I Came to the Ninja World with Thunder and Lightning in My Arms

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. It's getting more and more exciting.

Sometimes I'm really confused. Every time I look for Naruto novels, I see a bunch of people jumping up and down using the second fan fiction as the original. It is normal for a novel written by a fan author to use his own second setting. After all, it is for the sake of drama and plot rationality. What's more, Naruto originally had quite a lot of bugs. But what's going on with a bunch of people using second designs to criticize the original designs. Is it true that Kishimoto is just a manga artist and he knows nothing about Naruto?

1. Naruto was treated maliciously by Konoha! (1) The third-generation grandson Konohamaru has a special Jonin tutor. As the fourth-generation hero of Konoha and the orphan of Uzumaki Kushina, Naruto does not even have an ordinary nanny. (2) The milk is expired and basic life security is not provided. (3) The third-generation only cares about brainwashing Naruto, and does not teach ninjutsu multi-shadowing. The body was learned by Naruto himself (this is probably a charity) (4) None of the four generations of subordinates could appear by Naruto's side to take care of one or two when Naruto was a child. (5) The identity of Naruto's Jinchuuriki was definitely spread out deliberately by the top management of Konoha. For such an important baby, is it difficult to conceal his identity? As for letting a child become the target of the villagers' hatred! 2. The death of the Uzumaki clan is really tragic, Konoha's dirty tricks are so sneaky! The Uzumaki clan is also an ally of Konoha no matter what. Konoha's jinchūriki and sealing techniques are all given by the Uzumaki clan. The result! Not long after Kushina arrived in Konoha, the Uzumaki clan was wiped out. Did Konoha do something evil? I don't know, but the survivors of the Uzumaki clan do not dare to defect to Konoha incognito. I think it is a dirty trick. No matter what, there is still a chance to watch the show. Anyway, after Konoha's "good friends" wiped out the clan, the Uzumaki clan did not dare to defect to Konoha, but instead hid incognito. Xiangling's mother must have died miserably. She never saw Konoha helping the Uzumaki clan until her death! Is Konoha incapable? Funny! 3. How did White Fang die? Seriously speaking, White Fang's reputation was too high and it had nothing to do with the failure of the mission. If you fail the mission, you will die, and Kirigakure's title of "Blood Mist" will have to be given to Konoha. White Fang could compete with Hokage because of his fame and achievements, but he was an "outsider". Think about who the Hokage of Konoha is 🤭 and what their relationship is, so White Fang was screwed! Or other jounin, if something goes wrong, they will probably not take the blame, but will be cared for by the third generation. I tell you it's okay, just trust me obediently! 4. The fourth generation is a puppet. Some netizens said it was Orochimaru who said it. This is one point! The third generation stepped down after suffering heavy casualties in the war. This is another point! It's understandable that people are angry! But he pushed the fourth generation with the weakest foundation among these people to come to power. Interesting! After the fourth generation died, he immediately did it again! 5. The most uncontroversial point is that the third generation is an "appeasement faction"! Konoha's great tragedy: How did Hyuga Neji's father die? You have to believe that when something is related to the interests of you and your leader, if your leader does not stand up for you, then he will sacrifice you by default! So when the third generation was about to die, well, there was no one to help! After his death, many people died 🤔 The most important thing is that this comic was drawn by Japanese, and their brain circuits are different from ours 😄 What we think is unreasonable, others think it is reasonable! The sons of heroes should be kind to us. This is our value, but it is not necessarily other people's values. You know, you think many Japanese 🇯🇵 movies are made up, but they are obviously realistic, okay? 😏

Can the final ability of the protagonist be mainly based on the sealing techniques of the lightning and whirlpool clan, and not fixate on senjutsu, transplant those bugs from the first generation, and the final battle against Princess Kaguya should be fought together like in the original work, instead of making one person stand out as the protagonist. The protagonist of the original work is already very bt in the later stage. If you add bt on the basis of the original work, it is really no different from playing an invincible stand-alone game. I remember playing the second level of Diablo 2 to fight bugs. A few friends fought to the death, constantly coming to the portal to return to the city to increase blood. Although it was very tedious, it was really fun. This is a kind of fun to play the game. But there was a buddy who adjusted the equipment behind our backs. After entering the cave, he used a skill to defeat the boss. Damn it! What about the fun of the game? Perhaps many people care about the results, but in fact the process is the key. Just like work, the work I face is not how much I can earn alone, but a team, a team that sticks together, an elite team, so that we can go further.

