Tokyo Sword Saint 2077

The author's writing style is very mature, so he shouldn't be a novice. I think it is better than the other Tokyo Sword Master. Then there are the disadvantages. First, the plot is too compact and makes people breathless. The first chapter has just been traveled, the seventh chapter has paid off the debt, and the second chapter has even killed the first mini-BOSS. The average reader has not yet realized what the mechanical white clothes are doing. Is it really necessary to be in such a hurry? Chapter 23 of Lord of Best Friends is still buying clothes. Practice your expansion skills, add more reactions and psychological activities of passers-by people around the protagonist, and add more perceptions and reactions of others to the protagonist's behavior. Write more fighting plots and be more detailed - the rhythm of killing Bai Yi in Chapter 50 is good. Second, the author has too many personal items. It's not that you can't bring personal items, but you can't bring too much, and you can't express your attitude towards these personal items. Instead, you should describe them from a neutral perspective. For example, it is obvious from the two heroines' reactions to women's rights that the author is against women's rights. And Wollman - the one who came up has not been falsified yet? I felt numb when I saw it. For example, The Three-Body Problem has a wg plot, but he describes it as if it were a historical event, without judging whether it is good or bad, right or wrong. The third thing is the story, which is too streamlined and does not give readers a strong motivation to follow it. Obviously debt is a good main plot driver. The money is paid back before the reader feels the oppression caused by debt. The protagonist is in a life-and-death struggle. There is no sense of crisis yet. He is defeated with a golden finger and is subjected to school violence without even a little humiliation. Come on, Hua's solved it in one go. At least the Battle of the Sphere made people slap the marriage certificate on their faces... A protagonist's needs can always be solved within ten chapters. How can this book be written well... Finally, is Hoshino Shiori's prototype Sakura Futaba from p5?

I feel like the biggest problem with this book is that in a cyberpunk worldview, can ordinary people still go to school?

A wonderful idea. Why don't normal people without prosthetics install two additional arms? Wouldn't it be cool to have two more arms? It can also increase work efficiency.

😭Come back, Tokyo Sword Master😭 🌟My most proud belief🌟 ⚡️The night of Gen is vivid in my mind⚡️ 😭Tears are flowing inexplicably😭 💥Vaguely remember the dragon ghost face💥 👍and the powerful psychic power👍 ⚡️Repelled all the enemies⚡️ ✨Stay up all night and don't feel tired✨

There are too many meaningless questions, not interesting, and there are too many inner descriptions. This kind of writing method of analyzing one's own private novel is too petty. Describe more battle plots, use golden fingers to explore the end of force, and blow away all obstacles!

I added a bookshelf to high school. I've graduated from college and started working, but I haven't finished it yet.

Draw the costume of the male protagonist when he goes on a mission.

I just hope the author doesn't want eunuchs, I really enjoyed this book.

I never expected that someone so well written could actually be a eunuch.

I watched it with Tokyo Kendo in 20 years ago. I didn't expect that almost six years have passed by in a flash. I don't know how the author is doing part-time. It's good to have time to write. At least I know that the author is still there.