God's Game

I hope that traveling through the heavens is still my own God of Game system. Don't go to a place where I am perfect and just rebuild the Immortal Emperor. I should analyze the rules and hope that there will be no female protagonist.

Um, I'm pretending to be profound, but I'm confused and confused. I didn't say anything or write anything. Is the author preparing to test us? The necessary psychological description in writing novels is indispensable. Otherwise, why are first-person novels basically extinct now, while third-person novels now dominate the market? It's up to the reader to guess what the author is thinking, and it's 99% likely to fail. As the saying goes, there are as many Hamlets as there are people. How do you expect readers to guess the author's who-know-what-one-in-one probability?

The bad thing is that it allows two losers to go through the trial There are no rules and no rules. If you do this, if the people behind you learn from it, will you give it to them every time? If you don't give it to them, you'll force them into all kinds of situations, and then you don't dare to actually kill them. In the end, they will push even further. . So we can just throw them back. It would be great to just break the cycle of reincarnation. The world's population is so large that there are only two people missing. The protagonist travels through many worlds and does not worry about the population. If the population of one world is not enough, he can find the next world. Could it be that the protagonist only gives reincarnation to one world? This is boring, why not add the diversity of other worlds.

The main god and the players are speechless when they get together. It is too easy for the players to gain power and it is too unfair to all sentient beings. It looks too unreal, with no resonance or sense of substitution.

Inexplicable, self-proclaimed work that pretends to be profound

The undead are the biggest failure. The strength obtained by struggling on the verge of death is so refreshing to watch. If the author wants to do well, he can just write a book of Douluo: ×××××, insert it at any time, and then change it according to the original plot. Such mindless writing is generally very popular at the starting point.

Is the main god building flow? The pace is a bit slow. Hope it will be faster

Emmmm After reading 10 chapters, I couldn't help but ask questions about who I am, where I am, what I'm looking at, and what the author is writing🧐

This book is full of the author's self-interested attributes and is written inexplicably.

I hope the protagonist can start writing around establishing a world view and practice system! Abandon the existing cultivation system, martial arts system, magic system, and write the author's world view. Don't follow the trend. You can travel to other worlds, but don't interpret it one-sidedly. Such as "Extraordinary Prehistoric", "Fantasy World Travel", etc. The protagonist has a distinctive personality and a clear goal! Come on, author!

Naming Secondary 2, Conversation, Goodbye, Secondary 2

The pace is too slow, and some things could totally use the Chunqiu style of writing. That's not to say that you can't write it in detail, but as the author, you update too little, and it's incomparable to others who update three chapters a day. As a result, the plot drags on for too long, making the story less interesting and difficult for readers to follow.

It's a mess... Can't you understand? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Seeing that the name is a Shinto text, I would like to give the author some suggestions on practice setting: Legend (Pseudo God): Condensed divinity but the soul is Yin, initially exposed to the power of faith, able to use the power of faith in a rough way, only comprehending the laws without accepting faith is a legend, and can be transferred to the path of immortality;Receive a large number of faith He is a false god. False gods can easily lose themselves under the influence of faith and can only follow the path of belief in God Demigod: ignite the divine fire and make the soul pure Yang. You can choose to become a god by faith and a god by law, or you can choose to turn to the path of immortality. True God: Condensate the godhead (divine decree) to wield authority, divided into the god of faith and the god of law. God of Faith Cultivation speed is fast, but faith is indispensable and it is difficult to become an ancient god, and it is easy to lose oneself under the influence of faith; God of Law is in line with the world of Taoism, observing the way of heaven and carrying out the journey of heaven. The disadvantage is that it is easy to become Taoist, and the cultivation speed is slower than that of God of Faith. It is easier to break through the true God than God of Faith. You can also use the power of faith in a small amount, but it will increase the chance of sudden change. Breaking the difficulty level Ancient God: Divine light illuminates the future, initially transcends the River of Life to achieve immortality, most Shinto emperors and main gods of the gods are at this level Ancestral God: Divine light illuminates the past and future, wraps up the timeline, jumps out of the River of Life, proves eternal certification, the only one in the world Transcendence: The origin of the path to achievement

You can refer to the Main God's Avenue. Has the author considered adding some elements of resistance?

Can you just say I brought it with me? ? ? ? ? Read this book

It is best to choose the last one among the above 🙂

The eleventh district represents Japan, and the ninth district represents where?

Makes me not want to see the word 'joke' again

If the spiritual energy of the earth recovers, there will be demon clan. I hope that the protagonist will not be biased and can give the demon clan the same equality as the human race!

Ask if the player is immortal? It doesn't look good at all without dead people! It feels so fake!

It's interesting to read the introduction. I added a bookshelf.

Although the main character is a bit weak, it is still watchable. Hey, if the author feels it's not working, just try harder.