Injustice Superman Starts with Marvel

#Great reviews and some of my personal recommendations! ! ! This is what a protagonist should be like, high-spirited and strong-willed; aboveboard and unpretentious, with the most basic moral values. It's not as insensitive as other novels written about Invincible American comics. The protagonists in those novels are very stupid in terms of character design. They hide here and there like a mouse. They are afraid that others will know their identity. They keep saying that they don't want to care about this or that. When something happens, they will be the first to jump out and show off. (Recently, I have found several American comic science fiction fan works, but I couldn't read them after reading a few chapters. They were as if they were cut out from a template, and I had no desire to read them.) There are some minor flaws in the plot of this book, but it does not affect the viewing. [I don't know, is the author planning to follow a movie plot or a comic plot? Based on the movie plot, I feel that the protagonist's strength is sufficient. Thanos without the Infinity Gauntlet may not be his opponent. If the comic plot is followed, the entire universe's combat power may be beyond the sky. (I'm afraid that the author can't control it! Although the protagonist is invincible, I'm afraid that if you finish writing the exciting points, you won't be able to be strong later.) My suggestion is to follow the Zhutianliu route. The more worlds, the better. The main reason is that the protagonist's growth potential is too high, and his strength is faster than riding a rocket. Zhutianliu belongs to science fiction , Never add fantasy or fantasy stuffThe main reason is that it is too inconsistent. It's like the American flag was raised at the White House. Remember! Remember! Don't write about the fusion world, the Spider-Man trilogy, mutants, vampires, mages, and other things. Don't write them on one planet. The earth is too small to accommodate these guys? For X-Men, write the plot of X-Men, and for Avengers, write the plot of Avengers! Marvel Magisters will write the plot of Marvel Magisters. Don't drag them into the same world to write them, because the readers' energy can't keep up and it's easy to get confused. The Spider-Man trilogy came out too early, and instead was pressed to the ground by Iron Man for a while, making it difficult to integrate them. However, you can consider "Holland's version of Spider-Man". This version of Spider-Man happens to be stuck with Iron Man, and the plot development happens to be behind the first Avengers. I will put this book on the top of my bookshelf and support and vote for you starting tomorrow. Today's recommendation votes have been used up, and I just found this book today in the Rising Stars ranking list. Key points: Never write about fusion worlds, because there are really too many such novels, and many readers have already developed aesthetic fatigue, because many timelines will collide. Collision, the plot is also very difficult to control.

Ever since I met Hela, I have become more and more disgusted. This novel has always used the words shy, kitten, dodge, shame, anger, blush, and hair. When I saw these adjectives to describe Hela, the image of the goddess of death instantly made you feel silly and sweet. The phenomenon of watching the movie and the comparison you described instantly made me feel like vomiting. The image of Hela was written for you like this. If you change it to Wanda, it will look better. Also, no matter what you do, there will be a bunch of descriptions. Although, but then, is it interesting to keep making up the word count to deceive people into buying it?

