Spiritual Wind and Immortal Path

The practice system is the common qi-training fund-building pill Yuanying. This is a good comment. The common system is more convenient and can stand the test; The spirit stone currency system currently has no major problems and is basically reasonable. This is better than most writers of fairy tales; Article The writing is fluent, and the reading is not jerky so far. If you are a new writer, it is really excellent; The main character is an aborigine, there is no time travel, and there is no system. It is really good. Some people behave like aborigines despite the setting of time travellers, and a few inappropriate modern words pop up from time to time. It is really annoying. Goldfinger seems to be related to spiritual beasts. It is not a perverted Goldfinger. The secret has not been revealed yet. It is not a plug-in like Long Aotian. Although the current plot is flat, it is not boring, the supporting characters are not single, and the characters are slowly emerging on the page (although there are fewer characters appearing now). If we can maintain stable updates and the writing style does not decline, I believe the results will not be too bad.

For me, my love for novels probably started with Jingu Wonders in high school. The Wild Fox's Story of Searching for Gods Under the Tree, Yan Leisheng's Tian Xingjian, and the Resentment to This Day, and Ke Rui's Strange Tales of Urban Monsters. After that, I came into contact with online articles, and I was fascinated by Wangyu's legend of mortals cultivating immortals, Ergen's Immortal Rebellion, Chen Dong's Tomb of Gods, etc... To this day, after work, I came up with the idea of ​​trying to code words myself. A friend once advised me that the fairy tale routine has been exhausted. No matter how I write it, it is like picking up people's wisdom. Moreover, the works of great masters come first, and such readers have high taste, which will inevitably pale in comparison. If you don't write about fan fiction, novels, and cities, your writing style is not very demanding, and it's easy to get problems. I still identify with Xianxia. Probably when I first came into contact with him, I had a dream of Xianxia in my heart. Lingfeng Xiantu, the name comes from the WOW I played last year. The mage Lingfeng was always 7=1, and he AFKed in anger. Although I know that my level is average, I will still work hard to complete this book. The outline has been conceived from the beginning, so try to control and improve it.

After seeing this, as a person who is picky about reading, I have to say that it is a good book. The behavior of the protagonist has been changing with the more he knows about the outside world. The supporting characters are all online. From a God's perspective, I really saw a person who has been in the sect since he was ten years old and has stayed in the Beast Yard all the time. He has this idea of ​​making a contribution and building a foundation. From being assigned a good mission for the first time, to being informed about the real competition for the Foundation Establishment Pill during the mission, and making a risky decision for the protagonist for the first time, to being in danger later, it was a blessing in disguise (this is a must-have for the protagonist, if not, we don't need to read it), getting a resource, and then returning to the sect. Wanting to maintain the connections encountered in the mission, the later resource (obtained from the disaster) was just right. The turning point of the protagonist, from getting a good mission for the first time and being invited to explore during the mission, are all due to the protagonist's own talents. After reading Chapter 27, I said this is a good novel.

It's impossible to read fairy tales without golden fingers, no matter how good your writing is, how clear your ideas are, and how reasonable the plot is. I can tell you two words, it's useless. Without golden fingers, it would seem too ordinary, because there are too many such novels, from "Star Ring" 20 years ago, to "Fights Break the Sphere" ten years ago, to Mortal Cultivation of Immortals seven or eight years ago, to the popular "Immortal Space", Immortal Evergreen, and Beiyuan Immortal Clan, which have become popular in recent years. Which one does not have golden fingers? In other words, the Green Lotus Peak, Cultivation of Immortality Begins in the Desert, and a few other novels written without Golden Finger are pretty good. Anyway, I have read at least more than 100 novels of this kind in the past 20 years. Without Goldfinger, I really don't want to read them again. For nothing else, just for one thing. Without a golden finger, there is no sense of expectation. This is also the drawback of the proliferation of novels. After reading for a long time, novels without a sense of expectation will not make you want to read. This is what old bookworms call a book shortage.

I don't know when, the protagonist will definitely get an escape method that burns blood and essence, and it must be a magic spell. He says no, and his body is very good. Finally, he is in danger, escapes with the escape method, and then encounters a great opportunity. Although the damage is great, he can forcefully break and stand up again. This kind of routine is really annoying.

I have read a lot of Xiuxian-style novels, and every time I see a single spiritual root, I feel something is wrong. Is the imbalance even worse than the five elements?

It's good to have a female protagonist in the fairy tale, otherwise it would be quite boring to practice all the time. I hope the author can keep writing.

The protagonist of this book is a bit too naive, and he always has the mentality of a virgin. First of all, cultivating immortality does not mean that you cannot have friends, but friends are all based on the premise of exchange of interests! Secondly, I feel that if a Mortal series is not good, it still depends on how the character of the protagonist is shaped... The protagonist of the Mortal series can have an ordinary appearance, ordinary qualifications, and ordinary life experience,,,, but he cannot have an ordinary personality! The protagonists of well-written mortal novels all have a lot in common! For example, calm character, cautious, witty, sinister, etc.! The main reason why we like to watch Mortal Flow is that we are attracted by these qualities of the protagonist... Come on, author!

I like it very much. I'm looking for novels like this, but there are almost none. Do you have any recommendations? There is no need to recommend books similar to this one, such as Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and Immortal Rebellion, Xuanchen Path, Dharma Immortal Path, etc. 😁 Thank you all book friends.