The platform is like a food street, the author is like the shopkeeper in the street, the book is the snack, and the readers are the diners. There are many types of snacks and many flavors. There are things that men like to eat, and there are things that women like to eat. A hundred schools of thought contend and flowers bloom. There is a shop that sells bread with bean paste filling. The bean paste filling is very sweet, and it is made quickly and is widely praised. As a result, the shopkeepers on this street are trying to make products with bean paste filling, including rice cakes with bean paste, steamed buns with bean paste, and even stinky tofu with bean paste. As long as the skin is different, it is filled with bean paste. Some diners praised the bean paste filling as the best delicacy while eating. If your store doesn't have bean paste filling, it will definitely go out of business. As a result, this street has become a specialty of bean paste filling. There are always customers who are tired of eating and want to eat something different in this street, so they ask the boss, does it taste like durian? Eating too much sweet food can easily lead to diabetes. Before the boss can say anything, a group of diners come up to you with their mouths full of delicious food. Bean paste filling is the specialty! That's the kingly way! That's the trend! Are you asking this restaurant I love to eat to close down? If you want to sell the flavor you want to eat, it will definitely go bankrupt! I'll kill you, this world is ruined! Dishes are inclusive. Is it wrong to like durian? The key is, are there other flavors on this street?

1. Regarding the genocide of the Uchiha In the original work, there are only two or three Uchiha people left, namely the two pillars, the filial son Itachi, and Obito. My questions are as follows: 1. Why does the Uchiha clan of thousands of people happen to have no ninjas to go out to do tasks? No one has a tavern and grill break? Is it just that the whole family should die neatly? 2. Uchiha Sasuke happened to make up lessons at school on the night of genocide I don't understand. According to the original work, the missions are all released in the Hokage Building. The ninja school is about the will of fire. The third generation definitely attaches great importance to it. According to some third generation fans What he said was all Danzo's doing👏👏👏, and the third generation didn't know about it👏. Compared with modern times, Shuuji and Uchiha were at least a germ zone, and the chief leader of the sterilization zone didn't know about it👏 fn=33]🤭🤭 Second, about Naruto In the original work, the identity of the fourth generation of Naruto was not exposed. The identity of the demon fox is almost known to everyone. Naruto cannot afford to drink expired milk. Le Ramen has money to buy paint to make monsters, so my questions are as follows: 1. As mentioned above, before the death of the fourth generation, the third generation ordered the blocking of Naruto's information. The identity of the fourth generation's legacy has not been revealed for more than ten years. Why is the identity of the Jinchuuriki known to the world? No, it's not a jinchuuriki but directly a demon fox Some third-generation fans say that Naruto has six beards that look like a demon fox. I find it funny. It looks like a demon fox, but it doesn't look like a cat. 🤭🤭 According to a certain movie version, Naruto's back looks like the fourth generation's 👏 👏, and as the fourth generation disciple Kakashi never took care of Naruto, he just,,,,,, haha, I understand everything. After all, I still dare not reveal it after accepting him as a disciple 2. The third generation grandson has a nanny and a chuunin teacher. Why does Naruto only have a nanny who hates him? The people from Konoha are not good enough, why can't they hire one from outside the village? Isn't this easy for ninjas who go out every day? Don't tell me that the third generation has lived for decades and doesn't even know how Naruto, who is a "demon fox", will be treated? Moreover, the third generation's crystal ball can see women bathing through the mist. Why doesn't the third generation stop it? I hope the third generation fans can explain Third, the death of Kakashi's father White Fang White Fang died at the end of World War II and the beginning of the Third War. The reason was the criticism of the villagers, so my suspicions are as follows 1. The missions of ninjas are kept secret. As the ANBU minister, White Fang's mission is most likely S-level. Why do so many villagers know about it? Some people say it was said by the companions who were rescued by White Fang 👏👏, which is very good. I suggest that in the future, Konoha's missions should be done alone. For an S-level mission, teammates can publicize it everywhere. Wouldn't it be nice to wait until death? 2. It stands to reason that Konoha's information should not spread so fast. Some old friends think it was done by Danzo, the Fifth Hanpot Shadow, which is pretty good: Sarutobi: You will regret it, Danzo Danzo: Hiruzen, I am the Hokage 👏👏👏 Some people may ask if it is the other way around, but no, shouldn't Danzo be the Hokage? And even if the people are talking about it, the three generations can do something, what? For example, make an announcement, or really "comfort" White Fang. It's a pity, the third generation has always been Buddhist 🥱🥱 PS: By the way, some people say that Konoha White Fang is not strong-willed and has a weak heart. Good guy, a peak shadow-level swordsman master can still be weak-willed? Okay, let's ask some third-generation fans to explain, I'm in the process of learning PS: By the way, those fans who blame Kishimoto for setting the short story into a long novel and eating the setting, don't come here. What they mean is that they blame Kishimoto for setting the setting, but ask the third generation fans to follow the original work. Well, yes, they will complain if Kishimoto takes the setting. , Fan authors write according to the setting set by Kishimoto, they think it is very nice, very good, the double standard expert is a show, and he even complained to me all night, he asked for evidence but no evidence, and he asked for analysis but no analysis, I can't say it but you are YY, and if I can't say it, blame Kishimoto for changing the setting 👏👏👏

