Douluo Starts from Blowing up the Soul Ring

It can be seen from this that people in Douluo Continent are too weak. Any carbon-based creature can be killed instantly

The writing style is average, and to put it bluntly, it is readable. Many places are not detailed enough, the plot moves too fast, and there are no reasonable explanations in many places. To put it bluntly, when the protagonist arrives at a new place, I can't even figure out what that place looks like. The general layout of the scene As for the settings, character costumes, character figures, plot details, dialogue details, and character personalities, I basically can't feel it. It feels like a diary. Of course, I only evaluate it seriously as a book. In fact, there is another point, that is, each chapter is really short. . . . . The result of advancing the plot too quickly is that it will be finished in a short time. . . These shortcomings have led to many people abandoning the article halfway, basically coming for the plot of Wai Wai, and then leaving after Wai Wai is finished. . . . But Shuangwen is an alternative plot. Indeed, the plot is really good and it is the essence of ntr. However, I still hope that the author can really add more details when writing, especially some, ahem, you know the scenes. In addition, no one is a writing master right away. Come on, author. I look forward to seeing an ntr plot with many details one day, especially, ahem.

This book is really in line with my taste. Firstly, it does not belong to Tang San. Secondly, it does not follow the formula of the original book I hope the author will continue to write great works.

Author: You can write another Douluo novel with an uneasy plot! Just like what you said, Tang San's Blue Silver Grass Martial Spirit should be used as the main body of the hidden weapon and add a spirit ring. The Blue Silver Grass can grow infinitely and freely, add metallic properties, penetrate, explode... And have a spirit ring!

After level 99, you can condense a golden elixir, and your moves can not only be electric or magnetic, but also use your inner energy and so on. Now this skill and body training are a bit monotonous and not powerful enough. Moreover, thunder and lightning training cannot be used for too long. For reference, although Raikage's Douluo combat power is rubbish, he can only become a super Douluo at most, and this is what a person can do after training for a lifetime, which shows that there is a limit. Finally, I hope I can write better (･ิϖ･ิ)っ

After so many years in Zongheng Qidian, whoever saw me would call me a free prostitute without admiration, but I didn't expect that I would stumble here. The author should be faster, this fan wrote well. 🙂

To be honest, although I'm still a little uncomfortable with it, my writing is really good, so keep up the good work! 🤓

All the votes have been given, the author should work hard to update! There are not enough 10,000 words in this day!

I'll hold it in my mouth. Doesn't it taste good at ten o'clock a day? 😏

It's Douluo who pries the protagonist's corner again, and there's already a grassland on Tang San's head.

Come on, write well, hold on tight and don't collapse.

Not bad, quite creative. It's the first time I've seen someone who doesn't play Ring Hunt and relies entirely on self-created skills.

After reading this book, I feel that other Douluo fans have become boring. Regardless of his plot handling ability and three-dimensional perspective issues, at least his innovation, starting point, main character creation, writing style, etc. Are successful. It can be said that this is an excellent work that originated from Douluo, but transcends the limitations of Douluo, and breaks the stereotypes.

Let me comment on the protagonist of this book. The character, character, and behavior pattern are as high as 70% similar to Tang San in the original book Dou 1. They can be classified as the same type of people. They are self-centered and selfish. For the sake of their goals, they will play dirty tricks if they can't do it head-on. If they can't do it, they will take over by force. It can be said that the means are unscrupulous and there is no lower limit. A despicable person with no bottom line is as good as Tang San. Tang San weighed half a catty and he weighed eight taels, which was a little better, but they were both hypocrites. The protagonist does whatever he wants, not remembering gratitude but only remembering grudges. For example, in the early stage, Qian Renxue helped him enter school, so that he had the opportunity to get close to Duguyan and have the chance to rise. This is a great favor. Look how he treats his benefactor. There have been several such incidents, too many to list here. In short, it was like seeing another version of modern Tang San traveling through time.

The classic start high, go low, have a good attitude in the early stage, correct mistakes when they are made, and reply, but in the later stage, you will not see anyone, there are a lot of typos, there are a lot of plot bugs, and then you just waste money, no wonder the results are mediocre, you deserve it.

This is the first time I have the urge to write a book review. This book suits my taste so well. First of all, it is not recommended for book lovers who have a sense of empathy for the original protagonist. The biggest feature of this book is that the author does not cover up the selfishness of the protagonist, and decisively destroys what he cannot get. The girl he likes also has the opportunity to have sex directly, and there is no chance to slander the love rival (it is not slander, the love rival is not a good man). The plot has a sense of conflict but is not overwhelming. Although the protagonist's every move is not seamless, it is the best choice under the general situation. It's just that the protagonist improves a bit quickly. Although it's cool, it's not easy to write a long story like this. I feel like I can only write a few hundred chapters normally. My suggestion is that you don't need to deliberately increase the strength of the original protagonist or create a new villain, just finish it when the rhythm is up. I suggest changing the copy, if changing the name is not troublesome.

