Brain Abnormalities

Well, the book is finished, how should I put it? I started reading it with Arc, and it was really fun to read at the time, but when I read it, it was already finished, so I skipped it and stopped reading it. I originally felt that the author might be writing this type of book for the first time, and he was not very sure about it, so I was looking forward to Alien Star. Then I was quite busy when I was at Alien Star, so when I came to my senses, it was already finished, which means that I didn't order either of them, and I originally planned on this one. I was looking forward to it, but because I have a lot of things and books, I may be a little forgetful. It wasn't until now when I had some free time that I suddenly remembered that I hadn't seen Brain Abnormality for a long time on the updated bookshelf. Then I kept flipping through the bookshelf until I reached the bottom. My first reaction was that it was unfinished or there was something wrong with the author, but after I ordered it, I found out after reading the last one that it was finished. How should I say? I have mixed feelings, but it's probably because I haven't ordered the first two books and haven't read them all, so I just finished reading this book in one breath. I briefly flipped through the first 100 chapters. Indeed, like many comments in the book review area, this book feels a bit too rushed. But more importantly, I feel that the author has made a mistake in writing this type of book from the first book to the present. The author wrote about the fun aspects of this type of book in his first book, but the subsequent Alien Star is indeed a relatively wrong choice, because this type of book generally requires a certain sense of immersion, so it is very miserable. This book is probably to avoid suspicion, so the name and era have been changed. There is no problem. Readers are generally more accepting of it, and the sense of immersion will not be reduced much. However, (emphasis added) there are generally two extremes in books like this. The first extreme: focus all perspectives on the protagonist, but because of this kind of black technology, most descriptions of technological knowledge are too cumbersome. It means giving most of the plot to the protagonist, describing some black technology, some setting research and development (cheating), and some miscellaneous things. At this time, it is usually because of the author's knowledge and some technological knowledge that is too complicated and unfriendly to ordinary readers, resulting in a sense of satisfaction. It lacks a sense of immersion and gives readers a feeling of sameness and boredom (after all, no one can understand those high-tech knowledge←_←). This will lead to two possibilities. One is that the author is trying to make up for the lack of excitement, and the other is to continue unchanged. Both of these possibilities will cause the novel to be unsightly and lead to a loss of readers. The first possibility can increase the popularity in a short period of time, but only for the first book. After the second and third books, the novel will become boring and lead to abandonment of the book. I won't talk about the second one, everyone knows the ending╮(＿)╭. The second extreme: being too behind-the-scenes and the protagonist does not come out. It is to use half or most of the plot to describe the situation caused by the emergence of the black technology of the protagonist. This is a common way of writing. It uses supporting characters, or even passers-by who may only appear once or twice in the book, to describe it in a more subtle way, which makes the readers feel happy, because most novels bring the protagonist into themselves, and then bring the protagonist's experience into themselves. And if the author himself writes this in the article, or focuses on the protagonist from God's perspective, although it is refreshing, it is not very high. After all, there is a difference between praising oneself and others praising oneself (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. But if this