Dongxiao

It is recommended not to write about flying on a sword. If you don't know, you can refer to Shushan. Don't copy the low operations in TV series.

The protagonist's character is a bit pedantic, a bit like Zhang Wuji's. The writing is good and the storyline is good, but the sense of immersion in the protagonist's character is very low.

The writing is quite charming. It's a pity that the plot is too protracted and the details are inappropriate: it is already 220,000 words long, and the protagonist has not yet succeeded in becoming a disciple. Is this the rhythm of "starting from scratch"...

Help🆘, the latest chapter is still a Shushan novel. . . Mortals jump and slap in the face. . . . I was a little speechless.

It's really hard to find a novel about cultivating immortals in Shushan nowadays.

It's better to set the protagonist's awakening from his past life as a firm pursuit of truth in the modern world.

It's okay, I just hope it doesn't turn into a flood again later

The plot is okay, but the character of the protagonist seems a bit alien.

Support, it's rare to see such a pure Shushan style article, please come on, author! !

Should I watch your update and break times or not 😅

Is the author going to continue writing? Just keep writing.

Kendo also transcends the Dao. Although the author sets up the system for each book, this is too ridiculous.

Why don't you write it? ? I also voted for 2 monthly votes last month.

I took a look and found that I got 😰 again.

This update is too slow, less than 3,000 a day

Excuse me, is this skill not Shushan style?

The writing is quite good, but the update is a bit slow. But with the results, I won't force you to update it. Just update it normally. In fact, I don't quite understand the part where the protagonist is apprenticed to Kunlun Mountain. It doesn't matter whether the protagonist is apprenticed to Kunlun Mountain. It's just that the magic weapon of the protagonist is either a devil or a Buddha, and even the kung fu of cultivation. They are all of the dragon family, and since they are Shushan type, anyone who has read the apprenticeship plot can understand it. The disciple of Tianmuzi is really stretched out by your description, and he is not a mortal Yuanying. The Shushan Yuanying is already an immortal. Moreover, the protagonist has just entered cultivation and the plot foreshadowing this apprenticeship is really a test for readers.