[Long Comment 325-327] On the value conflict between moral empathy under the "community of a shared future for mankind" and the "primordial god" thinking mode Foreword: Reading the early part of the volume "The Return of the Dusk Wolf" did give me a sense of "mechanical deity" and "turning the tide", but after reading "Chapter 325" "Heisenberg's Civilization Game" started, I couldn't help but feel that something was wrong, but I couldn't explain it. It wasn't until today at the end of "Chapter 327: You sent the wrong address" that I saw the comments of {"NickName":"Temperance0","UserId":331794722}, and finally figured it out: The protagonist created by the author in these chapters is indeed the image and behavior of the primitive gods in Greek mythology. However, the primitive gods do not follow human moral systems and ways of thinking. They are the real "thunder, rain and dew, all are God's grace." But this kind of thinking mode of "I am the only one" and "God is supreme" is obviously contrary to the readers' universal human moral values, so a large number of readers will feel uncomfortable and conflicted. If this book is aimed at "a group of readers who have grown up under the religious background of monotheistic sects that are generally believed in the West", it can barely feel that there is a strong sense of violation. However, from the perspective of those of us who have grown up under the civilized view of "man can conquer nature" as the spiritual and cultural background, the actions of the protagonist are obviously "gods have no principles and are destructive" such as "Ten days of patrolling the sky" and "Gonggong angrily touches Mount Buzhou". How do we deal with the so-called "gods" who "see the common people as ants" behavior pattern has been clearly written in ancient Chinese mythology: "When Yao was caught, he went out for ten days, burning crops, killing vegetation, and leaving the people with nothing to eat. Yao Qi, Chisel Teeth, Jiu Ying, Da Feng, Feng Xi, and Xiu Snake were all harm to the people. Yao ordered Yi to kill Chisel Tooth in the wilderness of Chouhua, killing The nine infants were on the fierce water, and the strong wind was in the swamp of Qingqiu. They shot up for ten days and then went down to kill the scorpion. They cut off the snakes in the cave and captured the mulberry trees. "-"Huainanzi·Benjingxun" "... So Nuwa made five-color stones to mend the sky, cut off the turtles to support the four poles, killed the black dragon to help Jizhou, and accumulated reed ashes to stop the water. The sky was mended, the four poles were upright, the water dried up, Jizhou was peaceful, the cunning insects died, and the people of Zhuan were prosperous..." - "Huainanzi·Lan Mingxun" "... In the past, Yu destroyed the floods and cut down the rivers to connect all the barbarians and nine states..." - "Zhuangzi·Tianxia Chapter" It can be seen that under the Eastern civilization system, we have never cared about the so-called "gods", just like the passage that has been circulating on the Internet for a long time: ………… When the sky is broken, you can refine the stone to mend it; When the flood comes, don't ask the prophets, just dig the canals and dredge them yourself; When diseases are prevalent, don't ask for miracles, you try medicines and cure them yourself; Those who drown in the East Sea will fill it up, and those who are exposed to the sun will shine down the sun; Whoever wants to be the selecting stone, let him go, and whoever wants to be the prostrate lamb, let him go; Whoever wants to kneel to the emperor and the powerful ministers, let him go. Whoever wants to kneel to the gods and ghosts without asking the common people, let him go; ………… What's more, the "dark side of humanity" that the protagonist sees comes from the numerous crimes committed by North American slave owners, genocide and anti-human gangs. In the article, what fault do we on the other side of the ocean have to suffer this unreasonable disaster together in the name of "humanity"? If you, as a "god", use your own emotional bias to impose so-called "divine punishment" on all mankind, then don't blame us, as "humanity", a community with a shared future, for rebelling against the "god". When you encounter injustice, you must resist. Even if the Emperor of Heaven is immoral and immoral, he will still be punished by Heaven and dance with his relatives. The strong will will always be there! We are curious about the condescending so-called "gift" from you, a "god" with a "primitive god" personality? This is the source of discomfort for me or many readers.

Mainly just pick a few interesting points to talk about 1. First let's talk about the protagonist. I think one thing about the character creation is very good, that is, it is real. Many people criticized the protagonist of this book for having incorrect views and being low-spirited, but I think this is precisely what the author has successfully created. This protagonist is completely based on reality. "If one day you gain invincible power, what will you do?" The protagonist is very honest about his ambitions and desires and decides to stay in the Marvel world. At the same time, he goes home to give his parents the final say without losing the good side of human nature. Many people criticize the protagonist for his incorrect views... To be honest, I think if you were the protagonist, you might not be as good as him, and you might do something crazy... Don't think too well of yourself. When you really have unfettered power, you may not be able to control your dark side. 2. The plot is very interesting. To be honest, after reading so many American comics, this plot is very interesting. Whether it is picking up Gu Yi, or making Iron Man no longer Iron Man and killing Lu Dan, it is very good. The most important thing for me when reading a novel is that it is interesting. On this point, I rarely get happiness that is not the same in this plot. I like it 👍. 3Finally, I would like to talk about some areas that I feel can be strengthened: First of all, I feel that the writing is a bit dry. Looking at your words, I feel that they are hard food and dry. Although the plot is interesting, I feel that many of the descriptions are lacking (environment, appearance, and heart). Many times I feel like I could put some pen and ink into the flesh and blood of these words, but just having a skeleton would be a waste of the plot. (It means that you don't even know the Chinese character for water, and you can even use water as a twist🤪) Generally speaking, that's it, it's quite interesting. If I keep it up, I will order all of them 🌹

