteen years old, and the author arranged for a half-year-old child to be fucked by an evil cultivator for three days and three nights. This plot is just disgusting, right?

I feel speechless when I see someone who has taken it and still wants to do it again. It's such a waste of so much G. With such a rubbish mentality, have you never seen a woman? A bad-ass protagonist who specializes in supplementing still wants to be supplemented. Only those who have no ability go to the brothels, and those who have the ability don't play with high-end goods.

The protagonist has no resistance to women. He gives away all kinds of treasures. The women around him have guessed the secret of the protagonist. If he is randomly searched, he will be gone. If this is not the protagonist of Shuangwen, he may have died ten thousand times.