Seeking Immortality Through the Unorthodox Path

It's good! Keep it up! And please, no female lead!!!

I've read forty-four chapters. The unorthodox and unconventional teachings are quite interesting, though not extensively written. There aren't any major flaws, but the plot is rather bland with few climaxes. The writing style is decent.

Since you're writing about unorthodox ideas, you need to be on the right track. You don't need to be ruthless or cold-blooded, but being decisive and not meddling in other people's business is a basic requirement, isn't it? Let me explain why:

What a useless protagonist! From chapter 130 when his heart was stolen until now, he's only getting revenge and is still being hunted down, and his cultivation hasn't increased at all! What are you writing? Consider the subscriptions a gift; go find a job. You're really not suited to writing novels.

Such contradictory lines appear in two consecutive chapters. Chapter 13 describes the innkeeper as dressing like a poor man, while Chapter 14 describes the protagonist as not being poor at all. What else can readers say? Is this a novel written with care?

Goodness, out of all the novels on Qidian, only "You and the Immortal Record" is so heavily protected against piracy that I can't find any resources online, forcing me to read the official version. 😒😒😒😒 But I'm too poor!

Around chapter 140, Liu Dandan's heart was stolen by a ghost, and his soul was also sucked away. Then, he was weakened and escaped. The one controlling his body was La Kuai Dandan, who didn't say anything, which is understandable. Then, around chapter 200, I heard some news about something like a monster.

After reading over a hundred chapters, I feel like something's missing. First, the immersion isn't strong, and the plot feels disjointed, lacking coherence. Also, the title is "Left Path," but it doesn't capture the essence of that path. To be honest, the "left path" refers to unorthodox, unorthodox practices, typically involving mediocre talent, ruthless ambition, and rapid advancement through…

Having read over fifty chapters, including the part about fighting the River God, the book is generally scattered, chaotic, and disjointed, like a child playing an online game, dragging their character all over the map. The narrative is somewhat disorganized, with too many characters appearing and too many plot holes left unresolved. The excessive map exploration also disrupts the story's continuity. The transitions are too abrupt and jarring. You must be a new author, keep it up!

It's messy, chaotic, and even at 130 minutes, it's getting less and less interesting. Time to leave.