
Ninja in One Piece
海贼里的忍者
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- Completed
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- 348k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
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- Qidian
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It feels pretty good, and the power system of the protagonist is well set up. I would like to vote for it with a few recommendation votes. Cheers, author!
Fruit problem
What I find some people struggle with is, you know the clues to those powerful fruits, why don't you take the time to wait? To search? —— The first point is that the protagonists in the previous stages are not without faction. There are restrictions on his status, that is to say, he is currently working in the Navy. As a worker, don't you need to deal with the work of your boss? Can I wander around as I please? You can catch fish, you can paddle, you can talk nonsense, but the above work still needs to be done. Knowing that the Thunder Fruit is on the Sky Island, he can't just quit his job in the navy and search for the Thunder Fruit all over Sky Island. Moreover, the Thunder Fruit should have appeared more than ten years later, based on the time period of this book. Spending more than ten years waiting for a powerful fruit does not mean that this is wrong. There is a problem here. Blackbeard is such a person. Yes, there is nothing wrong with it. But may I ask, why does Blackbeard wait for the Dark Fruit? If there were no Dark Fruit and no Shock Fruit, would he still be who he is now? Is he good enough to become a Yonko? There is no standard answer to this question, I can only express my own guess. Let's talk about the protagonist. If he doesn't eat the Thunder Fruit, will the protagonist definitely not be able to become stronger? —— I just think that spending more than ten years waiting for a powerful fruit is more important than working hard for more than ten years. Animal Devil Fruits, are they really bad? Is it really that bad? That's not the case, maybe the ordinary species... But the ancient species and the fantasy beast species are still very good. The protagonist who does not eat the fruit has a fragile body and a standard ninja body. He has opened Susanoo once, and he only dares to open the Eight Gate Dungeon to the third gate (why? Because the fourth gate will cause some damage to the body) How much improvement can he make under this template? It took more than ten years. After ten years, how strong can he be? It may be possible to master Armed Color Haki, but the length of Armed Color Haki is also related to the body. It can't be that he is a very fragile person, but the strength of Armed Color Haki is very strong, right? —— He after eating the fruit Do you think that increasing vitality is of no use-recovering pupil power, improving physical fitness, minimizing Susanoo's impact on the body, is it really useless? You think that the improvement of chakra is useless - but this has something to do with the protagonist's own cultivation method. What is his cultivation method? Practicing in one's own body is one's own unique advantage. Divide into five clones, the first one continues to develop the Rasengan, the second one practices the six postures, the third one does daily physical exercise, the fourth one practices domineering, and the fifth one does what. He used one day as five days. Do you think the ninja's body can withstand this kind of cultivation method before eating the fruit? Can't bear it! After ten years, is he really not enough to be at the top of the world? Is he really no better than him who ate the powerful fruit more than ten years later? I'm afraid not necessarily! —— 3 This is like a multiple-choice question. What is before me is 1 million. The opportunity tells me that after more than ten years, I can get 10 million. You only have one chance to choose, whether you want to win 1 million now, or wait until more than ten years to win 10 million. And now you have many, many advantages - in this case, why wait until more than ten years later? Now it's 1 million, and it will exceed 10 million in more than ten years! It doesn't mean that you can become very strong by eating powerful fruits, it also needs to be developed by yourself. —— It is normal for people to delve too deeply into the issue of fruits. Because it seems that pirate fans rarely choose animal-type fruits, especially if they are self-created and not of the fantasy beast type. Thunder fruit seems to exist, burning fruit seems to exist, and rubber fruit actually also exists! But the original ancient species of animals... I don't think I have seen it before. Of course, this cannot be ruled out as the reason why not many Pirates fans have seen it. —— In general, don't get too hung up on the fruits. It is normal to have different opinions, and it is normal to have different thoughts. This is actually just a book, and I am just an ordinary author. It is impossible for everything to go as you wish, and it is impossible to have the same ideas as you. So, thank you for your support!
