The Young Monk Devotes Himself to Cultivation

Test the Poison After reading the first major chapter, that is, to Chapter 70. First of all, I can only give this book a score of 40 or 50 points. It can be read, but it is meaningless. Second, in terms of subject matter, it is by no means an invincible novel, not even a pseudo-invincible one. Of course, the result is definitely a win, maybe even seconds. Just like Saitama-sensei. In my opinion, these seventy chapters are incredible. Against the general trend of destiny and against all powers that do not treat people as subjects. Third, maybe the characters can be called flesh and blood, but it is not necessary. The appearances of all characters are described as battles of wits, but the key point is that there is no precise information about the protagonist. If you say that you only know the opponent's record, personality and fighting style, and you only prepared a trump card, but you dare to directly dig holes and lay traps for the protagonist, and wait for the protagonist to come to you, I can only say that you are indeed brave enough. I don't know the trump card of every top player, but I just take action when I am confident that my side will win. I am really brave enough. Then he was punched and exploded by the protagonist. Fourth, a very critical point, there are also many comments saying that this book is not enjoyable. This kind of battle type is a book about fighting for righteousness, but there is nothing exciting or tearful about it. All I can say is, very bland. Of course, it is to highlight that the enemy has brains. The key point is that the protagonist does not like to use his brain and then eat up the opponent. I can't even imagine how you could write this to be more enjoyable. All I can say is that I didn't think about it carefully. Fifth, we can't say too many typos, we can only say there are so many million typos. And if you look at it, there are almost no comments. If there are comments, no one likes them. I doubt anyone is watching. I scrolled all the way through and saw only one red comment. 11 Likes. Sixth, after all, this is also a martial arts with extraordinary power turned into fantasy. I would like to recommend two books with the same theme to you. Although "This Sect Will Defy the Heavens" also changes the graphics and text, it doesn't have many shortcomings. The main line is compact, and you can create flowers by playing around with it. Even though the finale was a bit lame it was still worth watching. "I just don't play according to the routine" The previous situation was also very small, dealing between the sect and the country. But the pattern becomes bigger in the later period. "The head of my family thinks about rebellion every day" A title like this makes me want to read it. However, this Goldfinger is relatively big, and the finale is considered unfinished. It can only be regarded as a small recommendation. I have never read The Lord of the World, but I heard it is very good. After all, it is a cuttlefish book. That's it, I wish the author will write better and better, see you again👋🏻

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I would like to make a suggestion, if you are writing an invincible novel, just take it easy. Don't write about things like destroying temples. Focus on how to deal with the protagonist, and then how the protagonist defeats the opponent. More importantly, you must be confident after the fight to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness. What is the purpose of an invincible novel? It is to show off easily. If it is to make the writing reasonable and advanced, the first one should not be so strong at the beginning. In the second one, many plots are very abrupt and have no foreshadowing. Suddenly the plot is calculated and suddenly the protagonist is about to be killed. Suddenly the protagonist is so strong and is included in the plot. Suddenly the protagonist is sweating and it turns out that he wants to commit suicide. Suddenly he is full of dragon energy. Suddenly it turns out that the protagonist's sudden killing is also part of someone else's plan. Suddenly a new map is opened and a bunch of weird plots. I force the writing to be more advanced, but it actually looks super weird. It is recommended that the next book be practiced from a third-person perspective. The cohesion and rationality of the story may be higher.

If you write like this, I guess it's going to get cold.

That's it after reading Chapter 7. It's not without reason. What is the theme of this book? What is the protagonist's life goal? Or is there no goal? Just go with the flow? If so, it's already been 7 chapters and it's still not clarified? Do readers really care about these two dynasties and Honglian Temple?

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The protagonist must have been a fool before traveling through time.

I thought this was an invincible novel, but I didn't expect it to be an abusive one. The protagonist has unrivaled martial arts skills, but has various scruples and self-sealing. He was beaten at the beginning. After more than ten chapters, he was provoked and plotted by others, but he still couldn't beat him. As of now, the protagonist has simply disappeared inexplicably, and his family was wiped out and his body was whipped! This author is completely challenging the reader's poison resistance limit!

Well, is the world where the monk lives going to develop into the modern era? I have already seen through everything and have been in seclusion for hundreds of years. I have discovered that the world has developed to modern times, and with the revival of spiritual energy, the genius and the devil come out to cause trouble and destroy everything with one punch. Thinking about it like One Punch Man is so exciting. 😏😏 I have seen through it, right? Author, what do you have to hide? 😏😏😏

I feel that the writing style is great Although I don't know why some people in the comment area said that the plot is too slow But I really feel that it is so fast It feels like several chapters have passed in the blink of an eye.

I've read dozens of chapters and don't know what to write. . . It just feels like Pigfoot flies around and kills people. He's either flying or killing people. . . Help others conquer the world? ? ?

This book keeps talking about being invincible. After reading dozens of chapters, the main character is being plotted and exploited in various ways. He has some strength but ends up being as bad as shit. It can be said to be a different kind of sadistic novel.

The author has such a good attitude. I originally wanted to criticize you, but looking at your patience in replying to negative book reviews, I still hope you can write better and better. It is recommended to reopen. There are many pits ahead and it is not easy to round.

This book is very strange. You said that the protagonist is a monk, but changing him to a Taoist does not affect the viewing at all. The character and thoughts of the protagonist in this book are not consistent, the writing is not excellent, the setting is not novel, and the invincible flow does not give people a feeling of pleasure. It is really tasteless.

It's not exciting and it's not disgusting, that's it.

Trash hates novels like this the most. When a dynasty dies, it is best to let nature take its course. Do you have to interfere with the purpose of forcibly destroying the dynasty to continue its life? The inability to defend the country proves that the world is no longer the Zhu family.

Neither fish nor fowl, chivalrous tenderness, and a heroic heart to serve the country with fists and fists are not written, nor is the image of a Buddhist great virtue with a bodhisattva heart and helping the world and the people! ! ! What exactly do you want to write about?

Reading this book makes me suffocate to death. Every time I restrain myself because of the people, I can kill you, but I have to drag you around and whine.

I've been busy with work lately, with no days off for three consecutive weeks, from 8 a. M. To 9 a. M. It is already 2 o'clock in the middle of the night when I finish writing this chapter. It's really impossible to catch bugs. If you see a typo, please tell me in this chapter. Signed. Starting today, the update time will be from 8 a. M. To 5 a. M., Twice a day. As for the outbreak? Life is at stake...

I can read this book. The author clearly has double standards. With one palm shot, the man dies and the woman faints? Haha, the label is still decisive in killing. The writing is also very rubbish. The author cares about obscenity and the readers are tired after reading it. I don't even know what the protagonist is going to do. Anyway, he just pretends to be cool and slaps in the face. I'm afraid there will be a harem in the future. It makes sense that it is not popular.

I was shocked. I thought the author wanted to take revenge on society. Finally, I would like to say that the writing is really good.

I can't understand this book!

After reading the beginning, I couldn't stand it any longer. The country's capital was gone, so I went to face the wall. I simply wrote below that I can become an eunuch if I am invincible.

The content is a bit confusing and I can't understand it

People's establishment is unstable, their behavior is incomprehensible, and they are in the clouds Let's write Xiaobai Wen and Long Aotian first. Once this is written smoothly, let's think about other things.

It feels pretty good, but there's no sense of immersion.

Yeah, baby, it's okay