Hunter's Gift of Darkness

The author doesn't understand hunters enough. Learning telekinesis depends on talent. Ordinary people can't learn it even if they know it.

I have an online logical IQ, and I haven't written a novel about recruiting women based on their strength. I hope the protagonist is ruthless and the writing style is higher than that of ordinary hunter novels.

After reading only two or three chapters, a random gangster picking up trash in Meteor Street is a telepathic person? You still have to pick up trash and eat it if you have telekinesis? Wouldn't it be nice to just go out and get a hunter's license and sell it? The Yin Beast is such a bad guy, but in an organization as big as the Ten Gangsters, he is actually the face, which shows the scarcity of people with telekinesis abilities... Can the protagonist learn telekinesis techniques just by recalling two-dimensional plots? Then why do you need a teacher? Wouldn't it be enough for a new hunter to open a sperm hole and then directly give video lessons?

The protagonist's abilities are based on Blackbeard?

I can't understand whether the protagonist is really stupid or fake. He only has this strength when he missions Meteor Street and is not afraid of revenge.

Hunters definitely support it! So rare!

Why was that Naruto book taken off the shelves?

Let me see how this Hunter fanfic goes

You said that the male protagonist is a trait type and an enhanced type. These two are the most distant ones. You might as well say that the male protagonist is from all types. You can practice both.

The concept of the protagonist's abilities is very vague

The remaining quota will be used directly for Chrollo, and he will be able to play nesting dolls again.

How to learn Nian abilities without someone to lead the way? There are three ways. Only those with talents can open up their abilities on their own, such as Angel Secretary and Wheat Banner. Article 2: Someone will help you open the vents. The third tip is to slowly practice opening holes on your own like Zhixi.

Please use four positive words to form a derogatory word

It's not easy to find a fanfic that has the dark temperament of the original work and I'm still excited

That's awesome, the female supporting character can't survive more than three chapters, keep it up

Come on, well written

The two hunters who were chasing them both started to confront the brigade and started fighting.

There are very few fan stories, let alone hunter stories. Don't be a eunuch, I still have to keep them.

The disappearing ability of dark matter is not reflected in the battle. Has the author forgotten it?

If the author puts it on the shelves, he will support all orders in one wave.