First, the protagonist is not born with full soul power, nor does he have a very powerful martial soul, nor is he so outrageous as having twins and three beings at every turn. He is so powerful because of his own wisdom and hard work. I still prefer protagonists with creative thinking Second, there is no cheat that is too powerful. The only cheat is the memory of the protagonist's previous life. However, without the protagonist's thinking and role, it still cannot be effective, so the cheat is not very powerful, which is better. Personally, I don't like the kind of cheat that does not use any brain and relies entirely on cheats to level up Third, it doesn't overlap with too many original plots with Tang San, and the most important thing is, don't lick Tang San, don't lick the master Fourth, that is not in the Holy Soul Village, which is good Fifth, it actually makes Xiao Wu pregnant with the protagonist's child, which is really awesome So, I feel good about this book, well, come on, author, don't be an eunuch.

I'm speechless. There are 8 titled Douluo in the Tiandou Empire in Douyi? ? ? If you just force yourself to improve, can you still be suppressed by the Star Luo Empire?

Among all the Douluo fanfics, I feel that you have chosen the best one. I don't comment often. This novel is my first time to review it. I am also an old bookworm who has read it for more than five years. I can only say that it is one of the best quality among all the Douluo fanfics I have read. Come on, author! !

Beautiful!

Finally someone wrote my thoughts😭😭😭 I like this novel so much I will give you 500!

In summary

I don't know where I found the picture.

Su Xiaotu

From what I saw in other groups, this author writes well

High EQ: New settings for the start Low EQ: Licking a dog will lead to a good death

To be honest, this is the only Douluo fanfic that has a harem but has brains. It is well-founded and well-founded. Although it was a little bit poisonous in the early stage, it is not a big poison. It is worth watching, and it is getting better and better now and has its own plot, so I ordered it all (please improve it)

This Douluo is really written well, the different Douluo Continent, the author is very impressive

