Pirates' Navy Iron Wall

Are you really a fan of OP? The manga SBS Oda introduced the Barrier Fruit and the specific hand posture required to activate its ability (overlapping index and middle fingers). It's the same as Foxy's Slowness Fruit (when making a fist, the index finger and little thumb are extended to activate the ability). As for the rest, I'm too lazy to talk about it. I only read a few chapters and I was so depressed that I couldn't stand it anymore!

The protagonist meets his father, and his father recognizes the protagonist. The protagonist refused to recognize him, and Zefa was furious. To spur him on is to recognize his father. Everyone is happy and happy.

Okay, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, this can be said to be the better one among the many pirates I have seen.

That barrier fruit should be renamed the almighty fruit. It can produce anything. It's too big, and the machine also has automation? Artificial intelligence developed? Also, as soon as those advanced machines are released, the Navy will immediately notice them. I don't believe that Vegapunk is not interested. The description of Peach Rabbit is too fake. If the number one female swordsman in the navy had the character of a common harem template female character, she would have died eight hundred times. The writing is just a copy-pasted and featureless thing. She has no strength and no brains, and she blushes at every turn. Oh, it seems that she is secretly promising to win the harem for the protagonist, just like collecting cards. Also, the navy's cape is not a cape, it is actually a coat. If you look carefully, you will find that there are two sleeves, the most obvious ones of the three generals.

Are you a fan of Douyin? Zefa started to become an instructor after the death of his wife and children. Sakaski and Porusalino were his first students, and Kuzan was his third class. You started messing around! ! !

The barrier can be shaped. It cannot be broken and will be wrapped up by the enemy. Unsolvable ability. Even the natural system cannot escape

No, have you forgotten the most basic ability of the barrier fruit? The barrier giant can't hold it back. Making a giant-shaped barrier and maintaining it all the time doesn't consume much physical energy. Look at the original work. You can cut that barrier as you like. I'm a Buddha.

How come people in novels are so confused at all times without checking it out? What kind of person would be confused when something happens? For a truly strong person, let alone being confused, even being slightly startled is not allowed in the heart.

You're so flattering to yourself, don't overdo it, okay? Once you understand the fruit ability, can you write about it again? The Barrier Fruit can also develop Rasengan, which is awesome enough. Why don't you barrier the entire Pirate World? Really! To develop your imagination, you must have a basic foundation, not develop it haphazardly! Man! It gives the impression that he is a god of fire. When fighting, he only uses water skills.

I still think that the direction of barrier development is to cover the surface of the body with a thin film barrier that can defend, attack, retaliate, and control flight. It can also cover other people, assist others, or seal others. Instead of developing a barrier gundam, it is better to improve the strength of the barrier

Speaking of which, Colossus, who gained the power of the red tank, will have a chance to succeed in the world of One Piece?

In fact, I just don't understand why the Barrier Fruit makes that kind of gesture in the comics. It can be activated without the gesture ability.

The Zhenzhen Fruit is the natural enemy of your fruit.

Author, you are really 🐮🍺. You lost all your attendance in the first month after it was put on the shelves. Are you really not short of money?

Actually, it can be written in such a way that it is absolutely defensive but attacks the weak. Isn't it just for the pleasure of reading novels? If it is done this way, it will not be that exciting. If it is not attractive, it will easily fall into the street.

The thorn barrier turns into a hedgehog The mind barrier at force field is immune to the overlord's color observation and detection Continuously generates ultra-thin tiny mass barriers, and you can gain aerial maneuverability far beyond the moon step by stepping on it The edges of the ultra-thin barrier are extremely sharp Generate a four-dimensional time and space barrier that wraps itself to shuttle through space Use the deformation ability of the barrier to instantly wrap and surround the enemy, absolutely confining it

I remembered something: Kizaru and Akainu were both trainees after the death of Zefa's family, weren't they? There should be no them now 🤐🤐

Not bad, good writing, good luck to the author!

Devil Fruits are great, but the admiral is the father of the protagonist. Most pirate novels generally feature orphans with a father looking after them. It's weird. Maybe it's just that I don't like it.

I thought about the development direction of the barrier fruit. Doesn't absolute defense mean indestructibility? Then the attack is not weak either.

Not bad, the fruit development is creative. There's nothing poisonous about it either.

The beginning is too confusing. It would be better to start with a few chapters.

It's not like you, the symbiote, and the racing rabbit are both here. You're too open-minded, right?

I can't hold back when I see Rasengan. Those who write about Japanese comics can't escape Rasengan. Those who write about cold weapons can't escape Fang Tianhuaji. Alas.

Well written! Why do you feel like your grades are not good?

I just read the first chapter, why when I saw the barrier, I thought of the elimination of the Tsuchikage's blood successor in Naruto

Brother, can you write more chapters? You are too slow, just these few words in one day

I knew this book would be a hit, but I didn't find a father for myself first, and yet I was still so weak 🤭