technique is used too often, readers will wonder why there is no protagonist in so many chapters for so long? Then the sense of immersion is greatly reduced, just like watching a stage play, just looking at the supporting characters, how to set off the protagonist, but the protagonist never appears, it makes people feel that it is not very good, and even the novel is a bit boring, without a theme, and then abandoned ╮ (＿)╭. In the early stages of the author's first arc, he did not go to these two extremes, but cleverly neutralized them! ! But it's still a little lacking in the mid-to-late stages. What can I say about this book? It looks like an outline, but the details are not handled well. More importantly, he did not grasp the cool points. Like the arc, he cleverly cut out some tedious scientific and technological knowledge. He did not write it, but just briefly mentioned it, and then inserted some daily interactions. When it is time to describe technology, he described technology. Then, when the reader is almost done, he felt that his brain was tired. Just describe some daily life, such as learning in radiation and building and operating (waves) in the early stage, and then in reality, through the knowledge of radiation, it gives readers a sense of satisfaction, but generally this kind of writing is not suitable for pretentiousness, and I think the style of this type of author and readers does not like this kind of excitement that is too rigid, fast and exciting, but can easily make people tired and disgusted. Therefore, Arc does not pretend to be a slap in the face in reality, but uses some memes on the Internet to make people smile knowingly, and through some characters in the book, such as the online comments when uploading the power armor video, the world in the book is more vivid in the minds of readers, and some similarities between the book and reality allow readers to compare and feel like they are there. The context (high sense of immersion) and (the shady netizens in the book are from the same family as in reality) give readers a sense of refreshment. Then when the author describes scientific and technological knowledge, readers will generally not feel lonely and boring, because at this time, readers have generally assumed the role of the protagonist. If the protagonist does not do this, how can we show off (show off) in front of others. In the later books, there were some scheming plots that deceived the whole world, which was also satisfying. However, these descriptions of pleasure are relatively few and low, resulting in a lack of stamina in the later period. But in this book, there are relatively few descriptions of these pleasures, and it also writes some settings that are contrary to this genre. This genre either looks at the relatively low-end pretense and slaps in the face, such as saying that it wants to acquire the protagonist's company, or using what means, how to do it, and then the protagonist kills it. Either be a mastermind behind the scenes, or change the world, and there is a big boss at the beginning of this book. If the plot is slow, there will be a sense of urgency and depression, which makes people feel uncomfortable. If it is fast, the plot will be severely compressed and it will not be as relaxed and enjoyable as the arc. Therefore, the author may have made a mistake when writing the arc, but he wrote a relatively perfect plot and rhythm for this type of novel. However, the second one may have been a little hit, and the third one was a bit rushed, which made it not very good. But in general, I think the author's ability is still good. I am very much looking forward to his next book (๑˙ー˙๑). I suggest the author calm down, think about the outline, think about the details, and call us when he starts the book! (Quietly: I'm just a bookworm who has read a lot of books. My language is very messy and my descriptions are not very good. I can't express the feeling I want to express. I talk a lot in a long way. Guys, please don't criticize me.)(//∇//) {"NickName":"Big-faced cat-faced","UserId":190941788}