The author just watched a few Marvel and DC movies, and not too many comics, and rushed to write a novel. The protagonist's character can be evil, righteous, despicable, or holy, but don't be short-sighted. Especially this kind of invincible novel, for example, a person has the ability to rule the universe, but his dream is to take over a mountain and become the mountain king. The power level of the 199999 movie universe is not as high as other universes, but as for the outside universe, the time recorded in the movie is only about 200 years, and it basically does not leave the earth. What about those ancient gods and dimension demons? In ancient times, the protagonist has been trapped in the mirror world. How many origin materials does the protagonist have, and how many times can he escape. The protagonist's ideological level is not high enough and he limits himself to the earth. There is also the matter of women. I can accept women without being sentimental, but the last person who was a nun slave is too low-end. If the author is opening a book, I will read it, but this book is still forgotten.

The early stage is good, but the middle and later stages are not ordinary history, it is still the kind of history that is like a string of water. It's okay to leave many holes unfilled in the early stage. Later, I often write some nonsense that has nothing to do with advancing the plot For example, building an infinite gate that allows subordinates to travel to other worlds. Except in the later stage, when I reach the Greek mythology world, the rest is all water. I go to the Godzilla world in the multiverse level just to bring Godzilla back as a pet. I can get through it in one sentence. It has been a mess for dozens of chapters For example, he has almost reached the Almighty God level, and it has been a mess for dozens of chapters in a place like the world of the Motherland, which does not improve the protagonist at all. There is also a foreshadowing of a world that makes Superman feel extremely desperate, TM He was trained by the protagonist for most of the book. Not to mention a superman, a dog raised by a half-step almighty boss can clearly arrange the world of the people of the motherland. He just made the author lose dozens of chapters If you don't want to read the author's history, please subscribe carefully.

I think it's okay, but it always feels weird for the main character to wander around in just a pair of pajamas.

There is a lot of nonsense, if you can't write it down, don't say half a sentence, okay?

When I see someone saying that the protagonist's three views are not correct, I would like to ask you not to substitute your own three views as an ordinary person into the protagonist's, okay? Putting aside the title of the book, it is called Injustice Superman. The Superman described by the author is only one of countless possibilities. Why should Superman have to follow your three views? Superman must support justice, punish rape and eliminate evil, sacrifice himself for others, and be a bodyguard and nanny for mankind? Da Chao is because he was well educated by his adoptive parents and has a kind girlfriend. Where is the protagonist? Understand the protagonist's background before bragging. Okay, don't take it for granted. To be realistic, an ordinary person who understands the plot, possesses superhuman strength and unlimited growth, and knows what height he will reach in the future, is more likely to have an overwhelming mentality and have no scruples than to be a calm and good gentleman and a righteous partner. Da Chao's weaknesses are obvious: the character of the Virgin, his adoptive parents and girlfriend, these are the breakthrough points for his enemies to deal with him, and what about the protagonist? The author's setting of the protagonist's character is a good way to avoid such risks. The enemy can only have a head-to-head fight with the protagonist. Victory or defeat depends on one's ability. And from the beginning, telling humans with thunderous means that I want to destroy you is a matter of time. I really can do it. There will be no bloody plot where a clown constantly tests the protagonist's lower limit. (I like this very much) Why should a man who can extinguish the sun by blowing his breath play house games with the people on earth and abide by the laws and morals of the earth? Did humans say hello to animals when they occupied their land? Who is the God of Destruction in Dragon Ball saying hello to when he destroys a planet in a bad mood? Being unscrupulous is the attitude of a strong man. Respect is given to people who are on the same level. When the protagonist faces Odin later, isn't he disrespectful? Odin was going to die of old age anyway. Wouldn't dying in a great battle as a warrior be the last sign of respect for him? Are there any problems with these three views? When facing Darkseid, even if he verbally competes with him, doesn't he mentally recognize the opponent's strength? The layout, the protagonist of this book is quite big. From the beginning, humans on the earth have never been regarded as opponents. Anyone who has read the previous article knows that humans actually don't have much content. They mainly deal with people like God King and the Overlord of the Universe. Why do you demand such a protagonist from the perspective of human beings? There are also those who commented here without even reading the book because they read the bad reviews. The key point is that they didn't read the book but only read the bad reviews. They are simply speechless. It is the first time I have seen this, so I won't say anymore... Finally, could you please the author to update more frequently? The update speed is the second point that makes me speechless 😅

