Lord of Ashes

Everyone says this book is not good, but I read this book so well that it really cured my severe insomnia. I click on the listening mode every day when it's time to go to bed, and I fall asleep within 10 minutes. It's such an amazing miracle doctor. And after listening to the whole book, the second time the effect is better than the last time. It's amazing! I like such an awesome book so much😍{"TopicId":"586286831142961152","TopicName":"Book Recommendation"}

If you want to read this novel, read here first to avoid wasting time and energy! This novel is really amazing. It is an exquisite piece of rubbish. It is wordy, repetitive, and the content is dry. Let me describe it this way. Let me give you an easy-to-understand example: Other books will rarely write about the protagonist going to the toilet, but this book will not only write about it, but also go into detail. For example, why the protagonist needs to go to the toilet, where to go to the toilet, and then extend the history of the toilet, and then the main theme. When the character enters the toilet, I write about how the protagonist chooses an empty space and what the details are. Then I write about how the protagonist takes off his pants, and also extends the taste of the protagonist's pants. Then the highlight comes, how the protagonist releases the water, how long it takes to release the water, how many milliliters of water is released, and what the color is. At the end, the protagonist makes another sultry comment, and then assumes how long it will take to hold a meeting, and how many times it will take to release the water. It's over. The whole incident of the protagonist going to the toilet could have been mentioned in this sentence, but the author could have written 20 chapters. I patiently read nearly a hundred chapters without remembering any of the plot. The character data panel, skill descriptions, and monster hunting and unboxing were all copied and pasted. The data was very detailed. How many monsters the protagonist defeated, what kind of monsters they were, how many points each monster had, and how many points the protagonist upgraded to each level. All these were calculated, really! Real! There is no need to write this! ! Author, are you made of water? Before you become an author and write a book, you should have read a lot of novels. Have you seen other authors write books like this? Can you read the book you wrote yourself? How did your innocent hands knock out such a piece of garbage? I have been reading books for seven or eight years, and I have never seen anyone so perfunctory as you!

Too watery, too much nonsense, which seriously affects the reading experience. I often need to skip some useless nonsense, thinking that the paid chapters will change, but it turns out that it doesn't. Author, your way of writing makes it difficult for people to want to read the original version. I feel that more than half of the content I paid to subscribe to is useless nonsense, that is, a thing that has been mentioned before will come back and forth, mentioned over and over again, and then it will be repeated. It feels really annoying to use the data to make up the word count. The content that was originally only a few dozen chapters feels like it has been watered down to more than 200 chapters. It seems that I have gained more subscription money through water filling, but I feel that I may have made less money because many people may not read the original version.

High EQ: The author's writing is good and the details are well described Low EQ: Water 🙂

Everything else is fine, but it's too watery.

This is the most ridiculous book I have ever read. I testify with my 25 years of book experience.

Written in front, this is Pacific grade water. In my impression, it can be compared to Emperor Ba.

This is the most ridiculous novel I have ever read. Each chapter introduces an equipment attribute and then disappears. A copy that can be completed in three chapters has to be completed in twenty chapters. The full text is more interesting in reality, but in reality it is only one-tenth. I fell asleep many times while reading it. Two-thirds of the book is just water 😐

The novel is well written, but it is too watery. One-third of the more than 2 million words in the book is watery.

A fairly interesting and humorous stand-alone novel

It's an eye-opener. It's the first time I've seen such a good book. I can paste and copy two chapters in the property panel. You're really 6

I feel like the author is too verbose, and can the update be faster?

I'm really tired of such water-filled books, so I think I can just write them happily? You have to sell it for money. This is paid. Do you understand how to respect readers? If you are willing to spend money to read your book, you are attracted by your setting and respect your efforts. Do you respect the readers who pay money? Just show us some repetitive and verbose garbage. If you don't respect me, I don't have to be polite to you. This book has a good premise, but it's garbage! Complete rubbish!

I can't stand it anymore. Is the author a talkative person or someone who likes to talk to himself? There are more than 200 chapters in one copy, and 2/3+ is nonsense.

He's really good at it. Upgrading a few skills can take up to four or five chapters. Opening equipment can take another four or five chapters. Look at the panel again and it can take another chapter. Then there can be a monster board and it can take another chapter. Then after another chapter, the transition from killing monsters can start to take a turn for the worse.

The water content is 100%. This cannot be directly published to save the Sahara Desert.

This book is good to read, but could the author streamline it a little... Some things should not be so watery?

I see a big problem so far in Chapter 13. One sentence keeps repeating. A typical example is that the protagonist moved the slot machine back and then follows it with the sentence "Yes, he moved it back again." Repeating the previous sentence like this is not only boring but also very tiring for the reader. I have to read both sides of a sentence to see the next sentence, which is very annoying.

Why don't you just use thermostatic bombs to wash the floor like crazy? I fall asleep every time I look at it. It's so watery.

I'm afraid there's something wrong with me writing about the Lord of Gods but it's too late to write about the Lord of Gods. You'd better write a new book just to get rid of the problem of being too long, otherwise it's so meaningless.

I heard that a new book has been released. Come over and cough twice.

This novel... Is really hard to describe... Take Diablo 2 as an example... A normal novel requires clearing 5 maps... Three times of difficulty... At the beginning of this novel, I thought I was only planning to clear one difficulty level... Then in the middle of the novel, I realized that maybe this novel just wanted Angelia to be the final boss... But as I looked at it, I realized... Maybe the Blood Crow is already the limit... I estimate that I won't be able to reach the Stone Mine Field until the end...

I really liked this book of yours, but you are too arrogant. I wrote a few pictures in one update and couldn't read it anymore.

I passed one chapter after just two glances. This is the most lousy book I have ever read. What's even worse is that the VIP chapters are lousy than the public chapters. I'll give it up. It's boring.

I just want to see you pretending to be awesome, stop fighting monsters, what's the point of not showing off in front of others when you're so awesome? Don't you know where you write the best?

I haven't read much of Red Iron Ant Nest. The process of defeating monsters in this book is too detailed (too watery) in terms of data description, and there is no plot. It may be possible to compress the three million words into two million.

In fact, the author's psychological writing about characters is pretty good, but it's just too watery. Although readers are said to be incapable of writing a book and cannot see the whole story, at least they are the author's bread and butter and should listen to what the author has to say. And having said that, there is no perfect author. If you want to make progress, you must constantly optimize yourself.

The essence of spiritual power is different base numbers × different multiples. Even if we are the same people (seemingly of the same level), we all know the difference.

Huh? It's over! There are more than 500 and 600 chapters after 490, is it water?