Start with a Spaceship

This book did not do well, and everyone can feel it. It took me three months to prepare for the book to be put on the shelf, and it would have more than 500,000 words at that time. There will be intelligent recommendations (probably). If you haven't gotten up yet, you can only finish the book. After all, you have to make it in time. I have designed two sets of outlines, and I will write them according to the situation. I applied today to be put on the shelves this week, and I started to have full attendance in February. I was told that it was not good to pursue the study, and I would need to wait for 25w. (･ิϖ･ิ)っ Emmmmm. Only 1 update can be done first, and 2 updates will be restored after it is put on the shelves. Investors and book lovers, please rest assured. Although I am not good at writing, I guarantee that I will finish the book. At least I will work hard to complete it. If you don't believe me, just read it. (Laugh)

Has the author never seen a woman? A good adventure technology flow is written in the style of urban novel fantasy. No wonder the results are so low.

Write quickly, ya ya ya ya ya ya ya ya ya, except for the system peeing, the rest is very good (￢㉨￢), write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly. . . Write quickly write quickly

The writing is pretty good. But I don't understand the meaning of your elf love line. This line will give me a bad impression. Of course, it's just my opinion. Personally, I feel that your writing is a bit confusing. I think you should push forward the main line quickly. After all, this is an interstellar novel, and interstellar is the main line.

Farming and development combined with exploration, interspersed with some other things, you still have such a big starry sky to write about, such a good subject matter, it is a pity that you have to finish writing like this.

Progress Chapter 50, I have given up after seeing this. The protagonist is still in a state of hand-to-hand combat. He has the knowledge and technology of the interstellar era and nearly omnipotent nanorobots. He can't even build a cannon. If the cannon doesn't work, what about the poisonous gas? The battle still has to be close to home. . . Even if you are wearing high-tech armor, energy shield and awesome high-tech cold weapons, you are still just a high-tech barbarian. Why don't you get a grenade launcher instead of your laser water gun?

There is something wrong with this book. I feel that the power system in the book is weird. It is a magic cow, and technology is soaring. I don't quite understand the author's idea. You say you are powerful in magic. You are still playing on two small planets, and you can't kill a person in a long time. You said in the book that you are a vampire for fun, which is a bit far-fetched. You say you are powerful in technology, but you can't develop it in a long time. You can easily attack people at your doorstep and then fight back. It is too idealistic. I hope the author can sort it out.

Fully booked, come on

The opening is very interesting, but the logic behind it is stiff, the characters' facial expressions are boring, the setting is boring, the text is empty, and it's tasteless. It's a pity. It was a good idea.

Support, as long as you write, I will order everything

Let's take a blind guess before watching: Start with a spaceship, no technology at all, and practice martial arts and immortality throughout the whole process 🤫

The first is my own. I hope to read the book. It would be better if there are reviews.

If you don't repair the spaceship and leave the planet, what's the point of wandering on a planet?

A 20-meter-long spaceship with wings and a 10-meter-large damaged hole punched out by a cannon? Can anyone draw a picture for me?

Author, author, how long will the protagonist, the mechanic, need to develop on this magical planet? Will this magical planet be helpful to the subsequent plot? It took too long to write 😵

Is this the book that starts with a spaceship, then ignores technology and goes crazy to cultivate immortality?

Why are you writing novels? If you go to Mantou to farm monsters and sell ISK, your income will be higher than your current income...

What should I say, I felt a little tired after reading the first thirty chapters. The progress is too slow, and it is difficult for people to feel immersed in the second magical world, unless they are people who like magic very much. It is too long for the third author to write one world, and one world with one hundred chapters is the best. Overall, the writing is pretty good, but unfortunately I don't like science fiction with magic. Come on, author, you will get better and better if you control the main plot and characters well.

Please give your valuable advice if you have time, thank you.

I finished chasing it in two days and I think it looks pretty good.

Developments like this, in the interstellar era, should be advancing in leaps and bounds. It only takes a long time to repair the ship, and the accounts are made every day.

It just so happens that you can invest next month.

Does the protagonist have a system similar to the Gate of Technology or the technological inheritance of the Han Technology Empire? If so, the main task should be to collect materials to build a mining robot. Use nanobots to quickly repair and upgrade the ship and leave the planet. The article mentioned that he is now equivalent to a national treasure-level technical talent. When developing a planet, you have to be in space as a commander to let the robots go to the planet. I didn't expect the protagonist to be so willing to be a working dog. Iron Man can knock out a reactor in a cave. The protagonist is a group of indigenous people who have acquired the technical knowledge of interstellar civilization and are still on a planet.

The plot idea is good, but it was very confusing for me to read. It just seems like the connection is disconnected when switching scenes, and it feels like a piece of content is missing, which is quite painful.

The beginning is good but the main character is a fool. I don't know the benefits of robots but I personally 007 liver materials. What is the main mission to explore the planet? Or repairing the spaceship? Don't go to a thousand chapters and still be jumping around the planet with a group of natives.

This "we". . . Where is the author from?

I am a big fan of this book and the author. After reading the book, I became motivated to write. I also tried to write a novel. I hope that interested book friends can share it with me!