Monster Battlefield

There's so much bullshit. It took twelve chapters to return to Tomorrow's Frontier. You're such a bastard, the author. You really need to change it. You started with Tomorrow's Frontier and you still talked about setting for more than ten chapters. Can you beat the audience's grandpa in terms of settings? Now you are saying that the setting is dead. If you want to change it later, you will have to eat the book. Once you eat the book, a large number of readers will leave. Grandpa, that's enough.

The author's writing so far is so-so! To be honest, rather than the protagonist fighting alone, I hope that the protagonist can learn various knowledge and then improve his own strength while assisting the country. To be honest, I have read a lot of novels in which the protagonist single-handedly kills the enemy without leaving a trace. I also hope that the protagonist can improve his knowledge and skills and use them to fight and assist the country's overall strength. There is also the development of science and technology. Many novels now completely ignore the development of communication technology. No matter how powerful the technological equipment is, it requires someone to directly operate it. Even if super communication technology is invented, it is not used. Various weapons and equipment that can be operated remotely still have to be operated by humans and forced to explain. On the one hand, I don't want to sacrifice soldiers, but on the one hand, I want them to go into battle in person. I hope that after the protagonist researches the gravity body, he should solve the problem of communication technology and allow people to operate it remotely. The power armor made in this way, in terms of combat capability, endurance, and overall strength in all aspects, is several times more powerful than a manned gravity body of the same size. At the same time, this also allows the protagonist to have the ability to innovate and no longer completely rely on his existing technology. He must know how to innovate, improve and integrate existing technologies, so that the novel can be read well.

The writing is poor, the plot drags, and I have no intention of reading the book before I get into it. The subject matter is good, the layout is too pedantic, but the plot description is poor. No outline?

It's okay to be a time traveler who has been around for more than ten years and has achieved nothing. If you are still afraid of the college entrance examination, it means that your grades are poor. Then the question arises. How can an adult's mind be inactive for more than ten years after time travel and still not know how to study hard? Is it such a waste?

Author, I am committing plagiarism. I am stealing your novel. I hope you will update it soon, otherwise my fans will keep urging me, which makes me very embarrassed. I advise you to use rat tail juice🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶

After the protagonist is exposed to exoskeleton technology, the book is useless and the protagonist is sent to the battlefield. It is simply rubbing the reader's IQ on the ground. If super scientists go to the battlefield, the country will almost become extinct.

Da Qin World Map

This is the first time I have read a novel in so many years that Chapters 3 to 12 are all watery. What kind of novel should I write? Wouldn't it be good to sell water?

I found that the author didn't say a word, and every time he complained, he had to give a deep explanation and introduce a piece of rubbish. No one on the author cares about this. You just need to get the settings and details right. It's too watery, and it's as boring as reading a textbook. You can write more than ten chapters about a physical quality that doesn't have much effect on the plot.

What kind of thing is the protagonist? The author wrote it as if he was disabled. Also, you even have the monster data of Tomorrow After. You have to stare at the person for 10 seconds to find the data. You have to watch the person move. Are you sure you are a system and not a scanner. You can make the exoskeleton a reality. You have to scan people to collect data. The scanner is faster than you. Also, the protagonist of Tomorrow and After will also be able to backtrack. And the protagonist has not concealed it at all. Isn't it impossible to see it at all? I saw more than 20 pictures

There is too much nonsense, and the plot of one chapter is turned into ten chapters. The desire to read that I finally brought up was completely washed away by the author's water escape!

If the performance of this book is not satisfactory, there is a reason. The first dozen chapters are all in a row. I seriously doubt that the author is too busy with the word count. Isn't it good to get into the main text quickly and develop the plot while interspersing the setting? ?

The writing is very good and has potential. I am waiting for your next book.

Why do so many people always think that if they change the world, they can reach the top of their lives?

Too much nonsense, too many complaints, it's a complete mess

The protagonist goes to the battlefield. It feels like during the war, when scientists with two bombs and one star were placed on the battlefield to resist U. S. Aggression and aid Korea, and shoot at the enemy with guns. What does the author think

There probably aren't many fans left that Arc cultivated!

Why do so many people think this book is terrible? I have been looking for this book on the Qidian mobile science fiction recommendation list for a long time. Logic not smooth? Forced intelligence? Too watery? It's enough that it can be logically justified. As far as the sci-fi division is concerned, I haven't been reading for I don't know how long. During the free period, there will be no supplementary worldview, settings, and characters, and the main plot will be pushed directly from the beginning. How long do you want to write this book? If it's less than 300,000 words, it will be a bad eunuch.

I've only read sixteen chapters. I don't understand or understand why I should write a narrative for the sake of word count. After reading sixteen chapters, I even vaguely remembered the protagonist's name. I don't object to newcomers' bad writing, but I object to this kind of nonsense. It's so annoying to write a story or a good subject into a composition for primary school students. The whole article is similar to "have you eaten, have you eaten, what did you eat, is it delicious, oh, how was it made, etc." Shennong was defeated.

Don't think about it, someone else has definitely written it. Starting from the spiritual cage, the number of words is unlimited. I can't stand it anymore.

A fifth-level author said that free chapters are just a matter of time. But water also depends on where it is. It will be water in the first few chapters. Are you serious? If you don't believe it, read the author's own writing at the end of Chapter 4. What I admire most is a novel that teases you in the first few pages. Even if someone writes a running account in a studio, they would not dare to write like this.

A novel using an idiot with this kind of IQ as the protagonist could be written in 1 million words, and I wouldn't sleep for 24 hours!

When will the spirit cage end? I don't like the spirit cage.

I finished reading it in one go. It was quite amazing from the beginning until the end of the lighthouse chapter. Why did it become so boring later on?

The first few chapters are just the author talking to himself. A bunch of irrelevant plots are simply meaningless words with no focus and poor writing style.

Can you write "The Wandering Earth" after finishing Pacific Rim?

The cows in the production team don't dare to rest like you

I suggest you read it from Chapter 12. What I wrote earlier is nonsense.

After reading only a few chapters, I was so bored 😒 that I threw it out of the bookshelf.

What did you write? There are so many psychological activities, but I haven't gotten into the topic yet, I'm speechless😓