Naruto has always been very popular, but your name was chosen too casually like a slam dunk. This kind of randomness will make readers uncomfortable. You are also an old author. I have already mentioned this issue in the slam dunk. You said you would pay attention to the next book, and now it proves that you are still the same you. As for the plot, I don't dare to read it, mainly because the recent Naruto books are so good and popular that I'm afraid you won't even have the motivation to write them down, eunuch.

This book adds a lot of incredible abilities to the protagonist, and he looks awesome in any of them. However, due to the plot, the book is barely 55. I don't understand why the author wants to forcefully disgust people?

There are a lot of conspiracy theories in Naruto right now, but which ones do we want to be sure of? First point, the Third Hokage used public opinion to force White Fang to death. This was wrong. White Fang failed in his mission, resulting in the death of hundreds of people. If it were put to this day, it would not be impossible for a person to fail in his mission, causing the death of hundreds of people. It would not be impossible for him to have all his officials shaved off, but what did the Third Hokage use? Silence means telling White Fang this matter, and not pursuing the matter Although it is indeed possible that someone is behind it to manipulate public opinion, absolutely no one wants to kill White Fang. The reason why White Fang committed suicide was purely due to poor psychology and too much pressure. Hundreds of family members also expressed their feelings towards White Fang. He hated it so much that the two combined, so he committed suicide The second one is that some people say that the fourth generation Hokage is the puppet of the third generation. This is possible, but the possibility is really unlikely. When the fourth generation Hokage takes over, he will definitely need the previous generation Hokage to give him a position, and then slowly transfer power. The third generation of Hokage can sacrifice for Konoha anytime and anywhere The third point is that some people say that the new generation of Konoha sacrifices just to protect the top management. Established, the second generation Hokage died in battle, the third generation Hokage died in battle, and the fourth generation Hokage died in order to seal the Nine-Tails. For them, Konoha always comes first, and there is no need to let the new generation die to save them The fourth point, what about Naruto? The original setting was very bad for Naruto, but because the scene was enlarged and no longer in the same village, the setting was slightly changed. The reason why Naruto ate instant noodles was because she couldn't cook, and the reason why he ate expired milk was because he had expired it himself, and The third generation often gave him money to help him The fifth point is that some people said that Naruto's identity was not told to the villagers, but instead said that it was to protect Naruto. This is a conspiracy. If I remember correctly, the son of the village chief of a certain Sunagakure village is the Jinchuuriki! Being insulted and disgusted by everyone, Konoha wants to protect Naruto, not to protect people and help people, but to prevent the many enemies killed by the Fourth Hokage from killing Naruto. They are not afraid of ten thousand, just afraid of the worst. If they attack the Kyuubi, they are helping people. Taking action is a war, but if you take action against Naruto, it is revenge. It has nothing to do with our village. It is his own action. If you can kill her, then kill her. Our village doesn't care. If others say this, what can you Konoha do? Do you really think it's still the era of Hashirama Madara? Two people fighting four kingdoms

