Ancestor Qingqiu

So far it looks pretty good, investment

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Come on, author, it's possible now! ! !

The first part is well written, but I feel like the plot seems a little weirder towards the end, and I can't even understand it...

Author, how can I say that your characterization is pretty good? Why don't you start from the beginning and build the world framework yourself? I bet you start to reduce your wits at the end of the writing. You may not need to go to the end, and you may start to reduce your wits in the middle.

You push the plot too fast. Write it slower. Don't worry about yourself. Write the climax. I haven't watched The Wilderness before. I probably won't be able to understand it. Write the relationship between the characters more clearly. There should be more content about the psychological environment. The rhythm of fighting on the street. Rats are juice.