I Lay Low for Ten Years, So How Did I Become a Navy Admiral?

How about writing a Shaman King story with a Heroic Spirit system? How about a title like, "I'm a Heroic Spirit, but I Don't Want to Be the Shaman King; Instead, I Want to Be Brothers with Hao Asakura—Do You Like This Kind of Protagonist?" 😘

Devil Fruits don't regenerate onto the most recent fruit; it's a matter of chance, not a 100% guarantee. Otherwise, everyone in Impel Down would have died long ago.

Damn, your underling beat up a Celestial Dragon and still got promoted to Vice Admiral 👍

Let's congratulate Cherry on becoming a eunuch!

I'll let it go if I can't beat Dover the first time, but if I don't kill him the second time, I'll stop subscribing. After all, Dover was determined to kill the protagonist from the very first meeting.

Personally, I don't think there's any point in writing One Piece fanfiction if the main character doesn't eat Devil Fruits.

Why not unleash full power at Marineford and cause a cataclysmic destruction? Wouldn't it have been better to accumulate merit while everyone else was slacking off and become the next Fleet Admiral? There are so many more things you can do as a Fleet Admiral than if you left the Navy! Seriously speechless. 😓

Among the books I've read, the pacing isn't too slow. Everyone says the pacing is slow, probably because most novels nowadays are very fast-paced; some even take off like a rocket. I once read an infinite flow novel where each world had two or three hundred chapters. 🤔

The subject matter and writing style are both good, but some parts are indeed not very rigorous. For example, even the rat himself doesn't know the Six Powers, so where does the density come from? And even a scoundrel like the rat has the Six Powers manual? If that were true, it would have been widely known long ago. I still think oral transmission is more reliable.

A colonel from a branch office in the East Blue could embezzle billions in that remote area? You probably don't know how many pirate crews and merchant ships Nami stole from for a mere 100 million? You really think 100 million isn't much, let alone billions? Doflamingo's highest bounty on Luffy's crew was only 500 million.