Naruto: I and Golden Flash Are at the Same Time

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When writing about Naruto, the most important thing is not to deviate from the character. For example, if Uchiha Madara is written as Hashirama's character, and Hashirama is written as Uchiha Madara's character, it would be disgusting. Then all kinds of passers-by will give wisdom to the plot of the protagonist Long Aotian. There is also a story where he can't walk when he sees a woman. When he sees a woman, he will act as if he has never seen him in his previous life. Like women, there are also things that they say they can't do, such as making up their minds to save the fourth generation. In the end, because of their poor writing skills, they are afraid that they will kill the fourth generation again because they can't write a good script. Also, there are people who clearly have no feelings in the past, but in order to make the protagonist's teammates sacrifice to the gods and have unlimited power, they suddenly have a deep relationship with someone.

At the end of World War II, the Sannin were less than twenty when they fought against Hanzo... Then Jiraiya picked up the three Nagatos. At that time, World War II was about to end, and all three of them were no more than 8 years old. After teaching for more than three years, your Akatsuki organization has developed. Then the war broke out, Kakashi Kai and the others were only 12 years old when they fought at the Kannabi Bridge, and Minato was only in his early twenties... This was the end of the Third World War, and you are so awesome that Kai was 10 years old during the Second World War. The timeline was completely messed up. In the Second World War, Minato flew the Thunder God and the Rasengan. What happened to the Sannin? What the hell?

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The chronological order is too confusing, and many of the original owners' ages don't match up. Same period as the fourth generation? The male protagonist is 15 years old, Kakashi is already 10 years old, and the fourth generation will be at least 20+. How can they be at the same time? The male protagonist graduated at the age of nine, and the fourth generation is around fifteen years old. He must be a jounin. It is no problem to be the male protagonist's mentor jounin. How can they be equals? Nagato is 35 years old, which means you are five years older than Kakashi and the same age as the hero.

It seems like a good book at first glance, but the name of the main character makes me feel uncomfortable, just one word missing... I picked it up today, and I'm a little hesitant to get into it.

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Dear friends who invested, I saw it, and I am very excited, Crab... In return, I will create seriously with enthusiasm, and process the different Hokage in my heart... A crazy little spoiler in advance: First: The Akatsuki organization is not that crazy organization, they may be the real salvation organization. The new villain will be another time traveler, another organization led by another time traveler. As for Danzo, I hope he is a positive character. What he shows is more of the helplessness of the Ninja World War. (This is an early concept, not yet mature, and may be revised) (For reference only, it is still early after all...)

More than twenty chapters have been used in "Reincarnation in the Earth"... Is it still necessary to write it down? ? ? Did a chuunin with no background learn it by watching cartoons? Farewell, even a Shennong like me can't bear it

It is okay to build an opinion building and receive all kinds of opinions, including criticism and praise. The problem I have is that I feel great when I write it, but I understand better that writing a book is for others to read, and the reader needs to feel happy. So I want to know, that part of what I wrote is toxic and needs improvement. That part is not bad and could be expanded. Of course, in some places, I may maintain my stubbornness, because it is already an unshakable part of my heart. Here, thank you to the friends who support this work...

I feel like Uchiha is the normal person in Naruto

Just treat it as a bit of a complaint, delete it and accept it ... I can't stand it anymore! Forget about the protagonist being weak in strength, it's normal. But I am very confused by Akatsuki's operation. No matter what I do, I have to return to Konoha? How good is Konoha? Go back and rebel against your parents until they die? Don't say you don't care! Impossible. Ninjas in the ninja world are dark and betrayal is normal. How did White Fang die? Grow your hair and beard, dye it, disfigure it, just find a place with a famous name and squat down, and let your family have no choice between being a family member of a martyr or a coward, or even a family member of a traitor? Ah! ! ! ! Also, since your thinking has not been brainwashed by the ninja world, and your life is also controlled by the trio, if you directly accuse them of being immature or unrealistic, can they still kill you? History has already laid out the answer. I'm afraid I was completely asleep in the politics class, zero points? The simplest thing is to just say that there is something wrong with the samsara eye! They have to be anxious about this, and then ask them directly why they want everyone to listen to them? (A simple why and how to do it) Do you feel like the author wants to make the protagonist very brilliant and great? But the protagonist's performance seems to be rubbish and self-righteous. If you don't have a good writing style, let's write it simply 😐. I'm not afraid of being simple, but I'm afraid of being nondescript! I'm just saying this once, it's just a rant, it depends on your personal taste...

After the emergence of the divine organization, no one read this book, right? 😥😥😥

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I lost interest in the book when I saw the name of the main character.

Hokage is nothing like ordinary people. Bloodstains. I don't have a good teacher even though I'm from a poor background. It was still during the battlefield. It's basically difficult to live for a long time. The theory of Japanese ancestry is no joke😁😁

Alas, creating an original heroine in a fanfic is very boring and lacks a sense of empathy. There are so many non-CP female characters in the original novel and none of them are suitable! ! !

The protagonist and Naga had a sister for a period of time, 15 years old, and then Kakashi and the others became chuunin? This timeline is so confusing. Minato is about 10 years older than Kakashi.

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It's Danzo Shimura, not Murashi

Sorry, please post an apology! I'm sorry, author, your book is forcing you to suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder... So please forgive me for not being able to continue reading... I wish you a best-selling book! Goodbye!

I like it so much 😍_Support, support, support the great god

The writing is very good, and the Uchiha heroine also hopes to avoid the night of genocide in the future.

It's rare to see such an ugly Naruto fanfic, it's very ugly and unique.

Ning Haeda must be a descendant of the Sage of Six Paths. The full name of the Sage of Six Paths is Hagoromo Otsutsuki. He must have the power of Senju Hashirama and the Samsara Eye in the end.

Blowing Kai to the sky, passed, passed

What is the protagonist doing? What is this novel about? Do you want to express that a chuunin survives to the finale?

This protagonist is one of the weakest among the fanfics. How can he become so popular? The protagonist in the fanfic is too weak and has no characteristics and is destined to be a bust. It's good that the author can still persist.

The self-created name of the heroine has a strong Internet style