The life of Naruto as a child is a reflection of the third generation. It's impossible for Minato and Kushina to not have some inheritance, right? As a result, I received a relief fund😵

King Kong Blockade + Sage Mode + Added Nine-Tails Chakra Why is it so laborious to beat Lao Zi? 🤔

You this. . . . . Your entrance exam is a bit outrageous. . . . Taking a shuriken test for admission feels like taking a marksmanship test for joining the army. . . Also, it would be a waste if Konoha was in a state of war preparation and enemy ninjas could touch the entrance examination venue. . . . They were all beaten to the doorstep.

I can only say that I have read too many fan stories, and I don't really think that I can touch the porcelain setting, no, no, no, Yuan Fei is a good old man, kind and compassionate, even if the Uchiha clan incident comes to the last moment, he wants to solve it through conversation instead of force

There is no need to cleanse the third generation. Those who wash the third generation say goodbye.

This is written with a hammer in mind. World War II hasn't started yet, the Senju haven't disbanded yet, the Uchiha are still there, and nothing happened to Hinata! Konoha F4 are all in their prime, and the Uchiha mirror is still there! The Sannin are about to rise, and Konoha White Fang is also making a name for himself! Why is Konoha being penetrated into dice at this time! Forget it once, keep coming! ? ? Konoha fought one against three and four in World War II and Three. Are you kidding me? ? Why does the protagonist make Konoha so useless? This is the time for Sarutobi to show off his talents, right? Enemies came to the village at every turn. The protagonist is always in dire straits! Tell me how Konoha like this won World War II and Three! !

I just finished reading the free chapter now, and I feel so frustrated. I am a member of the Uzumaki tribe, and I know sealing, necromancy, and senjutsu. I have a ten-fist sword. I am a Jinchuuriki. I can stomp on anyone 😭. I can say that I am a genius. I can beat someone younger than myself when I work together. I have been practicing since I was two years old. With this record, can I say that I am a genius than Minato? Just catch this ANBU, bully them from the ground up, and the ones with strong strength may be counter-killed. After that training, they will be defeated. Minato is 12 years old and one against four is still a jounin. Why is it so complicated in the second world war? Let's work together with him and the protagonist to not only reduce his intelligence but also weaken him. Let's go.

The development is too slow, it should be 1 year old genin, 2 years old, middle jounin, 3rd shadow level, 4 years old, super shadow, 5 years old, Six Paths, 6 years old, Super Six Paths, 7 years old, control the ninja world, explore the universe, 8 years old, become a god, 9 years old, control the universe, 10 years old, study time and space, 11 years old, travel through time and space, 12 years old, travel to all worlds, 13 years old, create the main god space and become At the age of 14, the Lord God used reincarnation to explore the changes in the world. At the age of 15, he created a system and a cross-border chat group. At the age of 16, he merged with chaos and became chaotic consciousness. At the age of 17, he created billions of universes. At the age of 18, he divided into billions of clones and threw himself into the world to become an ordinary member.