The idea is very good and the writing is okay. The only problem is that the protagonist is described as a second-rate person. I feel that the author wants to write a domineering and unrestrained appearance after strong strength, but I don't see it at all. Sometimes the protagonist is split, acting and doing like a Kryptonian, and making choices and inner monologues like an Earthling. , Don't complain about me doing what I do, I'm just asking questions, I hope the author will think about it in character creation.

Let me briefly talk about my feelings about this book! Invincible flow, cool writing, the king of force! The cool part is that the protagonist is a Kryptonian, the ancestor of Superman! When fighting, I rarely dodge, I'm always aggressive! Of course it's not like Superman is protecting or anything like that, he's just too lazy to hide! The parts of fighting Thanos, killing Marvel, and challenging Odin are very exciting, and I can't wait to run away! In the author's writing, the character traits of Heisenberg, the unjust superman, are very impressive! Maybe it's because he became a gangster godfather in the beginning, but later on the protagonist has always been a bit domineering like a gangster godfather! The kind that is domineering and revealing all the time! And the gangster godfather really fits the character of Injustice Superman! He is not merciless in killing, but he will not attack innocent people. The so-called innocent means that Heisenberg thinks he is innocent. After all, his character is like that. He will kill those like the emperor just because he wants to! This is not a funny article, so there are not many laughs, but there are many cool points. The battle is more intense, and the protagonist cannot be offended. Weirdness feels that the protagonist is potentially dangerous to the earth and the universe, so he comes to trouble the protagonist. The protagonist kills Weirdness without hesitation, and hangs her on the moon to warn other strong men. It is not the Virgin at all. After all, she is the style of the underworld godfather and emperor! It can be said that the author has his own unique insights into the style, unlike Long Aotian and Ye Liangchen who pretend to be cool and slap in the face! More like Daddy Whitebeard, the strongest man in the world! But there is a big disadvantage! The author's update is too short and too little! Moreover, after reading this pretentious article of his, when I read other articles, I felt that the layout was too small and I couldn't stand it! I've been searching everywhere for books with Superman as the main character, and now I'm running out of books! Woo woo woo...,,

I don't know why so many authors write American comics. It was originally a children's book, and the power system in it was so confusing that even the author couldn't explain it. A planet guardian like Gu Yi can travel in all dimensions, so how strong is his physical fitness? How many floors up did he fall to his death? The God of Thunder could probably slap him to death in front of her, but he could run around in space at will. Ebony Throat destroyed so many planets under the hands of Purple Sweet Potato Spirit. Beating Doctor Strange was like beating his son. He was kicked out of the spaceship and felt cold. So it's difficult for Gong's mage to put up a shield for himself?          ，，， Surprisingly, it only took a few gems to absorb the energy of Zishu. ·

The writing is weird, the main character's outlook is not correct, he is just a minor character, he has great power, and his mood is not up to par at all.