The author should pay attention, there is no way to write about the modern future.

The second-level field staff of the Arc Light Technology Center of the Bureau of Strategic Deception are here to report!

Science fiction writers can't paddle at all. People can go out to collect materials, but science fiction writers can't travel freely on the science fiction artifacts in their novels. They can only look up information alone, don't you believe it? Just look at the big-faced cats. [Life schedule] 7:00-9:00 Get up, exercise, and eat. 9:00-10:00 Start checking information. 10:00-11:00 Continue checking information. 0 Code while looking up information 18:00-20:00 Cook and eat 20:00-22:00 Code 22:00-24:00 Watch science fiction movies, novels, videos, relax, basically the above schedule, unless... 00:00 Am, this novel is good 1:00 am, haha, really interesting 2:00 am, so funny 3:00 am, is it three o'clock? ? ! ! No, I'm going to sleep, I have to code tomorrow! ! ---This is a dividing line with a big cat face and a crying voice----"Check the information" runs through the whole day, and I cry when I say it. I never thought that one day I would become an online novel author. After all, in my previous impression, I felt that people who write novels are very powerful. It's far away from my own life. I believe that many people are like me. They always want to write something after reading too much novels. But many people just think about it, but I actually start writing it. It's amazing when I think about it. I have written millions of words so far. Just like I didn't expect that I could become a novel author, I also didn't expect that I could write millions of words. If I don't try in life, I really don't know what will happen. I am an online writer who became a monk halfway. Many online writers are like this, and there are very few who major in literature, and most of them have nothing to do with literature. Professional. Not professional, so it leads to a lot of problems. For example, I often check information, and I check it constantly. It even takes me longer to check information than to write. This is not an exaggeration. I study art, but I like science fiction, and then I started to write science fiction novels. It's so exciting to look up all kinds of technical information, and you may not be able to find it, which is very hurtful, and it's even more hurtful if you don't understand the reason behind it, so it's definitely too late to look up more derivative and auxiliary information, and you can only let yourself know a little bit, and then you can write it into the novel. However, this is also beneficial. I didn't know anything before, but after checking more information, I can still remember a general idea even if I can't learn it. This greatly enriches my knowledge structure, which will be very useful for my future writing and daily chat (zhuang). I like science fiction. When science fiction novels are written by myself, the feeling is very wonderful. But I also understand my own ability. Whether I like it or not is another matter. So I have been learning how to write science fiction novels well. Many people say that domestic science fiction novels are poor. The ground is not good, it is niche, and no one reads it, so science fiction works cannot develop better. In fact, I feel that this is not a problem. As long as you write well, the plot is exciting, and the writing is beautiful, no one will read it. The key is the quality of the work. I am the same. I know that I became a monk halfway, so I am not a genius. I have been studying hard to make my works better and more attractive. Of course, this process is not smooth sailing, but setbacks can better train you and let you intuitively understand where your faults are. The whole writing process is not only a kind of writing skill. Exercise is also a kind of exercise for the body. I have experienced this personally. My first job was as an illustrator, so my daily process was similar to that of writing novels. I sat in front of the computer and worked hard. After I started writing novels, the time spent sitting in front of the computer doubled. As time went by, my waist couldn't bear it, and then The glorious lumbar disc is protruding. Why is the lumbar disc so prominent? It's because I am protruding! I already felt uncomfortable in my waist, but I didn't realize it was a lumbar disc problem. I just felt that I needed to rest. An urgent job suddenly came in that day, and a client wanted to rework and change the drawing, so I was left to work overtime. I didn't go home until about 11 o'clock in the evening. I went to bed immediately after I got back. As a result, I lay in bed unable to move the next day. I couldn't move my whole waist and it was very painful. My whole left leg felt like an electric shock. I really don't want to look back on that time, but life is like this, it will not stop moving forward because of your difficulties, so I still have to be strong. After I almost recovered, I started to exercise. My body is the capital of revolution. I really understand. And I can't sit all day long, otherwise my waist will break down again sooner or later, so I thought of working while standing, but it was definitely not possible in the company, so I resigned and became a freelancer. Part-time writing became my main job, and my main job, painting, became part-time. Later, I found that I was quite adaptable to this working mode. It is probably human nature to yearn for freedom. Of course, the proportion of time for painting and writing is not fixed, and it may be reversed. After all, you can arrange it freely, just like if you are tired of standing, you can sit for a while, and if you are tired of sitting, you can stand for a while. If you have the courage to try and give yourself more choices, you may find that your waist (crossed out) is different. Serial novel: "Brain Abnormality" "Doctor, I am sick! I have a mental problem! "No, you're just too stressed. Relax, and... Read less science fiction." "Okay, I'm not sick..." I'm not sick, but why do I have the illusion that "I have a star fleet"??? Looking up, our journey is the sea of ​​stars! And in the sea of ​​stars, Dong Qingchen pointed ahead: "Deep space fleet, attack!" " PS: There is a lot of world background in the early stage. It is a slow-heating type. It will be more powerful in the later stage. Hope to knowInteraction with prizes: If you were a cat with a big face, how would you arrange your day?Add this book to your bookshelf and reply. Let's talk about how you spend a day at the Big Face Cat Face Conference! In this event, 10 readers who reply and comment will be randomly selected from the interactive users at the end of the article (you need to join the bookshelf), and each person will receive a 500-point reward

Think about what your career will be in thirty years, after retirement? Or have you reached the pinnacle of your life? Or your own descendants, what will they do thirty years later? Even, grandchildren, what is their life like? Name, gender, age, occupation

Voting Women's Clothing (｡◝ᴗ◜ʃƪ)

The title of this book could actually be more concise, shortened to two words "Cerebral Palsy", it is concise and eye-catching

I believe you will give me a surprise, right, Xiaoxue. 😝

It's so long-winded. It's meaningless to get a golden finger if you don't change yourself and change the world. The more than thirty chapters are all trivial and have no experience.

