Taoist Priests in the World of Zhu Xian

If the writing is not enough, I have to challenge the fancy description method and dig holes randomly. As a result, I can't even connect the normal description process, and I don't know who said the dialogue language. Do you want to fly a plane even if you can't walk?

It feels good, but the protagonist's IQ is a flaw! It's too naive to be human in two lifetimes. There is no stability at all, but the rest is okay!

I really didn't understand the prologue. The preface didn't match the postscript. It said that an old man in the family died. When I was about to get home, I encountered road construction in the village, and all the roads were blocked. When I got off the car, I said it was going to rain, and I said I had to stay with the unlucky guy all the way. It was really hard for me to read. The relationship between the previous sentence and the next sentence had to be guessed...

Still the same problem, maybe the images in the author's mind when writing were not expressed in the text, and some simple dialogues, in the end, he stopped, hum, ah, who said that? What about the front one? Very dry, very blunt, uh uh, writing style?

I hope the protagonist will improve his cultivation level soon. . . . I feel like my cultivation is out of place hahaha. .

I feel like sometimes the dialogue between the characters is not clear enough, or I didn't read it carefully. I know who is telling whom, but it's always a little blurry and I feel like I can't get into it.

Let me make a complaint. When I read novels, I always read the table of contents first. I only read the table of contents if the table of contents is interesting. In some novels, I can tell what the plot trend is like and whether the novel is good or not by looking at the table of contents. Your catalog contains either one word or two words. I have absolutely no desire to read it.

Don't miss it if you pass by... Well, it seems the scene is wrong, it's off track! 🙏Take up a little bit of your precious time and mention your thoughts and opinions after each chapter 😡Thank you! When making up stories (copying stories), there is always a feeling of looking forward and backward, especially when I think of hundreds of judges listening to my report in the audience, I feel uneasy for no reason 😄

I was confused as I read the first few chapters, and even the dialogue was a bit confusing.

Carefully ask, the heroine is Xue Qi

The beginning is a bit confusing, but the plot is okay later on, but the dialogue often makes it difficult to understand who is speaking. . .

When will the protagonist arrive in Shangqing? Is it okay to go to the wilderness? ? Then the Demon Cult will attack the Qingyun Sect.

The author wrote about whether Taoist priests can write about their duties, instead of just practicing and killing people everywhere. You can write something about going down the mountain to enlighten the souls and leave some opportunities. For example, if a person's mother or father is sick and has no money to treat, you can test it and then give a medical elixir or something. You can also punish some bad people. You can also pull people on the edge of the cliff to prevent them from falling into the devil. Of course, this is a personal suggestion. If the author adopts the details, he must grasp them carefully.