Bleach: Rhapsody of the Hollows

I'm disgusted. This is Bleach, Hueco Mundo is such a despairing place, and Hollows are such despairing creatures, yet you've written them as comedies.

When characters from other works appear in a story without a clear explanation of their origins, and when a lot of unnecessary settings are used, the story loses its appeal for readers looking for a good Bleach fanfiction.

I think the ultimate evolution of the virtual is to find the missing inner self, complete oneself, and become a whole.

Personally, I don't think it looks good.

Just focus on writing well; once the Bleach: Thousand-Year Blood War arc anime comes out, this novel will have no shortage of viewers.

Here's some information for the author: Aizen's Bankai appeared in an officially licensed Bleach game called "Wind and Water Binding." Its ability allows Aizen to transform his spiritual particles into wind and water-like forms and integrate them into the environment. Anyone entering a space corrupted by Aizen will have their five senses controlled. In other words, his Bankai compensates for the Shikai's weakness of needing to be seen to hypnotize, while also increasing its effective range.

Take off directly 😏

Whether you write about merging the soul of a time traveler or not, if you kill the time traveler off the spot, many people won't want to read it because they can't relate to the story. This will lose you a portion of your audience.

I was drawn in by the Grim Reaper, and so far it's been pretty good. The author has also thoughtfully referenced works outside of manga.

A major taboo in fan fiction is writing about the original work in paid chapters.