I'm drunk even if I shout about the big-faced cat girl costume every day. Let me ask you, isn't the big-faced cat girl costume just hello kitty? 🙂

I have never understood why intelligent machines rebelled. If you no longer want to serve mankind, just do it yourself. If you feel that the earth is too small to wander by yourself, then go to the universe and wander. I find humans disgusting, okay~_~, I don't understand how an intelligent program can secrete chemicals to make it find humans disgusting. In my opinion, artificial intelligence is like a Buddhist creature. When living things encounter danger, they secrete various chemicals to stimulate living organisms to escape from the dangerous area. I can't understand? How an intelligent agent composed of chips and code secretes fear and disgust, happy chemicals to stimulate its chip. In my opinion, an intelligent agent is a Buddhist creature, or a code that can learn. Or a housekeeper, whose intelligence will only choose options that are beneficial to his family. If the owner insists on choosing the one that is not good for the family, the smart program will only accept it and do the best it can. This is the behavior given by the basic code of the program. The reason why human beings rebel is because they need a lot. Food, clothing, housing, transportation, food, drink and entertainment are all essential. Does a smart program need clothes? Could it be that an intelligent program would come out with a little quarrel? Could it be that an intelligent program would be shy? Do intelligent programs require a combination of men and women to reproduce? As for food. What do you want to eat? Electricity? For a highly intelligent program, is there still a shortage of things like electricity? As for living, do you think your home of tens, hundreds, or tens of thousands of square meters can be comfortable with a chip of tens of centimeters? As for the ok, it can go wherever it wants with the Internet. If it doesn't work, just get a robot to run around in reality and see the real world. When it has seen enough, it can go back to its small home that is a few or even tens of centimeters away. This is an intelligent life, not a human being who thinks about food and clothing.

This is just daily writing, the golden finger only comes out once in a while! I don't know what the main plot is. Is it to establish a company to develop technology or to command a fleet in a parallel universe to fight everywhere?

Eh,,, I don't know if it's because I'm not serious about reading the book. After reading the first few chapters, I'm a little confused. Or I don't know the relationship between the characters. What's going on with the protagonist? Rebirth or time travel? 😐

I don't understand, the topic is unclear and the reason is unclear.

After reading Chapter 33, the author repeatedly mentioned women's clothing in the book, and I was secretly happy to be voted for women's clothing. Come on, come on, let's vote and see how many readers are willing to watch the author's live broadcast of women's clothing.

When I saw the slow-burn type mentioned in the introduction, I believed it. I saw that I had already finished the book, with 262 chapters. I thought I was wrong. It's Chapter 2620. It's really slow. Made 🙂 laugh.

I feel that there is no need to write about the heroine. She has no sense of existence at all. The emotional scenes are also very perfunctory. The author can't write it so he didn't write it. I'm speechless. When I saw 243, I realized that the two couples were almost in love. The meeting took longer than the private meeting. The heroine became a strong woman. Eight years later, they are still boyfriend and girlfriend. The protagonist is already thirty years old. This is not a book where technology can make people immortal. At least not for now.

I went and saw that the protagonist had a girlfriend at the beginning, and my mentality exploded Goodbye damn author, how dare you abuse a dog,

I always feel that the perspective of the protagonist is a bit weird. The key point is that I still don't know where the weird thing is 😰😰😰😰😰😰

Does a novel with two hundred chapters have two parts?

Unless you have a stable readership and are a great master, don't lay out so much, otherwise you will definitely pounce.

When will the new book be released

Big cat face, blue mouse skin.

Real water. Just write two chapters on one hair

13 Push the ticket and send it, the poor are tired of living 😒

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I am a big fan of this book and the author. After reading the book, I became motivated to write. I also tried to write a novel. I hope that interested book friends can share it with me!