I Practice Breathing in Konoha

It would be interesting if you don't get involved with Naruto, otherwise there will be too many loopholes. Who can really play with Naruto? They are all children of wealthy families. If civilians get close to them, they will die.

I thought I was training in Naruto, but it turned out that I was still a Kryptonian warrior and slipped away.

It's a pretty good Naruto fanfic, relatively realistic. Many authors of Naruto fanfiction have chakra settings that are not used in Naruto. The author of this book basically restored the original work and added his own opinions.

Damn it, all the immortal cultivation techniques given to you by the Hokage are useless. It took Naruto 4 to 5 years from graduation to the ending. You can practice them and see which immortal cultivation techniques can be cultivated from a mortal to a planetary level in 4.5 Years.

Dude, do your research. What articles do you like to read? 1 Harem story 2 Pure love story 3 Harem pure love story. Just put the number below if you want it.

I've read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, and to summarize, from the time the protagonist is able to practice normally to the ending of the novel, those who are more than 20 years away from the ending can play the leveling stream, those who are 10-20 years away from the ending, and have the Byakugan or Sharingan, can play the leveling stream, and those who are within 10 years away from the ending must cheat.

The work is good, thank you to the author

You can watch it before entering the ANBU. There are many bright spots and the logic is self-consistent. But after entering the ANBU, you can't watch it. Let's not mention that the ANBU and the root are two departments. According to the author's setting, the root merged into the ANBU after Danzo failed. This is quite outrageous. I suggest the author read the original work. Then, since the setting is that the root merges into the ANBU, is the ANBU the main one? Is it possible that the main ANBU will not be allowed to go home? I wonder if we are watching a Naruto

If the third generation really wanted to cultivate an heir, then White Fang wouldn't have to die. After all, he just wanted a puppet.

Can the sealed class also be disbanded? If you have the ability, you can figure it out. It's like the tailed beasts follow the Jinchuriki voluntarily. In addition, the barrier is also a sealing technique. If there is no barrier, wouldn't the Ninja Village be like a sieve leaking air?

A very good book called Naruto, but it was completely ruined by the update.

There are too many things going on in Pig's Feet's mind, and he feels like he has no independent opinion and is just drifting with the crowd. I have no desire to read anymore.

He's in the same class as Nazuo, so there's basically no way he can escape from the original work. There is too little time left for the protagonist. The original work ended when Nazuo was 16 years old. Unless he is in the same class as Nazuo, he is one of those who has a shadow level in one year and a six-level level in three years. Otherwise, you can basically just do it every day and make soy sauce.

Brother, it's not easy to start directly from Naruto-san. Because of Naruto's cheating, he went from Genin to Six Paths around 7-9 years. Generally, writing forward can accumulate strength for the protagonist. Otherwise, the cheating of Naruto in seven or eight years will be too big, and readers will not adapt to it. It has been written like this before, but the effect is so-so My personal opinion above, please don't criticize me.

After entering ANBU, there wasn't much to see. . .

Even if you say it's time travel, you can't tell what it looks like. If you say it's not, what you wrote is, are you one body and two souls in terms of inner activities?

New author? Generally, those who crazily mix in personal information in the first chapter are basically new authors. 😥You don't even know the requirements for a basic online article writer. You won't be able to persist for long if you just write on a whim.

I will open a separate book, Since this is the first book, it is difficult to avoid the poisonous points, so I hope you can tell me the poisonous points here in the simplest terms, and I will change it without affecting the outline. Thank you all.

The update speed of a novel has a great relationship with the results. If the author wants good results, he still has to increase the update speed.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I probably have an idea.

After just reading a few dozen chapters, I wanted to know what was going on with the protagonist, Ino, and Hinata. He was an adult, so he should be happy with his feelings. He was a commoner, and he was still entangled with Hinata, a girl from the mountain. Do you want two girls and one husband? Can Hinata and Yamanaka afford this man, or is this girl willing?

I kept writing and writing again and again into the theory of bloodline! You can skip the early stages of Naruto! Too many bugs! For example: Class 7 leaves the village for the first time to do a mission! Encountered Zabuza! With Kakashi being accused, Zabuza's clone will fight Team 7! Why not use a knife? What is the use of such a big knife in your hand? Aren't ninjas all about killing with one hit? Pay attention to speed, accuracy and ruthlessness!

I really like the author's additions to the setting, and I also like the protagonist who gradually becomes stronger. I just hope there are no chapter deletions.

When I saw the Chuunin Exam, I found it too cliché, almost indistinguishable from the original work. It was copied directly from the official novel, and a paragraph about the protagonist was inserted in the middle... Moreover, the beginning of the article was exactly the same as the end of the previous chapter, and the beginning of the next chapter directly recounted the end of the previous chapter, and it was the noble water - the mineral water of Baisui Mountain.

Alas, looking at the author's long paragraphs of background analysis, I am simply being discouraged! Brother, this is a novel, not a paper. People don't want you to analyze the nature of the Naruto world, how civilian ninjas survive, and the relationship between ninjutsu and technology... It's not that you can't write it. You express too many personal opinions and too many personal things, but the storyline does not occupy the main position. This is a novel. You may think it is well written and makes sense, but it is all for your own enjoyment. Others will find it unattractive when they read it. You may think it is too watery and the plot is too little.

Why would someone travel through time and play Naruto? Picture what? A person who has never had enough to eat and no one to take care of him since he was a child. His true image is that he has yellow hair, a sallow complexion, is dirty all over his body, and his clothes are shabby. Don't think it's strange. If it weren't for the Uzumaki bloodline, someone else would have died long ago. Such a dirty, skinny monkey with a beard on his face, uneducated and stupid, what are you trying to do with him? Tugen department door-to-door service?

After reading a few chapters, I felt like the plot kept jumping around and was incoherent.

Well, I read a few chapters. The author added a lot of personal stuff to the book, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. Generally speaking, it is above the standard. If you like it, you can read it.

Why is Lao Quezhang, 88--91, the one in the middle, eaten?

It was very well written before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, it wasn't that delicious. It didn't meet my expectations, and that's just for me.