The writing is good, but the power system is still somewhat problematic. The fighting consciousness and methods of ninjas are much better than those in the pirate world. As long as they don't encounter the natural element, a jounin who kills pirates with less than 100 million should be crushed like chopping melons and vegetables. This is not seen in the protagonist, and the role of the three magatama sharingan is unreasonably small. According to the way you write it, when you encounter Haki in the later stage, wouldn't the ninja combat system be in vain?
Beautiful pictures
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The author can't be the same, right?
I feel that the strength of the protagonist is a bit weak. Generally speaking, the three magatama of the Uchiha clan has the strength of jounin, and the kaleidoscope has the strength of shadow. The strength here only refers to the basic strength, and the chakra will naturally increase with the improvement of the sharingan. The jounin is also a jounin, which is too weak. Kakashi's strength was greatly weakened because it was not his own eyes. Look at the time when Lin died, Obito stormed off. The enemy troops can be destroyed by one person, and the troops led by jounin can be slaughtered by opening the eyes of the crane. The dynamic vision of the three magatama is actually a kind of suppression for those who have no knowledge. Look at the time when Sasuke just opened the three magatama, it is similar to Kakakuri who just started to fight Luffy. In fact, as long as you don't add skills randomly, such as a wood escape, the basic strength setting will not collapse, and there is no need to suppress it so much.
There is no second pair of kaleidoscopes. . How does the protagonist integrate the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan? Will Sharingan be used more and more in future battles? Or evolve on your own?
And the main character's biggest advantage right now is the kaleidoscope, and if he uses it too much, he will become blind, which is an unavoidable obstacle. Now it is more difficult for the protagonist to take the orthodox Eternal and Hashirama cell transplant route. Normally, in the world of pirates, one would think of Devil Fruits. If I were the protagonist, I would never eat Devil Fruits randomly, but Devil Fruits that can make up for eye defects. For example, regarding the Devil Fruit related to the eyes, Violet is not very old now, and the original work does not seem to explain when she ate the Devil Fruit. It is undoubtedly a good choice to stare at the Devil Fruit. You can also look for devil fruits that may have the effect of immortality. For example, the ability of the phoenix is possible, but of course the phoenix is impossible.
Is genjutsu useful to people in the pirate world without chakra?
Suddenly I realized a very serious question, is genjutsu useful to people without chakra? I took it for granted before, but now I realize that there seems to be no accurate answer to this question. The definition of illusion can be found on Baidu, so I won't repeat it here. They all use the chakra in the body to interfere with the opponent's five senses. The more advanced the illusion, the more powerful it will be. Another question arises here. Do civilians in the Naruto world also have chakra energy in their bodies? This means that they have this energy in their bodies, but they cannot use it, but only if they have this energy. So, illusion is useful to civilians in the Naruto world. But the question is, do people in the pirate world also have chakra in their bodies? After going around and around, these three questions are the most troublesome, and there is not even an accurate explanation. Moreover, I took it for granted at first and subconsciously thought that illusion must be useful to people in the pirate world. After repeated verification, I found out that I can't be so sure? Now, I can only try my best to round this point~ In short, I'm sorry, it was my negligence!
