Godly Demon Hunter

After seeing the end of the dwarf incident, let me share my thoughts: The protagonist in the author's novel always pulls his hips in strange places, and the dwarves get people drunk for no apparent reason and steal equipment. I didn't react when I saw hundreds of dwarf blacksmiths forging iron. Instead, I was shocked by the number of weapons produced by the blacksmiths. First of all, the dwarves did not use magic to create weapons. Secondly, the weapons they made were not artifacts. I was so shocked! As a time traveler in the industrial era, would you be shocked by this kind of thing? It feels like the protagonist is an aborigine who wears the skin of a time traveler and knows the plot. After the dwarf incident was resolved, he bound the weapon given to the master by the dwarf elder, and told the master that he would lend the weapon to you first. Is this what a disciple can say? If the author wants to write a routine using bound weapons, [then the master and the apprentice cannot defeat a certain monster, the master's weapon is knocked away, the protagonist takes advantage of the monster's attention to be attracted by the master, and makes a sneak attack, or secretly gives the sword to the master to let the master make a comeback. Then please tell me, if you just want to be a bitch, then I have nothing to say.

The author's writing is great, the writing is fluent, the plot does not dissuade gamers, the growth is reasonable, and a lot of explosions will definitely be rewarded in full, but there are a few places that are really unsatisfactory The first is that the male protagonist is what I dreamed of, and what do you remember what Geralt of Rivia did? It's very suffocating. I understand that this may be a foreshadowing by the author. The follow-up is that the protagonist is targeted because of this, but it is really suffocating. Do you have such accurate predictions about people and events? Pretend to be confused, be a little unclear, and don't say anything that is not necessary! The prophecy can be said, but it's not that no one believes it, but it's best to say it when it's necessary. Many times the protagonists are spoilers that are unnecessary, including the Scoia'tael and the temple priest, just to see the natives surprised. It's really unnecessary and too vain. Leisuo must have regarded you as his own son before he tortured you! The second one is that steel sword, that sword is so deadly. Of course the protagonist has contributed, but if he wants to be aboveboard, he can give it to the master openly. Now he binds it before the master knows it, and he is afraid that the master will not let him use it first. Not only the protagonist is worried about the trouble of holding the sword, but also the reader has a headache after reading it. The sword is the wife of the demon hunter. Are you an ex-convict or giving it to your own wife? For others, the protagonist can clear the map. When a Leiso is bound to his side, he can clear the map. At that time, he can use the weapon to pick up rags and herbs, saving a lot of money. Or the master and apprentice can talk about giving this sword to the protagonist. Don't be like now where many details emphasize that the protagonist is using the sword, but the sword is still his teacher's in name. The rest is nothing, the overall writing is very good, and the supporting characters are also very vivid. At least I am ready to download The Witcher 2 and play Reso. I read it in one go and thought about it again and again. I hope the author can write better

In fact, the author has only played The Witcher 3 and watched the American TV series The Witcher, so I can understand it clearly. I really can't push the plot later. I don't know what the plot will be after finding Ciri, because the beginning of The Witcher 3 game has Geralt looking for Ciri and Yennefer. The previous plot is some information revealed in the American TV series The Witcher. The reason why I feel this way is because in the original work, the discrimination against non-human beings in the northern countries is irreconcilable. In the original work, Yennefer and Geralt were seriously injured by farmers with pitchforks. Ciri rescued them and went to the Eternal Island. The author wrote that the witcher built an orphanage in the northern countries. It is even more impossible to mass-produce witchers. The Eternal Fire Sect All over the northern countries, demon hunters and warlocks are discriminated against, just like the black people in the United States during the liberation, or even worse. If the author has completed The Witcher 1 and 2, he will know that the attack on the Wolf Sect's base camp has the shadow of the Eternal Fire Sect. The author can go to the B site to read the Chronicles of the Witcher series. There is a girl with lip nails who talks very well.

I have read many witcher fanfics, and I think this one is indeed the best. It fits my imagination of the original work. After completing the game n times, I also thought about reviving the witcher profession. At least it would make Kaer Morhen popular, and I even hoped that the master would come up with a mod. Be sure to keep updating. There is a lot to write about about The Witcher, but there are too few that create the atmosphere of the game and the original. Another book that is highly sought after by many people. How can I put it this way? I liked the first half of the book better. But later on, there were too many jokes. It felt very inconsistent to use other IPs for equipment names. The most outrageous thing is that the eye is a Sharingan. I can't bear this kind of second creation...

Some thoughts and suggestions It's better not to completely restore the game settings. The game settings are only suitable for games, not novel settings. For one thing, the money settings are extremely unreasonable. The game is set this way for the players' consideration. The other thing about the plot is that it needs to be polished a little more. I've only read a dozen chapters and there are a lot of things I want to complain about. The butcher's family who died at the beginning had an obvious effect in persuading them to retreat, and the subsequent plot of the demon hunter was even more clever. The protagonist directly said that what he had dreamed was okay? Of course, if the author says that I just wrote The Witcher 3 to play with others, then pretend I didn't say that.

