Secret Church

This book cannot be said to be bad, the writing is logical and the author is very careful in writing. I don't know why, but it feels like something is missing, which makes it unpleasant to read. The pig's feet in the first 98 chapters seem to be awesome, but in fact they describe an ordinary young man in society. The change of mentality can be said to be slow, which makes the pig's feet not eye-catching enough. And there are some seemingly complicated plots set up later. The author neglects one thing, the sense of substitution. The world view is not shown, this thing is a bit complicated. Generally speaking, people's books start from simple to deep, for example, you learn a skill, and through the plot of fighting monsters, you show the ability of the pig's feet and the characteristics of the monsters, and strengthen the world view. There is no such book, and the purification of pig's feet is of little use. Without the ability, the plot suddenly rises to a higher level, similar to the conspiracy of a game within a game.

Due to work reasons and not changing the contract status some time ago, the book's performance was not good, which made me feel a little impatient. When I wrote the book, I always felt that something was wrong. After analysis by readers, I found the reason and revised more than ten chapters, adding some plots. At the same time, I also changed the psychological growth of the male protagonist so that it would not be unnaturally fast. If you have any questions, readers are welcome to correct them. To be honest, I re-conceived it in two days and revised more than a dozen chapters. My hands are sore and I feel like vomiting Readers are my God and the compass I have written. If you have any dissatisfaction or other questions, feel free to comment.

Regarding the issue of listing, I will wait until the end of the first volume if possible. After all, the first volume is mainly about the plot of the male protagonist being promoted to the priesthood. The male protagonist without strength is struggling on the edge, and the world view and structure are not big. After all, what kind of strength can you communicate with what level of groups. After the male protagonist officially enters the priesthood, he will officially enter the extraordinary world. The world view, various churches, powerful extraordinary people, and terrifying monsters will all come at that time. I also hope that all readers will like it. After all, compared to tradition, I am more inclined to social reality - how much you can do what you can do. Also, success and strength are hard-won. It is impossible to become stronger without peeling off two layers of skin.

The author should change the introduction. The word God of Light will scare away countless people.

What is this? Learn from the Lord of Mysteries? I didn't read it carefully, but I felt there was something wrong with the character dialogue. Western fantasy even claims to be old-fashioned, and it looks awkward.

Blake (blackened state)

No matter how many people read the title of the book and thought the protagonist was a villain, a cultist, or an evil god

Becoming a god, I don't even want to be the protagonist, I'm saying it's good now, waste, Diaosi, time travel, or Diaosi, a poisonous novel

I hope all readers and bosses like it 😁

You have been recommending, collecting, and preparing the single update plan, but I am embarrassed to implement it, so I started to double update every day.

The writing is good, keep it on your bookshelf and read it slowly.

It's a bit like a mysterious opening. The writing is okay.

After reading the first few chapters, in fact, there should be more conflict from the beginning, so that it will be more attractive to read. If I were to write it, the protagonist would be directly reported after being turned into a living corpse, and then start a battle royale. It would feel good, Yazi.

Congratulations on signing the contract 😁

This is so good, why is the number of fans so poor?

The current progress is Chapter 83 (where the author is enjoying himself). To be honest, the whole plot is very reasonable until the protagonist turns black. However, when it comes to the hypnosis section, the whole plot becomes inexplicable. It doesn't matter if "one of your own" really does something substantial harm to the protagonist. In fact, everything that happens from beginning to end is reasonable. The protagonist gives the impression that he is a giant baby in the late stages of persecution and paranoia who grew up in a textbook model family. Whenever something goes wrong, he feels like someone is persecuting him. And it's as if they can no longer listen to their leaders' work assignments, and they don't need to listen to their parents' words. Of course, this is a bit venomous, but what I feel here is that what is happening currently is not enough to be the driving force for the protagonist's darkening. This darkening is forcibly given by the author to promote the plot. If this part of the conversation with the library director was spoken by the protagonist himself, then it would be reasonable for the protagonist to have a mental breakdown. However, this was said by the Deceiver Vestment, and it would be even more inexplicable for the protagonist to turn dark. Anyway, the feeling I have now is that if the Deceitful Vestment reverses in the later stage, then this plot will be considered reasonable. If the Deceiver Vestment is really just a plot tool, a plug-in exclusive to the protagonist, then this plot is definitely a failure. But overall the quality is pretty good and it's worth reading on. I hope there won't be such baffling things later.

It looks good. Let's take it together. Come on!

It was released on February 20, and it only has over 400,000 words? 😂😂😂😂

I've fallen into a trap. Aaaaaaa 🙂 looks good (○｀ε´○). It tastes like that

I hope the author can arrange something like rkg later

Can you tell me about the protagonist's camp, or what kind of person the protagonist is?

So far, it's okay. Some of the plots may not be to the mainstream's taste, but I really like this kind of realistic writing. Big boost for the author!

What's going on? After not paying attention for a while, he became a eunuch?

Why do we need eunuchs? This book is very nice

This looks like a mysterious fictional novel

So-so is okay, but now it seems that the map is too small.

I didn't expect that a zero krypton player like me could be ranked fourth 🤔