Konoha Ninja Vega

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I damn thought the title of the book was Ninja Tiga...

When turning the skills in LOL into a real version, you can't just look at the effect of the skills, but also combine them with their background stories. Vega was caught by Tetsuo and used as a pet for a long time. During this period, Tetsuo did a lot of experiments and toyed with him, which caused his mental state to be confused. The source of extraordinary evil power is the underworld. Although Xiaofa, Doghead, and Thresh all use different methods, they all control and absorb the power of the soul. Through the enhancement of soul essence, it feeds back the physical, magical and spiritual power. The material body is a container and has an upper limit. Tetsuo has to give up his body in order to rule the underworld. It's such a waste that the protagonist in the book only uses it as a kind of energy.

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The ban on ninjutsu in the book is too strict. It is unreasonable for Minato, as the protagonist's teacher, to apply for ninjutsu after handing it to him. If it is an S-level forbidden technique obtained from the Book of Sealing, the teacher needs to report it to the Hokage. Ordinary ninjutsu cannot have too many restrictions. At most, it can limit the ways to obtain it and limit its spread. For example: it cannot be taught casually on a large scale, and it cannot be leaked to ninjas from other villages without being held accountable... Only when this ninja obtains ninjutsu that his identity cannot access, will it lead to Konoha official investigation to investigate whether there is something wrong with him and whether he has become a spy... So I suggest the author change Chapter 37. There is no need to get the Rasengan all at once. The protagonist can learn a few C-level Wind Releases first, and then learn the Rasengan! Or maybe it could be changed to Minato not being a ninjutsu type ninja, not proficient in elemental escape techniques, and only knowing Rasengan...

The fourth generation is really very kind to the protagonist. If he is afraid of changing the situation and sees the fourth generation couple dying, it would be too ungrateful for the protagonist. By the way, the one who uses the ice shield is the Snow Clan, not Minazuki. Minazuki was made up by early netizens, just like the Eight Colors of Konoha.

A dignified evil mage must become a ninja when he becomes Hokage? Is it because I have been tricked by other gods or is my brain flooded? It is still understandable for someone who has no strength and golden fingers to be a ninja, but it is too narrow-minded for someone who has cheats on other training systems to become a ninja.

If your father and I reversed roles, I would let you know what cruelty is.

In the first chapter, you get thunderous! ANBU did this? Notify students of admission? This scene seems familiar. I remember that Harry Potter was the only one who received this kind of treatment, right? As expected of the protagonist! The halo is blinding!

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The title of this book is poisonous. I thought it was Ninja Tiga. I came across this book several times and was not interested in opening it. I knew I was too bored and just clicked on this book and found out that it was Vega.

The title of the book looks like Ninja Tiga, can I still be saved?😅😅😅

I remember that Danzo's recruitment scope was for ninjas and orphans in orphanages, and other people were not within his scope of recruitment. From my understanding of Hokage, he would not attack civilians, he would only target ninjas, orphans in orphanages, and people who hoped to become Hokage.

When I saw the title of this book, my first reaction was that if you pour boiling water into an ant nest, you will be invincible.

There will be no civilian players after Minato, at least not while Danzo is here! There aren't too many twists and turns in Minato becoming Hokage! On the surface, he is supported by the Hokage, but when he considers the actual promotion routine, think about it carefully. Big guys, how easy can it be to become the king of a country and get people? What's more, he is from a civilian background! The ability to govern the country and the human sophistication required to move forward. When it comes to Minato, it's all positive, and there's basically no negative. If this is the case, then he is the child of destiny.

There are some points to watch, but I don't know if the author dares to do so. For example, Kisame was killed in the Chunin Examination, Obito was removed from the Minato team, and the third Tsuchikage or the future fourth generation Raikage was killed in three battles. "It's not about changing the plot", the focus is on "changing the fate of the characters in the original plot". To put it bluntly, the protagonist chopped up a bunch of miscellaneous fish in three battles. The Nine-Tails Rebellion is still a soy sauce, no matter what happens to Uchiha Naekage, or defecting. There was no big action in the 15.6 Years that Naruto and Sasuke grew up, and the plot of the original novel was still unfolding, so there was nothing interesting about it. What makes Naruto fans successful is that they can play freely after the mid-term development, follow the original plot and survive to defeat Kaguya invincibly in the finale. No matter how much I watch it, I don't get a single recommendation vote. Things like Kisame Tsuchikage's early death are minor changes, not a major highlight. It makes people think about the future plot all the way, which is a good fanfic.

If the heroine were Hanabi, wouldn't that be awesome?

The author should hurry up and speed up the progress and confirm the overall battle route of the protagonist, otherwise he will lose readers. After all, the pace of fan fiction is too slow to write

Find an ant nest and rub the ants every day

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It's not exciting, it's too bland.

The protagonist is too short-lasting, and the amount of chakra is not as good as that of a chunin. The high quality of chakra means that less chakra can have the same lethality. Killing people absorbs life and soul. Even if the recovery cannot be immediate, the recovery should be accelerated.

From the 6th to the 13th, it took eight days from the issuance of the book to the signing of the contract. The first day was reviewed and the website was short-listed. The contract was printed and sent out the next day. The contract was sent out in the next four days. It was delivered yesterday and signed today.

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Come on, I will write 1 million words soon.

Hmm... It's a very ordinary Naruto fanfic in every aspect. There's nothing outstanding about it, so I can watch it.

Nothing special, just ordinary, mediocre

The war scenes are too bland. Ninjas are different from ordinary people. The writing is like ordinary people fighting on the battlefield.

He can't be a eunuch, right😅😅😅