Monster Battlefield

It's okay to be a time traveler who has been around for more than ten years and has achieved nothing. If you are still afraid of the college entrance examination, it means that your grades are poor. Then the question arises. How can an adult's mind be inactive for more than ten years after time travel and still not know how to study hard? Is it such a waste?

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After the protagonist is exposed to exoskeleton technology, the book is useless and the protagonist is sent to the battlefield. It is simply rubbing the reader's IQ on the ground. If super scientists go to the battlefield, the country will almost become extinct.

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This is the first time I have read a novel in so many years that Chapters 3 to 12 are all watery. What kind of novel should I write? Wouldn't it be good to sell water?

I found that the author didn't say a word, and every time he complained, he had to give a deep explanation and introduce a piece of rubbish. No one on the author cares about this. You just need to get the settings and details right. It's too watery, and it's as boring as reading a textbook. You can write more than ten chapters about a physical quality that doesn't have much effect on the plot.

What kind of thing is the protagonist? The author wrote it as if he was disabled. Also, you even have the monster data of Tomorrow After. You have to stare at the person for 10 seconds to find the data. You have to watch the person move. Are you sure you are a system and not a scanner. You can make the exoskeleton a reality. You have to scan people to collect data. The scanner is faster than you. Also, the protagonist of Tomorrow and After will also be able to backtrack. And the protagonist has not concealed it at all. Isn't it impossible to see it at all? I saw more than 20 pictures

The writing is very good and has potential. I am waiting for your next book.

There is too much nonsense, and the plot of one chapter is turned into ten chapters. The desire to read that I finally brought up was completely washed away by the author's water escape!

If the performance of this book is not satisfactory, there is a reason. The first dozen chapters are all in a row. I seriously doubt that the author is too busy with the word count. Isn't it good to get into the main text quickly and develop the plot while interspersing the setting? ?