Hmm... Author, tell the truth, did you spend any money on this cover? Did you buy it from Taobao for a few yuan? This is too outrageous. If you change the direction of the template, there will be two covers?

The early stage is good, the topic is well chosen, and the substitution is strong The middle stage starts to collapse, the progress is slow, and the combat power starts to be nonsense The later stage is full of praise, and at the end the combat power is unclear, the plot is unclear, the emotional line is unclear, and it is simply written randomly.

One thing to note, I know that The Witcher series is very famous, so I bought The Witcher 3 Wild Hunt and played it when it came out... I thought it was the Berserker's Creed, but when I saw a monster, I rushed towards it and died... Then resurrected and rushed towards it again... I still died, and then I stopped playing. So I really don't know anything about the original work of The Witcher. Many derivative novels make people unable to extricate themselves from reading them without knowing the original work. I think this novel is very well written. It describes the cruelty in the wizarding world at the beginning. It is very realistic. You will not be forced to die just because you have a good relationship with the protagonist. The protagonist is powerless, and then slowly the protagonist becomes more and more powerful, which leads to the ability to slowly protect the people around you. This is very logical and very satisfying. As a derivative novel, it is very enjoyable. As a refreshing article, I think the IQ is online. Anyway, I recommend it.

The writing is good. Although the integration in the later stage is a bit imperfect and the ending is a bit anxious, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws. The author has a very comprehensive understanding of the wizard's worldview, and the details are very detailed. He also portrays the characters very well. The plot cannot be said to be broken, but at least it is smooth enough. Overall, it is a good book, much more enjoyable to read than some popular routines.

Overall, it looks okay. It is a work above the passing line. Although the setting may make people who have played The Witcher or read the original work a little high blood pressure, the plot is smooth and has no major poisonous points. It is a good Witcher fanfic. It is recommended to turn on less subtitles when watching it, as it is quite violent (although there are many interesting popular science and jokes) and the experience will be much better if you watch it quietly by yourself. My opinion is that the protagonist grows up too fast and his combat power is a bit low. It can be written more slowly and let the protagonist grow up for decades. When writing The Witcher 3, even if the protagonist is made invincible, there are still decades of training and buffering. There is no weird feeling of suddenly becoming invincible like a cool novel. There are also two DLCs. Although I have played with the Mirror Master, the most interesting part is still missing. The biggest role of Toussaint in Blood and Wine is to buff the secondary mutation of the witcher. It is a bit of a waste of the plot of Blood and Wine, which is no less than the original story.

I don't know if the author has seen it or not, but my suggestion is to finish writing the Wizarding World. Then I will start writing a new game + movie + anime through the infinite stream as the second part, so that I can go to the newly created infinite zone to hit the rankings to ensure income and make up for the pit {"NickName":"Dayin's Sword","UserId":109253770}

The idea is pretty good, but the writing is a little off.

This book is well written overall, but there are some problems with the overall setting. The author wants to incorporate the game settings into it, but also wants to be realistic, but the space and bound weapons in the article are very fake. At the same time, the characters always doubt this ability, which is a bit superfluous and unnecessary.

This plot is very strange. Isn't it interesting that you already know your opponent and yet you still don't take the initiative and wait for the opponent to hit you? Or if the opponent is so strong that you can only wait for him to attack, then there is nothing to write about later.

The original work is unreasonable. I took part in a trial with a very high death rate and became a witcher. I am so powerful that I risked my life to slay demons, but the reward I received was not enough to cover my expenses. It was just for me to beg for food. I save the world, but everyone can accuse me of being a monster, a freak, and a mutant. So what kind of witcher should I be? Cheap or not? Even if I dominate the mountain and become the king, my life will be much more comfortable than this. I am so strong, what else can I do than eliminate demons? So mean?

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Alas, the writing is good, but after dozens of chapters, the protagonist has not officially become a witcher. Even if it is divided into the lowest level of "apprentice witcher" or "witcher apprentice", it would be nice to set up a few apprentice-level skills, and the protagonist will start to mess around with the crossbow. I also feel that the level rises very slowly, only reaching level 3 after dozens of chapters. The skill points given out are too few, only 1 point at level 1. The protagonist gradually has more and more subsequent skills. If the level is higher and only 1 point is given out, it will be useless. The skill points are simply not enough. Also, the presence of cheats is too low. The first dozen chapters are okay, but they rarely appear in the later chapters. Such presence of cheats is too unpleasant.

There were very problems with the protagonist in the early stage, especially for stealing things from dwarves. Thousands of comments were made, this chapter said, but all were deleted. Most readers are normal people, and no one would bring in a protagonist who is proud of petty theft and cheating at cards. The author should think carefully about his next book.

