The First Saint of Kunlun

The writing and story are quite good, but after all, it is a time-traveling experience. Although the specific identity before time-traveling is not explained, it does not mean that you don't understand love at all. It may be more comfortable if the time-traveling identity is not explained.

In my personal opinion, this novel in Qimao Li is quite good. The pace is fast but not chaotic. It is suitable for reading calmly. People who are more impatient may not like it. Also, the relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses slowly, so you need to watch it slowly (I think this may be closer to reality, because I think the relationship between husband and wife is slowly developed from the time they met, rather than all at once), and there is no shortage of funny plots. Recommended for old bookworms. I have been a bookworm for nearly ten years (I haven't been in Qimao for a long time). Overall it looks good

The most fearful thing about cultivating immortals and writing is that the cultivation of immortals and upgrading are regarded as the main content, and there is nothing other than upgrading. Realm improvement should be a help to advance the plot, and should not be the only content of the entire work. Otherwise, your entire book will be too boring, and you will upgrade purely for the sake of upgrading. The main character stays in one place throughout the book, and each chapter tells how much he has risen, and when he reaches the top, a big pot will be cooked to finish the book. Readers endure a turtle-like protagonist for hundreds or even thousands of chapters in the hope that there will be enough satisfying feedback in the later stage. Ninety-nine percent of the book is filled with frustration. Do you think readers can be satisfied with just the thrill of the last few chapters? The plot is too poor and boring, just like a running account.

(Only my personal opinion) From beginning to end, the plot has ups and downs, but it is not sudden at all. The protagonist's emotional line is also very natural. I can't explain it very clearly, but what is certain is that the more I read this book, the more excited I became. I really wanted to know the ending, but I still didn't want to jump to the end and kept reading page after page. All in all, very exciting!

Good

The theme concept is good, and the writing skills are relatively solid, but it is a bit bland, and many plots are too detailed and mixed with many detailed explanations, which makes it seem too watery.

Decades have passed easily, what's the point?

I have watched it several times, and it was really good in the era when the waste material flow and the Dragon King flow were in power. Compared with the plot where the fight and killing are reversed for the sake of reversal, this one does not create those disgusting enemies in order to highlight the protagonist Gou. There is nothing to say that an enemy makes him stop. It's disgusting from start to finish, and I basically avenge myself on the spot. I've read too many fairy tales from other genres that are bland and have a little bit of fierce fighting, but I feel very comfortable. There are no stupid competitions or stupid dialogues, such as let's take a bet.

The plot is good, but the fight descriptions are a bit monotonous, and everyone gets punched

What should I say? If you say that the male protagonist is so useless without the system, then forget it. If you do the system, you won't be happy and you will spend a long time grinding and grinding. It's nothing.