The Ancestor of Nightmares

The plot is a lot inexplicable. . For example, after the protagonist got the evil-fighting sword manual, he found a small courtyard to practice it by himself. Suddenly, Qingcheng came to his door. . . How did you find it? How do they know the protagonist is here? ? Illogical

Original astronomy has no appeal.

The protagonist is a kind person who wants to use his supernatural powers to teach the world to be kind. Appraisal completed

I felt that Swordsman was written in a suffocating and unhappy way, nothing changed, and Lao Yue was described as mentally retarded. Such a big sect, when they are in danger, they don't doubt you, but they doubt others. It's an inexplicable feeling.

Zhutian Wen, who is covered in nightmare skin, is okay. I thought the main character's main ability was dream type... But it turned out to be the time travel between the heavens 🤫

I hope there won't be a female protagonist. This type of drama can be divided into two parts: a god seeking enlightenment, and a human being experiencing the world of mortals.

Not bad! It suits the taste quite well.

It feels like the author wrote with an outline and didn't read the full text.

It's inexplicable. Can't you write it more simply and feel more comfortable? In the beginning, the logic was poor, the writing was poor, and it was ok if it was fun. But in the end, it was not fun at all. How can I persevere!

Update, been waiting for several hours

I'll go. You updated, I remember not updating for many days

Can you call this a dream? Whenever a concept can be changed at will and interfere with reality, how can it be called a dream?

When was it changed? Wasn't it original to the heavens before?