Pirate's Refreshing Crystal

Taking the navy route, you still dare to write an innocent and funny type. It is not a dark intelligence, or it has its own principles of justice. It is difficult to write by borrowing the shell of the navy to lay eggs. Moreover, the female character of yours is very abrupt. I know it is to add character to the protagonist's ship. , I don't know what I thought it was, there is no love atmosphere at all. The heroine of this kind of book also has a female chasing a male. I don't know because the protagonist is funny, or the male chasing the female should be bolder. It's hard to imagine that Luffy would be so shy with the Empress. I'll just bully the author and give it a try.

With a normal height, among the strong men in the pirate world, he would be considered a dwarf 🤔

The protagonist's upgrade is so slow, and the protagonist's attitude towards the protagonist group, could it be that he was just a dog licker in his previous life? This kind of love for no reason in the real world is really fake. He deliberately sent the protagonist to Windmill Village for no reason, just so that he could lick the tolls and shit openly? And the protagonist is really speechless, is he completely brainless? It feels like the writing is completely mindless. Even if you look at the comics, the big characters look like they are funny, but do you think it is possible in the real world? The protagonist has no strategy at all, and he doesn't have the combat power of a general to defeat Brother Ming. Aren't you embarrassed? Isn't it true that your father has to wait for the so-called protagonist group to go to sea? The protagonist can have a general with combat power for fun? This kind of purpose is too obvious and boring to watch.

Grand Prize Comment: The protagonist has the strength of a lieutenant general and then gets beaten by a supernova. It's outrageous. Even if you win in the end, it's still very strange. The average supernova is a quasi-general?

The protagonist has practiced oral skills very well, and it makes Ace feel so good to be licked. I really don't understand what a marine is doing to teach a pirate how to do Haki and develop fruits.

The previous writing was okay, but I skipped the chapters about going to Windmill Village because the titles felt toxic. I originally thought that it would just be those chapters where I had some friendship with Luffy and the others, but it turned out that everything I wrote these days was nothing! The protagonist is a navy! He left his station in the new world alone and let his men face the pirates in the new world alone. With his high-end combat power, he went to the front and became a pirate nanny! Don't be a navy man, just rebel, go on a spaceship and become a pirate! If I laugh about your behavior, I won't be able to stand by you anymore. I've basically lost one-third of my popularity in the Navy. Even if I don't say it openly, I'll be unhappy with you secretly, which makes me angry😡

That's too fake. I cleaned a base and got +2000 power? , He also accelerated and ran 2 kilometers without losing breath, and finally he was able to carry people on his back. Just grab any college student and show him around, don't back him up. Carry a 20kg load on your back. And perseverance, which is the product of a monster's hard training. It's even the first day of training, and your perseverance is off the charts. With this perseverance, the country needs you to participate in the Olympics. There is no exercise that can't make you the best.

Author, you are going too far. Officially, it seems that all the generals and the four emperors have the same combat power. Except for Whitebeard, who is the strongest, he may be a little stronger than the general, and it cannot be said that he is much stronger. Life or death may be a matter of life. In the latest chapter, you said that the protagonist and a general have a 50-year-old relationship, and they are still much stronger than the general? I think you have eaten too much gold. Forget about those people who boasted that the protagonist, who was a quasi-general in the beginning, is as powerful as some so-called supernovas (you're talking about the pirates), why do you insist on boasting that the Yonko is higher than the Yonko now that the protagonist is at the ceiling level? Stop boasting about the Yonko. Garp must dare to say that an anime can kill the red dog with just a few words? Just kidding, in a real fight, who will die? Officially, your Garp will not become weaker due to age, but it does not mean that you will be as good as young people in terms of physical strength and endurance. You may be stronger than others in certain aspects, but it does not mean that you are stronger than others in everything. Otherwise, the Navy will directly send cards. The world is full of pirates and the emperor has been captured. The definition of pirate strength is not that big. Anyway, those who have reached the level of generals are basically about the same strength. It is normal to have three views. It is impossible for the navy or pirates to be strong or weak. Before you came out of the Yonko, what about the Rocks era and the era he mentioned above? Why did you wipe out all the pirates without seeing them? Corruption in world politics is also a problem, but it definitely shows that this level is really not about anyone being stronger than others just because you say it.

Wearing? Just based on the number of viruses you carry, are you trying to exterminate the creatures in the pirate world?

With all due respect, I won't even read the pirate novel about Ace's Immortal Shakou.

It's pretty good to watch, but in the world of pirates, I still prefer eating devil fruits. It doesn't matter if there are no side effects. It's mainly about feelings, and you can also see the imagination of others (the author).

I was so embarrassed when I saw the protagonist giving the Devil Fruit that he stole from Draco to his subordinates. Did he really not want to hide that it was the protagonist who stole it? Can't it be absorbed directly? Give it back to the protagonist's subordinates. If this were to happen in the real world, I'm afraid those subordinates would think you wanted to kill him.

Armed color Haki is the body, knowledge color Haki is the spirit, Overlord color Haki is the soul

There are no rubbish abilities, only rubbish people. The everyone who has the ability to eat the Straw Hats' fruit. Just like the King of Glory, as long as you choose Yao, you can choose any warrior to kill with one hand

The navy is pretty good, I'm a Pirates fan. I've always watched Pirates. I've seen enough, but I feel like the plug-ins are a bit weak and not exciting enough.

Hart appears in too many scenes, and the protagonist even buys fruits for him. The Draco fruits he grabs are given to the people around him, including the navy. You are really smart. Can't you use evolutionary plug-ins? Or do you think you are strong enough?

A marine hands over a pirate's Haki and fruit development, and then he goes to kill your fellow marines? Forehead? You are a time traveler. Since you are already a character in the plot, why do you still like Luffy or Ace? Isn't it childish? They have a lot of naval lives on their hands, right? What will happen if one day they accidentally kill your fellow marines with the life you gave them? Regarding your position, I saw the navy ignore the protagonist at the beginning, but I never saw him licking it. I can't stand it.

I find that the author's sense of distance is always bad. A sniper's shooting distance is 10 meters. When fighting pirates, you can only see the pirate flag on the other side clearly when the pirate ship is 5 meters away from your own ship. Then, when this distance is reached, bombardment and shooting are prepared. I can jump six meters in a running jump. Needless to say, the pirates in the One Piece world can jump over and fight hand to hand.