I have been reading novels for nearly 7 years, and this is the most well-written book I have seen in recent times. 1. First of all, it is about the character setting of the protagonist. He is of a cautious type. The author also describes this character later. When he first met the invitations of Senior Brother Jiang and others, he directly rejected their invitations after weighing the pros and cons. In the end, he knew that staying in the sect could not exchange for the Foundation Establishment Pill, so he reluctantly agreed. (The same happened with Senior Sister Zhuo later). This writing is very real. The change of a person's personality cannot be completed in a short time. 2. To put it simply, in the world of immortal cultivation, a system has been formed. Where do so many adventures come from? The protagonist is a monk with three spiritual roots. If he wants to set foot on the top of the mountain, he can only spend more time than others. The author has also put a lot of effort into this aspect. In the early stage of the foundation building, he spent only two Foundation Building Pills, and in the later stage, several auxiliary spiritual objects were also spent. 3. There are some works that I criticize the most. Goldfinger Long Aotian doesn't matter, but can the supporting characters and villains have some brains? In the world of cultivating immortals, the higher the cultivation level, who is not a hero? Some Goldfinger works have no writing at all. As long as they are villains, they are definitely brainless. They all deleted the book immediately), I feel like in Long Aotian's cool novels, you can tell by looking at the villain's expression. I wonder which bad guy will tell you that he is a bad guy? If this kind of cool novel follows this line of thinking, might the protagonist end up having no sense of restraint in front of a certain brat, being able to yell at a banquet, and not having the grace of an ancestor of the family at all. What's the cool thing about such a cool article? I really can't imagine how this type of book could become so popular. Who, the ancestor of an aristocratic family, could reach that position without any skills? 4. When I first read this book, I thought it was written in platinum letters from Qidian. I really like to read novels that watch the protagonist grow up bit by bit. There are no continuous adventures, only the protagonist slowly accumulates bit by bit. The supporting characters have emotions. People who seem to be honest can also be delicate in mind, and the villain's IQ is online. This is the fairy tale novel I want to read

I don't know how to explain it. Previously, a fellow disciple who had a conflict with a better senior brother rushed out to save him and was tricked. Then he killed him in front of this woman. This was a way to kill a fellow disciple with a backstage. Now this woman wants Zhujiao to kill another fellow disciple for no reason. This is a prelude to seeking death, or seeking death without a bottom line.

The writing was so bland, I thought it was quite distinctive when I first read it, but it turned out that there was no difference between reading it and not reading it.

Can you arrange for the protagonist to read anecdotes or other miscellaneous books? Otherwise, I always feel that the protagonist doesn't know anything, which is a bit embarrassing.

The author lacks writing skills and has to forcefully describe female characters. This results in the character Zhuo Qingyue being full of contradictions, and makes readers feel that the protagonist's behavior of liking Zhuo Qingyue is inexplicable. Resulting in a very poor reading experience.

The writing at the beginning of the book was good, but it was too abrupt to suddenly let the protagonist lead the clan. Regarding the plot, the protagonist has just arrived here not long ago, and the intricate relationships within the demon clan are not yet fully understood. It is unrealistic to directly strategize. Apart from the plot, even if Wangyu has been writing books for many years, it is difficult to control this kind of characters and plot, so Han Li became the spiritual world Mahayana and basically did not participate in the decision-making. If it were forced to be written, the plot would be childish. For example, the protagonist suddenly wants to surrender to the dragon and wants to kill it in a bizarre way. It is suggested that in the subsequent plot, it is better for the protagonist to participate more and make less decisions. He can write his ingenious ideas and racial conflicts into the background instead of putting them in the foreground, which will give a better look and feel.

Very good, the protagonist of this novel is a normal person from the novels I have read in the past two years. The protagonist is an aboriginal, so his thoughts are not as evil and perverse as those of time travellers, and he is very pure. But at the same time, it also lacks a sense of substitution and a unique source of confidence. If you can hang out in the sect, you will never take risks. This fully shows the fear of a normal person, greed for life and fear of death. There is no such lame trick of mocking and pretending to slap someone in the face. The protagonist treats his friends a bit like a virgin, but can people who have been together for decades be emotionless? For strangers, you can kill them for profit without any reason. Without cheating, there is no pleasure in cheating, but there are also many less brainless plots.

After reading Chapter 12... The protagonist feels so dumb... The senior sister in Chapter 10 wants to help but doesn't say what she is helping. How many levels of Qi have she practiced? She doesn't even know how to use magic weapons to attack, kill or defend. How dare she try to help? In Chapter 12, hey, where does the confidence come from? Not saying whether this thing will work or not, you just escaped the fate of cannon fodder. Do you still want benefits? No, I'm giving you benefits so you can take them with peace of mind. Three or four people, one with a bad intention, will take their lives, and lose their lives...

The book is too plain, really too plain.

The book is really a good book, but it is a pity that the update is too slow. I am very worried about the eunuch. I just hope that the author will stick to it.

The reward is 30,000 starting coins. I hope the author will work hard and write well. I really like Mortal Immortal Heroes, so don't collapse.

I'm really convinced. It stopped updating three years ago. It only has two or three hundred chapters. What do you recommend to me from the starting point? Is there nothing to push?

Don't use too many modern words in classical fairy tales. What about half an hour or a few meters?

I like this novel very much, but it has been discontinued for four years. It's a pity