The protagonist is too bad! They didn't take advantage of the foresight of the plot at all, and just stupidly messed around step by step!

Collecting names for supporting actors~ I am incompetent in naming. If you have any good ideas, please post them in the comment area on this floor. I will select some supporting actors based on the number of likes. I hope brothers can express their thoughts boldly~

The author may have forgotten that he is writing for a fan, and many plots are simply impossible to happen. For example, the Deidara-like character ran directly to the core of Konoha Village and killed all the children practicing the first time, and almost killed Minato the second time. If the protagonist hadn't appeared, Minato would have died. In order to highlight the role of the protagonist, the method of directly opening a plug-in for the enemy is not suitable for appearing in fan works, especially when the enemy does not even have an intelligence source.

All I can say is that there are a lot of cheats and cheats, and anyone who hits them will be 50-50.

He's not just a Jinchūriki and Thunderbolt plug-in, but he's so good at senjutsu that he just pulls it off like this? I have been poisoned several times, and the Uzumaki clan who mastered the sealing technique was easily sealed. Is this a joke? As a Jinchuuriki, I've been close to death several times. Can you give me some logic?

It makes me sick to watch, the protagonist can be a loyal dog

Uh-huh, how do you say it? The protagonist of the Uzumaki clan is a genius in sealing arts, but sealing arts rarely appear in the book. There are a lot of unnecessary characters in the plot. The introduction of Tsukuni Enichi and Muzan is very abrupt and the Demon Slayer characters have no impact on the main plot. At first, I thought it was because I fell in love with the breath of the sun and arranged for the reincarnation of Tsukuni Enichi. However, it turned out that it was a simple reincarnation but there were dozens of chapters. Muzan just met. No more. The ghost king of the Daming Mansion was captured by Orochimaru and trained to become a diehard loyalist of Orochimaru. He appeared in two or three chapters and then disappeared. It was a completely unnecessary plot character and I don't know why it was written in. The protagonist was injected with Hashirama cells by Orochimaru to detoxify them, and then the Hashirama cells disappeared. The three-tailed Lin went on a rampage and killed ANBU, Obito concealed it, and Koso took the blame for no apparent reason. In the ending, the protagonist becomes sick after transplanting the Samsara Eye, which is axiological, a bit like Akainu. When the ninja world was unified, the protagonist's subordinate Deidara directly bombed two to three thousand innocent civilians indiscriminately in order to catch the instigator. Afterwards, the protagonist said that Deidara still had value and left it alone. . . . . ! ! ! !

Brothers, the writing at the beginning is so bad that I didn't read further. Can anyone tell me how the rest of the writing is?

The poison is so poisonous that it can turn Kagura's mind into a blind man.

Alas, I have clearly seen the enemy's plan, but I have to step into it again and again. I also found that the author doesn't seem to like Naruto very much. The timeline is a lot of chaos, and there are a lot of hangups. Most of them are evenly matched with the enemy. I am speechless.

To be honest, it looks a bit cowardly. You want to express that the protagonist has made great progress in his cultivation. The progress is not small and he is already very strong. However, you are being tricked in various ways. Don't you think you are a coward? You practice an immortal technique, at least to the level of quasi-shadow, right? Your physical fitness will definitely improve. Wouldn't you just kill someone casually? What are you still afraid of? Didn't you say you wanted to kill Danzo? The strength of the main character is enough to see, but I don't understand it at all!

The protagonist's name is Uzumaki, which is a pretty good name.

The combat descriptions are good, but the plot arrangement is often too forced. Kagura's Eyes of Mind are always evaded; he's very good at fighting friendly forces, but he's just fine fighting against enemies. Just pretend to be cool with your own people, and be evenly matched with the enemy. It is very careless to think about both crushing and ups and downs.