Eh! Physical fitness, ninjas have 130 trillion cells, and earthlings have 37.2 Trillion cells. In terms of quality, the physique of a professional boxer is 4 times that of ordinary people, the strength of a strongman is generally 5 to 6 times, the world weightlifting champion is 10 times, and the cells of a ninja are 3.5 Times that of an earthling. The physique we are talking about is the comparison of physical strength and health status with that of ordinary people. Ninjas are fundamentally the same height, bones, muscles, organs, and mass. The density is completely different. The 11 most powerful people in the world have only 37.2 Trillion cells no matter how powerful they are. There is no essential difference between them and ordinary people. Lewis and Mac Miller jointly lifted a 71.35-Ton power platform in Las Vegas, USA. This is the highest record of the current leg lift power platform. The cells of the same body type are 3.5 Times that of people on the earth. These are not just three and a half people, eh! Physical fitness: Ninjas have 130 trillion cells and Earthlings have 37.2 Trillion cells. In terms of physical fitness, a professional boxer's physique is 4 times that of an ordinary person, a strongman's strength is generally 5 to 6 times that of a world weightlifting champion, and a ninja's cells are 3.5 Times that of an Earthling. The physique mentioned is the comparison between physical strength and health status and that of ordinary people. Ninjas are basically the same height, bones, muscles, organs, and the mass density is completely different. No matter how powerful the 11 most powerful people in the world are, they only have 37.2 Trillion cells compared to ordinary people. There is no essential difference between people. Lewis and Mac Miller jointly lifted 71.35 Tons on the leg lift platform in Las Vegas, USA. This is the highest record on the leg lift platform today. The cells of the same body type are 3.5 Times that of humans on earth. This is not a simple addition or subtraction. Just Lewis and Mac Miller's strength platform cannot be handled by 10 people. Even if the ninja strength is calculated according to normal addition and subtraction (not counting chakra, only pure physical strength), the ninja leg strength platform has 249.725 Tons. This is calculated by simple addition and subtraction. Xiao Li died in the chunin exam. In the Forest of Death, it took at least tens of thousands of tons of force to insert one hand into the ground and easily pull out a tree root that was one meter deep and three meters deep. Xiao Li was only a 13-year-old genin at the time. A modern tree puller requires 50 tons of force to pull out a 20cm tree, not to mention that Xiao Li was able to pull out a tree root that was three meters deep. , Considering the cross-sectional volume friction coefficient, it is not a problem for Xiao Li to have a strength of 100,000 tons. The difference in strength between ordinary ninjas and Xiao Li is not too big (provided that he does not open the Eight Gate Dungeon). Otherwise, other people like Xiao Li and others who took the chunin test will be killed with one punch. Only Kai's strength is What 99.9% Of ninjas cannot achieve, chakra can also strengthen the perception of strength, speed and armor penetration in all directions. Two boxers with the same strength can fight for more than ten rounds. If the gap between the boxers is too big, like Tyson, one punch can be used. Ninjas use ninjutsu (Chuck) La) It's like a boxer holding a knife. You don't have to fight for more than ten rounds and you can't tell the winner. If you use it, it will hit you. It's enough to say that the Hokage's physical condition is poor. It's like two ninjas fighting Taijutsu in order to fight quickly. You take out the knife and I will add chakra to my body. I will also add chakra to the sword. Who am I? Then I used earth escape to defend myself against ninjutsu, and I added thunder escape to the sword. What a ninja requires is to kill with one sword, and physical skills are enough to assist (except for those who don't know ninjutsu and illusion and want to be a ninja). In the early stage of pirates, there are only many physical attacks. Being cut down by a sword is not a way to break the defense. In the later stage, Wano Country was sent flying. If the dart hits you, you will still die. If you use natural-type physical skills later, you won't be able to do it even if you are a specialist in physical training. Some people say that all basic personnel in the navy can do more than 2,000 thumb push-ups. They say that Xiao Li can do more than 7,000 thumb push-ups with one hand while standing on his head. He is the only exception, not to mention Xiao Li's legs. He trembles when he puts on a heavy weight and drops it on the ground. How old is Xiao Li? 13. The basic personnel of Navy 99 are all middle-aged. If Xiao Li is an exception, are other ninjas and Xiao Li not of the same species? Xiao Li is a civilian ninja, okay? Hatter, Kai, and Steel Hand Raikage have to compete for talent. Xiao Li is not yet ready to fight for his talent. Isn't there an eight-door armor taijutsu class behind Hokage? They can kick meteorites. All taijutsu in One Piece have a wide range of damage. Who in Hokage is not focused on recruiting and can kill with one punch without throwing two punches. The physique of pirates is the same. The strength of the grassroots It's really not as good as a ninja. The strength of the top brass (here I only refer to the physical body of Taijutsu) can't compare to Raikage's flesh that can't be torn apart by the speed of light. The steel hand Raikage can't beat the strength. Kai can't escape even if he twists the space light with his body. However, the top pirates have more power. The other top brass of Naruto are not as good as conjoined ones. Only a combination of ninjutsu can make up for it. The natural and superhuman fruits are the real trouble, okay? Ninjas can deal with the superhuman type. They have the blood inheritance limit. Natural type, sea tower stone, drained his stamina (the consumption of this unrealistic attack must be greater than the consumption of standing still) seal, attribute power The suppression of Utopia (such as Akainu beating Ace) is to be honest, Naruto's physique is stronger than that of the pirates. The strength of 13-year-old Xiao Li is stronger than that of the ninja mermaid Aaron, and the strength of the mermaid is still ten times that of a human. In the novel Naruto Kakashi Legend, the horse-drawn carriage took half a year and the ninja completed it in 20 days, and Calculated by Uchiha Itachi's True Story Ninja School students running for hours without breaking a sweat, the ninja's running speed is 399 kilometers per hour. According to the top view of the ninja world in the final Naruto movie, the world of Naruto is about the same size as Jupiter. I don't know what to think of this physique.
