The Love Life of an Ordinary Male Lead

Although I have only read Chapter 14. But I always feel that the protagonist is like a dog😅

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง! The reward has been given, the vote has been cast, it's super good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The characters are very delicately drawn, and I don't feel the poisonous points that others have said (maybe because the author's pace is slow, new readers can just look back, it's really not poisonous) Finally! ! ! One person's blood book, please update! ! !

Let me tell you, if you feel disgusted after reading the previous part and want to criticize it, please bear with it until you read it. Don't take it out of context to judge the subsequent plot. If you have any opinions, you can put them forward, but if you are full of shit as soon as you appear, then your comments will definitely be deleted and permanently banned. About Ji, it can only be said that Ji lost her mother when she was a child and closed herself off to give birth to a second personality. Because of her mother's death, she did not regard her friendship with her friend Ye Mo as her feelings for her mother: love (probably). Some readers said that this explanation is far-fetched... This is what is written in the outline! About Shang Xiaoyu, this person never wanted her to be the heroine (›´ω`‹ ) I don't know why you think she will be the heroine. I'm very confused, and there's talk of sending a girl away…please! He only appeared in two or three chapters and didn't even have a single line. Hey! Don't be preconceived! Hey! And it's even more impossible to almost take drugs in a bar! About An, some readers think that she is a combination of senior sister and Yukino... Um... I am not sure about this (ºº) Ahem, some readers say that An has a vicious tongue... Oh my god! It's better not to over-interpret it... This kind of thing is obviously a tsundere, a yandere and a venomous tongue. After reading the following, I basically like An (ღ˘⌣˘ღ). Anyway, let's talk about that sentence later. In addition, some readers asked why the protagonist didn't kill the heroine... Please! Do you want to be so violent... This is a romantic light novel (x_x;) Anyway, you will find that these early settings are not important anymore, so don't care too much about the details, let alone over-interpretation, (ﾉ_ _)ﾉ Personal suggestion, turn off the comment settings before reading this book, it will have a better reading experience | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ Finally, the update status... Gou Xuan updates every two days and accidentally asks for leave... Fuck! This book will be finished in October, and the new book is already being depositedｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

I vomited when I saw this. The strong taste of the taker and the soft-hearted behavior don't suit me at all. I'd better forget this kind of heroine who threatens the protagonist. Can you be tougher in doing things? I feel like a tool. I reluctantly accepted it at the beginning, but now it's poisoned. I don't know why you think of that Ji as the heroine? Maybe it's because I have a mysophobia, and I can't accept the heroine's ambiguous plot with other people, or blushing at other men. You two heroines have problems with your character. It's not that I can't accept the poisonous tongue, but let's forget about the poisonous tongue, right? There are also problems with the protagonist's character. If you hit a guy, you'll hit him, and if you hit a girl, you'll lick her. If someone has a venomous tongue, won't you respond with a venomous tongue? If it comes to me, I won't pay attention to this kind of woman, and the whole monitor, I don't know why there is still such an ex plot in 2021. The key author is that you are still positioned as the heroine. In the end, I can only say that the author, when you set up the heroine, can you think about how the plot will feel to the readers?

A few suggestions 1. In general, the venomous heroine in harem novels has a unique title for the male protagonist. Although she is also venomous to others, she will have honorific titles to reflect the close and distant relationship. When Ni Chen entered the scene, I almost thought she was a double male protagonist 2. The names of the protagonist and supporting characters should be clearer. This is a harem novel (let's not talk about the authenticity of the harem). Looking at the name Shang Yuer, 90% of people in harem novels will default to being the heroine, right? As a result, I was speculating on CP with the Ni Chen above. . . If you choose a second girl, a silly girl, etc., If you use less description in the early stage, no one will think of giving it away. If it was originally set to be a female protagonist, but later changed to a female protagonist after being unable to compete, it would feel even more discouraging. . . This means that most of the weak characters in Higaru don't need to be written. . . Falling in love makes people brave, and most people like to watch the scenes where a weak character creates a Shura field with a strong character because of their love. Overall, I quite like it, except for the parts of Ni Chen and Shang Yu'er. . .

There is no justice,

Thank you for the abuse of the heroine. If you don't abuse the heroine, I won't watch it again. Don't say whether you like it or not. I didn't want to watch it after reading the comments, but I still clicked on it. The more I read, the more frustrated I am? The more you read, the more you want to scold the author?

I haven't read it yet. I'm currently at chapter twenty-seven. I have to admit that I was naive. I imagined that I could torture the heroine to death later. It turns out that I thought too much, alas. Forcibly whitewashing the heroine is really an exaggeration, ahhh, why do you have to whitewash her! Isn't it bad for you to abuse the heroine later? Then you have to create a character for the heroine in the front, and whitewash it in the back. Is it interesting? No. Then this book, without the shell of the Stitch Monster, is just an ordinary light romance novel. What a fart! Waste of my feelings.

I feel that the author's control of the plot and characters is still not very good... When I first read the beginning, my eyes lit up and I thought it was very good. But if you look a little further, the male protagonist's "licking" character is revealed. At the beginning of the novel, it is clearly stated that the male protagonist's personality is cynical and good at force. Such a person, but for some inexplicable reasons, he basically obeys the words of the eldest ladies of various families. He will do whatever others tell him to do. In particular, he always refuses verbally first, but the woman loses after a little more effort. The reason is also very simple: giving money. So it's strange to me that the male protagonist who kills Zixijie all by himself will have no choice but to compromise with the young ladies. A person, especially a capable person, a person who is strong in certain aspects, is confident and proud in his heart and will not bow to others easily, but the male protagonist is... And I think there is a very strange logic. The male protagonist who hacked off the West Street and set the rules can obey the words of the young ladies in order to make money, and he always looks helpless on the surface. So why can't he take over Zixi Street to make money? Since he himself does not reject violence and is keen to use violence to solve conflicts on Zixi Street, can't he use his ability to make money? If it is illegal, it has been illegal from the moment he used violence. In general, it's very frustrating to watch, and it's getting more and more frustrating. The whole process is about the heroines showing how powerful they are and how good their family background is in front of the male protagonist. They use it to highlight the humbleness of the male protagonist. Their attitudes are definitely not friendly to the male protagonist. And the funniest thing is that they accidentally discovered that the male protagonist is quite capable of fighting and changed their attitude... The feeling of separation is serious.

It's also strange. Some books have a vicious heroine and a male protagonist. I hate it very much and feel disgusted. But some books are different. For example, this book has a heroine with a vicious tongue and a male protagonist.