I especially don't like a human being who suddenly becomes a superman asking for worthless things like money, watches, women, and houses. If I become a superman, harboring evil intentions but not fearing life and death, then I will drill into the center of the earth from any side to see what interesting things are in the center of the earth, and then drill out from the other side in a straight line; or I will stop in outer space, shoot out heat rays from my eyes, and try Try to shoot the earth through; or try to expand the cross-section of the heat ray after it reaches the earth, try to write a few giant Chinese characters; or blow out the cold air and try to freeze the earth, even if doing these things will destroy the earth, or fight to the death with the Ancient One or something else. If I have good intentions or don't want to fight with the Ancient One or anything else, I will fly freely in the earth's atmosphere, from one country to another, go to the Antarctic, the North Pole, and the deepest ocean trench to see what strange things are there; when the earth no longer attracts me, I will go to live in the sun for a few days, and then fly to other planets, other galaxies, the universe is so big, I want to go out and walk around.

After reading dozens of chapters, I found that the main character, besides having a rubbish personality, also likes to show off his IQ. He is obviously an ordinary person but you can crush the braised egg with your strength, but you insist on designing the braised egg to death. I really think that his IQ can be compared with that of the King of Agents!

I like to read dark novels, which are also about killing and killing. The protagonist of this book feels unlikable. The protagonists of other dark novels are very high-level. Even if they live in an ignoble existence, plot sneak attacks, and repay kindness with revenge, you can still feel their charm. However, the protagonist of this book talks like a little boss under the villain. The same plot is arrogant and domineering, and he kills with his backhand instantly. This book seems very low. When I look at it, I want to say, you are the only one?

Good guy, everyone in the book review section is downvoted. Are all book lovers these days so qualified? When I see a book that I don't like, I don't just turn around and leave, but I actually take the time and effort to post a book review to warn future readers! Then you are making people like me who follow this book every day very unqualified! Then I have to post it hahahaha

The young supreme, a kind of beauty that can bend both men and women

Batman's confused expression is really awesome

After some reading, the writing is actually good, but the protagonist is not very well portrayed. Don't think of him as the protagonist. He is just an invading alien. Based on the overall human character, this kind of alien can endure and grow if it cannot be defeated. If defeated, it will be killed without hesitation. If killed, it will be sliced ​​and studied. The kind that will not give them a chance.

The idiot author estimates that in reality he is a cuckold. He wrote a novel where the heroine is either a broken shoe or a married woman. This is where he is enjoying himself 🙂

At first I had expectations. I thought it was good in the first few chapters, but things have changed since the beginning of Marvel. The characters are casual, neither good nor evil, and they will do whatever they mess with. There is nothing wrong with it, but the author's description is really awkward and has no character. The first thing a god on earth does is to kill a gangster and set up a bar to have a party. I have no idea what the purpose of this is. Opening a bar is so speechless.         ，，，， The purpose is unclear, I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do, and I look confused.         ，，， I feel really sick when I see it

To be honest, the first few chapters are very well written. You should show off your power, and you don't have to care about others' weak opinions. However, I think the following chapters can explain the power and bugs of Kryptonians to these fish-lipped earthlings. After all, they only know that you are strong, but they don't know how strong you are specifically. You can show off a little bit.

The memory of more than 10,000 years did not cover up the memories of the diaosi for decades, and he became a diaosi superman, awesome

If time travel is not for the purpose of collecting a harem, it would be meaningless😤

The first dozen or so chapters are pretentious and full of explanations, as well as various personal items of the author, and I even picked up an unknown item.

From the third chapter, the end to the fourth chapter, the pure smell of diaosi, like a bib, I don't know what is touching me.

After reading about twenty chapters, I felt like I was watching a psycho. There is no logic at all. The author has no outline and no plot. I write whatever I want. The key is that the author himself is probably a person who usually does things without any rules. So where to write, I read it for a long time and had no idea what I was reading. . . . You want me to read something?

It smells like a diaosi, and in this era, there is still such a protagonist 🥱🥱

This book is like the old stench pulled out of a cesspit, which is so spicy that people can't shake their eyes away.