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In fact, the Rasengan's internal-breaking moves are more suitable for dealing with people with strong resilience among pirates, especially those with wind and fire attributes.
When writing, can the author use less modal particles, describe less about the inner activities of the protagonist, and write more dialogues? After reading the previous chapters, they are all about inner activities. You are tired when you write, and I am tired when I read. . . .
I thought the Uchiha clan crossed over into pirates🐶
I feel that the One Piece world is stronger than the Naruto world. For example, the training system in the One Piece world is diversified and is much stronger than Naruto's single ninja. There are also various creatures that are not comparable to Naruto. It is also better than Naruto in terms of science and technology. People's lifespan is also longer than that of people in the Naruto world. The demon high school ability is also stronger than Ninjutsu. After all, to perform Ninjutsu, you need to form seals.
To be honest, eating that cave lion fruit is really a poisonous point. Anyone who has watched One Piece knows that there may be a Thunder Fruit on Sky Island Bika, and there is Red Earl's Devil Fruit in Sleeping Town, which seems to be the vampire form of a fantasy beast species.
I feel that my strength increased too much after eating a pig's trotter. I also gained too much physical strength after eating a fruit. I didn't do much training or fighting. There is a feeling that my strength is empty. It is better to keep fighting and get stronger, and constantly defeat enemies of different strengths, so that readers can feel that the pig's trotter is improving little by little. In this way, the strength of the pig's trotter feels like flesh and bones, and it gives people a sense of immersion when looking at it, rather than such a sudden strength that means reaching a lieutenant general or other stages.
A few words of complaint. Since this is the theme of Naruto in One Piece, don't eat from the pot and look at the bowl. For example, your ability to escape from dust has been ignored by you? Why do you want pink eye? There is no chakra in the pirate world to allow you to perform illusions. The upper limit is the ordinary kaleidoscope. It can only be used in the first stage. It is of no use. It is used for myopia once. Isn't Chendu delicious? You can fly, run, use skills, and the island disappears instantly. Isn't Mudun delicious? Although the first generation is awesome. Isn't it nice to fly the God of Thunder? Are you afraid that you can't run if you can't fight? It's not like a gentleman must take revenge before it's too late. The worst case scenario is to get someone reincarnated in the dirt to collect the DNA. If you are dead and unable to die, it will also drain the opponent's energy. There are also various life-saving magical skills. You can choose a fruit that adds weaknesses to yourself. . . Of course, if I put in a few skills like a certain Pirates fan next door, I won't be as exhausted as I am. I didn't say that. After complaining, the pen is in your hand and you can continue to use it.
Is the author the author of the fourth natural disaster in One Piece?
The world of One Piece also has ninja ninjutsu that is relatively rubbish, such as Wano Country.
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I really don't understand. Isn't the local pirate system enough? If you have to make mistakes like other anime, can your writing be able to handle it?
