The Witcher: Lord of the Elements

Brainless villain, brainless protagonist, brainless conflict

Fantasy writing routines wrapped in the shell of wizard writing

It's a slow-burning article, and the writing is really good. After reading books for so many years, there are only a few books on the bookshelf, and this one is not one of them. I really don't want such a good book to be buried. I suggest the author find a popular book list to promote it, even if it costs a little money? As long as there are old bookworms reading this book, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. Come on, author.

The plot is a bit repetitive. You always offend some people when you first come, make friends with some people, then slap some people in the face, and finally change places. I watched it very seriously at first, but then I knew the content just by looking at the table of contents.

I really can't stand it anymore. It's been four chapters and the main character still looks like a dog. The golden finger is also given by a dog. If you like writing about abusive masters, please change the channel.

The books at the top of the rankings, no matter how good their scores are, seem to be too peaceful and hard to read. Every time I look for a book, I start from around the 20th place. Is there anyone like me? But the results of those great masters are really good, and I always feel that my preferences are different from those of the public.

I take back what I said before. There is a reason why this novel is not popular. The characters are too stereotyped. The supporting characters are like idiots, crazy and provocative, and look down on the protagonist. Even though they know that the protagonist is a pharmacist who is higher than themselves, the level is not low, and they have a backstage like them, they still look down on it crazily, from low level to high level.

There is something wrong with Qidian's system, and many good books have been buried. Nowadays, a lot of it is fast-food literature, with only one word for "pleasure".

After reading Chapter 30, I really couldn't hold on anymore. The plot of a gangster and a steward can be passed in just a few chapters, but I added another drama. He was a city guard and a police station officer. In the end, he forced his way into the blacksmith shop to arrest someone for a few gold coins. It was really ****

Jasmine, who I always thought was the heroine, was given away directly. I just said 500,000 yuan to cancel the contract and follow the hero, and then she became someone else's wife. Did you forget the plot you wrote before and just didn't change it? The preface and subtitles of the plot don't match the plot, and he died of poison on the spot. I was really taken aback.

You know why it's not popular anymore

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that the plot is a bit deliberate. It might be better to just farm honestly, but the result is the traditional way of annihilating the family and escaping. In this mode, there are not only 800 novels at the beginning, but also a thousand novels. If you look for any one, you will have some persistence at the beginning, and the protagonist will be killed by a strong enemy and change the map incognito. Conflicts are too deliberate 1. I said that the miners were honest and would not resist in all situations, but the protagonist started to resist. The reason was because he had seen an enlightenment? He had heard this before. Obviously, just pretending to be filial every day and that's it. Everyone is good to each other. The worst thing to do is just take the lead and become a dog-legger. Isn't it more interesting than this old-fashioned conflict? 2. I said that if you have money, you can move safely, but if you don't move, you just have to fight with others. Think about it, everyone knows that wealth should not be exposed. A kid who is rich can't live in crowded places and prefers places where no one cares about him. What about fishing? ? ? Isn't this about being robbed? Without this Otto, what Austrian 1, 2.3.4 Will not pop up? ? ? Without the plug-in, isn't this a kneeling start? When it was over, he said that he was forced to resist and was forced to wander. To sum up, the protagonist's personality and moral character are not suitable, and he just wants to make things happen if he has some ability. Without the dog trap, how many episodes can the protagonist survive?

The protagonist or the author always thinks with his lower body. He kills the men and feeds them to the dogs. It's really outrageous that he can't walk when he sees a woman. I suggest that the author don't write if he doesn't know how to write a female character. It's really uncomfortable.

It's really hard to write this book, so I wish you good luck.

Well, the author finally signed the contract, it's not easy😱

What the hell, I read the beginning, don't move if you have money, forcefully create conflicts, fail to fight against drugs...!

The reading experience after opening the first chapter of the book is very poor. The author Xihuanwen obviously did not do his homework. The place name is very strange, Western place name + XX County, the aunt selling breakfast. . . A Western fantasy story, an Eastern style of writing, and an extremely childish writing style. Isn't the author a high school student? Retreat first. . .

From what I can tell from this book, wherever the protagonist goes, there will be a bunch of people sitting on his head and lining up to shit.

The author is really afraid that many people will read it. To be honest, can a child from a slum understand this? Think about the children in Syria, Africa? Do they really know everything and dare to kill people? How can such a simple protagonist of yours survive in the slums? There must be a limit to suppressing the protagonist. Excessive sexual desire is poison. You are so poisonous that you can be chased by others every day. Why don't you kill people and wait for revenge after beating them and maiming them? If you cripple someone and you don't have revenge, then what is revenge? The protagonist of the original story you wrote didn't travel through time and why did he become such a virgin? What's the point of reading about being bullied every day? Reading novels is just to entertain you and add to your reading.

This book doesn't say how good it is in the middle and later stages. At least he abuses the master at the beginning, which is a taboo at the beginning. Another male protagonist has a sense of non-travel immersion that was already poor at the beginning and even abused the protagonist. So it is normal to have poor grades at the starting point.

I have read more than 200 chapters and feel that it is well written. The disadvantage is that the protagonist is a bit bitter. Always being suppressed and robbed by all kinds of unsighted people. What I am most uncomfortable with is that potions are only effective if they are at a higher level. A level 1 wizard requires a level 2 spiritual potion, and a level 2 wizard requires a level 3 potion! Isn't it tiring to set it up like this? It feels like the level of the potion has been forcibly raised one level. 😁😁😁 Overall, it is watchable. There's no such thing as too much poison.

What a pity The highlight of the wizarding genre is mystery and power, but you haven't touched any of it.

😰 The author just wrote it blindly. At the beginning, he said that a country has single digits at level 7, and then there are a lot of single digits at level 7, and then he said single digits at level 9, and a lot more appeared. . .

The writing is okay, at least it's easy to read, but the supporting characters are not so good. After reading over a hundred chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

Nothing else matters. This is a typo. Another word. Too many missing words. It has reached the point where it affects reading. Will there be improvements in the future? If so, I'll keep watching. If not, I'll give up. Please tell old readers.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

The first thirty chapters describe how the protagonist is bullied

The author does not understand the wizard style and is relatively layman

Flowing literature, Chapter 100: Poisonous Hair

The last three rows may be more imposing in the author's eyes, but my point of view is that it is better to write them normally.