The Unnameable Tarot Cards

It's well written, but it has a lot of flaws. The advantages are very obvious. The character creation is amazing. The character of Sartre has been completely established. There are also a lot of shortcomings. I feel that the positioning of this book is a bit problematic. If you want to focus on the plot and character creation, the protagonist's nonsensicalness is a bit disappointing. If you follow the routine of a cool novel to create supporting characters, it will be almost useless. In short, neither party wants to offend, but neither party wants to please. Also, the author does too little about the protagonist. I believe you even if you say that the protagonist of this book is Sartre.

Let me mention my overall thoughts on this book. The character's intelligence is too low. When the city lord obviously has a problem and the protagonist tells the reason, the other characters still believe in the city lord. Later, when the cultists pointed out that the city lord was a cultist, the two extraordinary prophecies forgot to verify the identity of the city lord just because the city lord was the queen. Also, why didn't the city lord sacrifice the protagonist earlier? The city lord's goal was to obtain the protagonist's father's power to freely use the aura of evil and summon the evil god, so he wanted to sacrifice the protagonist, so why not sacrifice him when he came into contact with the protagonist. The reduction of intelligence is too obvious. In the subsequent plot, someone can use their ability to reduce intelligence to realize the layout. The title refers to the indescribable and the tarot cards. But now there are too few Tarot card scenes, and the content of the novel easily deviates from the title. It is recommended to introduce the functions and settings of Tarot cards later, and let the protagonist start using Tarot cards. The character of the protagonist is also too unclear. After reading more than sixty chapters, I still don't even know the character of the protagonist. Later, you can write a story about the protagonist before he travels through time to perfect the protagonist's emotions. Finally, I hope the author can adopt my suggestions and ideas. I also hope that the author can withstand the pressure and successfully pass the novice stage without becoming a eunuch.

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I finally understand why this book's performance is so poor. Although the author wrote a decent plot and successfully created the characters, it almost made me hate all the supporting characters except for a few! There is really no motivation to read on!

When I first started watching it, I wanted to ask, is the protagonist a psychotic character who makes jokes and jokes, or is he a serious and calm character? I really hate funny things when I read novels now.

? ? ? Everything else is fine, it's just the protagonist who has a problem,? The painting style of the protagonist is different from that of the whole world. The whole world is in serious black, and the protagonist is pink like a clown. This novel would be much better without the protagonist. It feels like there is a bad guy in the wolf pack.

Chapter 20 I didn't see the tarot cards 🤔

What a great opening, come on, brother cheating god!

Azathoth is too much, this thing is completely unbelievable. All existences are moths that disturb His sleep.

The writing is really good, but I feel that the main character Jio is so weak, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch 😥