If you want to complain about the previous plot, I can understand it. If you look at my previous posts, I scolded it more fiercely than anyone else, made more complaints than anyone else, and abandoned the book several times, but the result was not really good 🤫. The first few dozen chapters were written by the author a few years ago, so they have not been revised. When I read Chapter 55 of the second volume, which is Chapter 69, it becomes more and more readable. If it doesn't look good, why do so many people vote, rank well, and have high average subscriptions? The author of this book has a part-time job, and he doesn't even bother to be the operating officer. No one would think that the data is just fake, right? Believe me, you will not be able to put it down after reading the second volume. The author of the previous poisonous points said that he would revise it when he has time. Of course, you can join the group to ask when you have time 😁

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My lord, times have changed!

I've seen a lot of comments saying it's too poisonous, the main character is a loser, and there are many villains. Don't be a witcher. It's impossible to exist. It's just a setting. I, as a newbie who bought the game three years ago and have only just gotten into it now, will explain. This is a Witcher fanfic 😅. It is true that there are many shortcomings in the plot setting, but for those of us who have played The Witcher or read the original work of The Witcher, it is considered the best solution. It has emotional points. At least the characters and settings are restored enough. The combat power of the Witcher is like this. There are so many unruly people, but they are bold and ignorant, and have a bad mouth every day. Not to mention the gryphon and wolf factions among the demon hunters, their lives are even more pitiful than what is written here. Their families were slaughtered, and they were suppressed by warlocks and nobles. The new demon hunters were so poor that they had no money to eat and could only survive by beating water ghosts. When running around, they had to worry about being killed by unscrupulous people with pitchforks. Demon hunters never die naturally. That's it, there are still witchers who uphold the original spirit and code, and remain kind and humorous.

It is recommended not to read it, as it will affect your outlook on life; one of your friends was framed by a noble, resulting in death and abuse. The protagonist's choice is to plead with the nobles to give him a chance to find out the truth, and finally clear his friend's wrongdoing. What about the nobles? He paid the commission fee for the investigation!

Rubbish book, don't read it later This book collapsed in the later stage, don't read it, don't read it until you see the protagonist being killed by four master demon hunters, the rest of it is nonsense.

I couldn't bear to see the disbandment of Sea Scorpions. While criticizing the characters in the plot for being weak and tolerant under power, they also kowtow to the nobles and be kind to hawks and dogs. While laughing at others for not knowing how to resist, at the same time saying that I am incompetent and need to be wise to protect myself. What? When you are a female cousin, you still need to build an archway? If you want to be a gentleman, combine your words and deeds to change the world; if you want to be a villain, shut up your mouth that pretends to be noble. Can't do it? If you can't do that, aren't you a waste? Why read novels with trash protagonists? I've done all the fan fiction in the magical world of Nima and still can't do it? Stalin and Hitler here did it! Don't you just want to plagiarize the plot and dare not make drastic changes to the main plot? What is the practical rationality of the nonsense? How disgusting, what a pure hypocrite.

I saw that the relationship with Coral was confirmed in the latest chapter, and a lot of people are arguing about what to do with Ciri and whether there is a harem or not, so let me share my thoughts. There may be a plot in the future where the coral also dies. The impact on Roy's spirit is more in line with the moodiness and insignificance of facing the wizarding world ("You are just a demon hunter"). If Coral died for Roy, it would sublimate the protagonist's psychological state even more. Secondly, if Coral dies at the same time (or even at the same place, because Roy and others may join in the fun and try to take advantage of it through their own foresight) in the scheduled Battle of Sodden Mountain, it will have an unprecedented impact on Roy's own "prophecy" ability - you think you have foresight, but in fact you cannot escape the arrangement of fate (point to the theory of fate and "you are just a demon hunter"). After all, the most common way to sublimate something is to kill someone close to you. Of course, it might just be an ordinary harem. After all, Ciri is a bisexual, who knows what weird (and fascinating) plots there will be. 🤔

This book is a Witcher (Witcher) fanfic. It has made some changes to some settings in the Witcher novels (mainly the sorceresses Coral and Triss). After all, Western values ​​​​are very different from the traditional values ​​​​of our people, so a second setting was made for readers 😡 (I think most people also hope this is the case). Of course, if you feel that this novel is inconsistent with the original work or that the sorceress is not what she originally was, then please read elsewhere. In addition, the author is not good at describing emotions (it also has something to do with the fact that the author is single), so please forgive me if the writing is not strong. So if you want to pursue books and you are disgusted with the above two points, then give up 🙏

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Can we just focus on piling up and not talk about relationships? The main plot is still growth and adventure. Even if we talk about relationships, can we talk about it in a place with a smaller age gap? The first reason for Coral is that she is too old. On the one hand, I feel that her gift is too obvious. The main character's deepest wish is to see Coral, which is very strange and makes no sense. And in the end, her style in the original work was a bit disappointing. Not as good as Toya. I hope the author will consider it As for Xili, from the perspective of the player, I have always regarded her as my daughter...

This one looks good, hey hey 😌