I suddenly discovered a huge bug. According to the original work, the rule limit of Douluo World is soul rings, just like online games, levels. The restrictions are dead. Just like some online games, it has a level cap, and then the level cap will be gradually opened. Even if a person is level 70, 9999999999999999W/3000w. You can upgrade with 30 million experience points, but the system does not open a level limit, so upgrades are not allowed. However, the official does not want players to slack off because their level has reached the upper limit. So there is accumulation of experience. Level 70 is level 70, the restrictions are dead. Even if there are infinite experience points, they cannot be upgraded and converted into combat power. When Douluo was created, the Zhengzheng Internet literary world was in full bloom, and virtual reality online games were still very popular at that time. Sugar Add Three Spoons may be because I want to write a book that combines other worlds and online games. This is the basic system of Douluo. This is a different world, and this is real. But just like the game, there are levels, and there is a level limit, and you need a soul ring to break through. It can also explode equipment (soul bones). And there are skills (soul skills), which are the kind of skills that can be used with just a click (with a thought) regardless of whether you know it or not, whether you know the principle or not. Isn't this the rule of the game? So the basic rule of the Douluo world should be this. Sugar plus three spoons is a world rule inspired by the rules of the game. As for whether there will be any reading later, I don't know. I only watched Dou Yi and couldn't stand the rest. The other thing is that Tang San, as described in the original work, had a period of time where his skill failed to make any progress. There's just not the slightest improvement. This is a limitation of the rules of the world. Tang San started practicing since he was a child, and he didn't reach level 13 until he obtained his first spirit ring. First of all, Tang San's parents were not ordinary people, so Tang San just did nothing and didn't practice. A six-year-old's martial soul awakening should also be innately full of soul power. Assuming that Tang San started training at the age of 3, he would only be at level 13 until he obtained his first spirit ring. Did it take three years to reach level 3? And it could be even less, or we might as well assume that Tang San had innate soul power of level 12, but didn't show it, and then absorbed a soul ring and broke through to level 13. Did Tang San practice over the years to become a dog? This should be a bug. Maybe I didn't pay attention when I wrote Sugar Add Three Spoons, or I didn't want the protagonist to level up too quickly. Otherwise, it's based on logic and rules. 1. Tang San's parents were extraordinary, and their innate soul power must be level 10 or above. 2. Principle of accumulation of experience. 3. Tang San doesn't know when he started practicing. It is assumed that he started practicing at the age of 3 and practiced for at least 3 years. 4. Xuantian Gong is the top skill in another world. That world may be high martial arts or even Xianxia. This technique has been at least a thousand or even thousands of years old and has been perfected through the efforts of countless generations of outstanding people and sages. So there are bugs in the original book, but it took too long for the book to be finished and no one looked into it, so they ignored it. According to this logical reasoning, if Tang San obtains the spirit ring, he might be able to directly reach the level limit of level 20. But Tang San didn't have it, so it can only be a bug. This is a bug in the original work. Let's talk about the book again, a time traveler in modern society, without a system. Why should he be compared to Tang Sandiao who knew the secrets of ancient martial arts? The protagonist has never had any contact with the so-called meridians and acupuncture points in modern times. Why are the exercises created by the efforts of thousands of years of outstanding people and sages from the Tang Sect in another world inferior to the exercises created by a time traveler based on the unfounded theories of anime movies? And why, the protagonist can level up without a soul ring, but Tang San can't. It can only be said that times have changed. The creator god has changed, and the rules have changed. Starting from the first chapter of this book, the rules of the world have quietly changed. This is no longer the previous world of Douluo Continent. The final interpretation of the rules here belongs to the Creator God, that is, the author. But under the rules, all living beings should be equal. The God of Creation can cheat the protagonist, but there must be a reason. Usually the excuse is the system. All other aspects should be treated equally. So, in the past, Tang San could not make any progress in practicing Xuantian Kung for three months. But starting from the first chapter of this book, the rules changed, Xuantian Gong nb. The Xuantian Kung Fu must be far stronger than the main character's own techniques. The gap should be that Jin Yong's martial arts skills were practiced by a third-rate sidekick, and the gap between the Nine Yin Manual is so big But because Tang San had a soul ring, the soul ring restricted Tang San's training skills. If Tang San also explodes the ring, under the rules of this book, he will definitely be a super NPC. Both the training speed and the strength of moves will be greatly improved. Unlike the master, he is a native of Douluo. Since the natives have become accustomed to spirit rings, they rarely use fancy techniques. In other words, the previous world rules did not allow it. He exploded the soul ring, but he didn't know any skills himself, and Tang was unwilling to give his Xuantian Skill to the master. So, the master is dead. If Tang San also explodes the ring. Then his cultivation speed and speed of getting stronger. Refer to Zhou Zhiruo's practice of the Nine Yin Manual. From a sister who can be bullied by anyone but cannot be beaten by anyone. He has become a big devil who can't defeat anyone except the protagonist Zhang Wuji and is not afraid of anyone. If Tang San dared to explode the ring and concentrate on practicing Xuantian Kung Fu, then he would be a real cheater and a real NPC. There are so many derivative world lines. Tang San was forced into a desperate situation (because all the opportunities in the original work were cut off, but the crisis in the original work is still there.), And asked the protagonist for a way to quickly become stronger. The protagonist thought, hey hey, let's see if I don't make you as useless as the master. Then he was fooled. Tang San was deceived and began to explode his soul rings. Then cheat and counterattack. The protagonist is dumbfounded. Because the protagonist did not reveal his sinister intentions. So Tang San regards the protagonist as a real good friend. But the protagonist knows that he and Tang San are incompatible with each other, and it is only a matter of time before the boat of friendship capsizes. So secretly, he deliberately planned to destroy Tang San, and at the same time, he kept a low profile to clean up his past tail. After a battle of wits and courage, the protagonist's acting skills exploded and he succeeded in killing Tang San. And obtained Xuantian Kung. First of all, a plan forced Tang San and himself into danger. Hide your own strength. Then Tang San was seriously injured and on the verge of death, and the protagonist showed off his acting skills and gave crazy hints. (Ye Shenyue) Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ) Then Tang San entrusted the protagonist and gave him all the Tang Sect skills, hoping that the protagonist would carry forward the Tang Sect in the other world. Then the protagonist waits for Tang San to die, and then takes the skill as his own. Tangmen? Something. Then based on your own modern knowledge and experience, you can improve Xuantian Kung into a version that best suits you. Then it got harder. World Line 2. The protagonist suddenly thought that Xuantian Kung might be npc, and then used some unfair means to obtain Xuantian Kung, such as threatening Tang San with Xiao Wu's life to hand over the technique. Given the importance of Xiao Wu in Tang San's heart, Tang San would of course accept her. Then the protagonist levels up faster. Stronger. However, Tang San knew that Xiao Wu had been eaten by the protagonist a long time ago, and even had a child. It cracked on the spot. I want to beat the protagonist to death, but because the protagonist is too NPC, I can't beat him. In a fit of anger, my IQ suddenly went online and I exploded. Can I be that powerful? Then it exploded, and relying on Xuantian Kung, it also started to become violent. Then the two hung on the wall (playing martial arts in Douluo World), fighting wits and courage. The Douluo natives were stunned with all kinds of dazzling and flashy moves. Then Tang San was superior, but the God of Creation gave the protagonist a new trick. . . It's fun to cheat for a while, and it's fun to cheat all the time.

This author has a bit of a side job.