In terms of the combat power system of Naruto and Pirates, the low-end combat power of the Pirates crushes Naruto, but the high-end combat power is not necessarily true. If the generals of the Pirates correspond to Kage-level strength, but Naruto has six or half-step six paths, and Naruto's most powerful is the Forbidden Jutsu: The Reincarnation of the Eight Gates. If they really fight, Kabuto, the gold captain, runs around in One Piece, Roger Rocks, the white beard, is not on the Hokage side, not to mention that the zombie Moria is not on the same level.
On fruits
If you have any opinions or thoughts about the protagonist's fruit, I'll explain it here. First of all, what I have always emphasized is that this is not the best choice, but it is the most appropriate choice. The protagonist naturally knows that the Thunder Fruit is powerful, the Burning Fruit is powerful, and the Childlike Fruit is a bug. But the problem is that some fruits appeared more than ten years later, such as the Burning Fruit, which appeared more than ten years later and was eaten by Ace, so Ace, the Fire Fist, fought all the way to the new world. Ace is still a little kid now! The Thunder Fruit is actually similar. I know it is on an empty island, but what is the specifics? These things are not very clear. In fact, they are difficult to find. They are not as simple as you think. Let's talk about some superhuman devil fruits, such as the rubber fruit, which are relatively recent in time, and the possibility of obtaining them is quite high. But the second gear hurts the body. Although it can be avoided later, it is a little hurtful at the beginning. How does the protagonist play? Susanoo hurts the body, the Mangekyou Eye Technique hurts the body, and the fourth gate of the Eight Gates Dungeon will hurt the body again... As a ninja, his body is not very strong, at least compared to the perverts in this world, it is not very outstanding. That's why I say it is the most suitable choice. The Superman Glare Fruit, a Devil Fruit related to eyes, may mutate after being eaten, but this is only possible. If there is no mutation, how much do you think this Devil Fruit can improve the protagonist? Some abilities overlap with Kaleidoscope! It would be unrealistic to rush to the New World to search for such a small possibility. Why would the protagonist consider the animal system? Because he felt that the powerful vitality contained in it could have the same effect as Hashirama's cells, causing his kaleidoscope to mutate and evolve into an eternal kaleidoscope. This is even more reliable than the one above, but it is a pity that the kaleidoscope's pupil power has increased, but it has not evolved into the eternal kaleidoscope. Next, what he needs to consider is no longer the kaleidoscope mutation caused by eating Devil Fruit, but a scientific approach. To get back to the subject, the difficulty of mastering the animal system is actually not that high, unlike the superman system which requires development. Coupled with vitality and recovery power, it can withstand the damage caused to itself after the eight gates are opened, and can even quickly open the fifth and sixth gates. Moreover, he can even create multiple shadow clones. This shadow clone practices the six postures, this shadow clone practices domineering, this shadow clone develops Rasengan daily, and so on. A powerful body allows him to withstand the fatigue caused by multiple shadow clones. If you give him ten years, can he really not reach the top? Susanoh is a double-edged sword, and his eyes also have great side effects, so if you want to rely on these two, your strength is a bit weak. His future template is: Eight-door Dunjia + powerful physical body + six physical skills + two-color domineering In fact, the first three have been completed very well, the main thing is to make up for the last shortcoming.
Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~
There is really no bright spot (don't criticize, tell the truth, it has nothing to do with the family)
The name made up of two surnames is so cool
Update soon and finish writing. Be sure to write about the skills of ninjutsu and the ability of ninjas to defeat the strong with the weak.
Be an undercover agent and become the boss. Then I told Warring States that I am a serious person and it must be very interesting.
I feel that there is too much emphasis on power. To be honest, the Navy is already a force. You have to start a new business under the Navy to cultivate party members and so on. But you are Akatsuki and the Bounty Alliance. Let's not talk about the overlap of functions. Just look at whether the protagonist needs these organizations. Do you need these organizations for the logistics support of the Navy's intelligence system? If he rebelled against the Navy, he would not be able to still organize a member intelligence network in the Navy. You, a Jounin of Konoha, still need information? To you, the secrecy methods used in One Piece are just like a joke.