One-Sword Superman in the Pirate World

When Enichi was killing Demon Slayer, he could cut hundreds of swords in less than a second, almost cutting Muzan into minced flesh. At this speed, even Hawkeye, Red Hair, and Roger couldn't cut him. Enichi's basic board is already the top among pirates, but he is not domineering. I feel like he underestimated Enichi.

Read it, don't like it, the protagonist's talent can fully support him to reach the top, and even his talent can be improved due to time travel, so he can reach the first place, killing randomly, and being invincible Wen Duoxiang.

Hope it doesn't end badly. I really liked the Naruto fanfic written by the author before, and I read it three times. 👀

It's sad, there aren't many good Pirates fan fiction books, and now I find out that one is still being serialized.

😅 It's hard to find a good book. It's just that it comes out too slowly.

Now that I see the navy replacing the world government, I think the writing speed is quite good, not too fast, not too slow, and careful enough 😍😍😍 I hope the author will continue to work hard

It looks good, please update please update 😡😡😡

I like this one better than Salted Fish Dog General.

Well, when the original character of the protagonist was old, he was a fierce man who could cut 1,500 swords in an instant, but as a pirate, Zefa would directly grab the blade and say it was slow... Incredible. It feels like the protagonist's strength has been greatly reduced. At best, he is at the level of Tanjiro, the main character.

Chapter 15: I can't stand it anymore. Grandma Li's Green Pheasant Colonel has a code name. His original name is Kuzan. Code names are only given to general candidates and above. The rest are given by peers who praise them, such as Smog the Smoker and the like.

Why is Akainu mentioned in the introduction? ? ? ? ? What did Akainu do wrong? Isn't he just a hawkish traditional soldier? His methods are extreme, but he is indeed fulfilling his justice.

In fact, Enichi is not very good at swordsmanship. He even used the sword once before joining the Demon Slayer Corps. The breathing technique created by Enichi is only for creatures like ghosts. There are no ghosts in the pirate world, they are just a group of people with abnormal muscles and physiques. Based on Enichi's talent, he will probably create new moves based on these characteristics. Yuanyi's talent is to see through the world, just like after Yuanyi discovered that the Ghost King has five heads and seven hearts, he completed the thirteenth form in an instant based on this characteristic. The protagonist written by the author feels like he is just a human being with some talent for swordsmanship. He does not describe the monster talent of people like Yuanyi at all. He writes it just like playing a game and leveling up level by level.

Actually I haven't watched it yet, the main character should join the navy? I don't know if the author has read the memories of the Valley of the Gods. In the Valley of the Gods, a country was massacred in three years. The navy helped the Tianlong people play a massacre game. I clicked on the introduction and just saw the protagonist. I remembered Enichi Tsukuni's words, "What's so fun? Where's the fun? What do you think of human life?" If placed in the Valley of the Gods, it would be really cool, but. . . The protagonist is the navy. The contrast is really full and quite ironic. I can only say that it is a pity. The intention was good, but Oda stabbed him in the back. Now I don't even want to read the navy novel. The navy just relies on the defense.

The novel about the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon in the Ancient World will definitely be criticized to death, while the novel about Demon Slayer Breathing Technique that beats various anime is said to be good.

How to say it! After reading about twenty chapters, I have no interest in reading it. The previous life plus the second life must be in my sixties or seventies! As a result, what I saw seemed to be just an ordinary person in his 10s and 20s. Even if he couldn't get along with Zefa and the others, no matter how old he was, he couldn't just become a disciple casually! What's more, the pirates who came after the second generation became invincible, just wore it and lost their brains. A person who has been in a high position for a long time actually casually apprenticed to someone of the same level, and Zefa still treated him like a son. Don't you feel alienated! The above only represents my personal opinion.

Can you recognize the reality after only watching Demon Slayer's Oni Duozi? If all the fathers in Demon Slayer are tied up, they are not enough to beat the top combatants in One Piece. Thank God if you can retain your talent. Don't play too much.

Invincible flow? Ah, this... Is this called the invincible flow?

I don't understand why the protagonist still uses other breathing methods. The original book clearly states that because the breathing of the sun is too difficult and comprehensive, not many people can learn it. With the help of Yuanyi, most of the content of Sun Breathing was simplified and the original five breathing methods were born.

It doesn't make sense. A lieutenant general who has the strength to be sent to the West Sea as a third-class soldier and has no hidden strength. How do you think that he has three-color domineering power, is protected by a swordsman and a big boss, and has no rebellious heart. At first glance, he is the mainstay of the future, and he is sent to the branch like this.

As a bookworm, I still like to read books about the same human beings. Personally I can't stand it. Is there no reason why the monthly ticket is low? There are problems with many character descriptions. Take the protagonist as an example. A person who has lived into old age must have some special temperament or special thoughts or ideas. This is also a point of view. The eyes of a twelve-year-old have the depth and temperament of a ninety-year-old. But the author abandoned them all. Also, the Breath of the Sun is so good that the Breath of the Clouds comes out. And breathe and breathe. There is no description of such an important place. In the early stage, Cyborg Kong didn't teach him anything and just let him read. You are too ridiculous. The kind of exercise that is inhuman. It's not that he is particularly powerful once he reaches his age. The most ridiculous thing is the power value. Guess why the pirates used this in the first place. In the end, the power value was abandoned. Because there is no way to write at all. In the later stages, the power value will explode. When you write a fan book, you have to write about something different. It doesn't mean that different abilities can make you special. Even if I give you thirty golden chapters in this book, you won't be able to write golden chapters. Being special can attract people. But there's nothing special about the protagonist of your book. Transparent world. The breath of the sun. It's the same black knife. It's the protagonist's thinking. The most special thing about a time traveler is his ability to play tricks. The protagonist is a second time traveler. The ability shown is quite satisfactory. It's not even exciting at all. As a person who has been fighting ghosts all his life, even if he relied on his subconscious instinct during the battle, he should be beheading. There is no reason why the monthly ticket is low. There is nothing funny or exciting about what you wrote. There is nothing special about it. Even the protagonist, as a time traveler, doesn't know how to do anything. Failure is such a failure.

The biggest flaw of this book is that it uses Yuanyi's skin. After all, Yuanyi has a bad character. After reading two chapters, I feel that the protagonist is just a child.

To be honest, Demon Slayer is really a low-martial world.

I searched several platforms but couldn't find any Pirates fics that I could watch. Kuro has become his last song.

The most discussed aspect of a book is actually the abnormal combat power? I can't understand such a basic setting, and the whole experience is poorly paced. You write Invincible fanfic. It just means that the writing is enjoyable. I would rather the protagonist can win from the beginning even when he is very young until the end. Nor is he willing to keep struggling for the so-called inexplicable rationality. The most important thing in invincible writing is never rationality. Most importantly, it's fun. A person who was invincible in the previous world quickly became deficient after being reincarnated into another world. Let's put aside whether it makes sense or not. The key is that it's not exciting enough, whether it's the protagonist's character, strength, or behavior. The protagonist is kind, weak, and hesitant. It is very discouraging. Don't talk about kindness or basic morals. They are young and many protagonists in Invincible have only one thing in their minds. They are the only ones who dominate all the injustices in front of them. Nowadays, the fanfics with the best starting points start from Naruto and become workers. If you look at how people write invincible novels, they must first have the power and mentality to control everything. The first thing I thought about when I was beaten was how to kill the entire family, no matter whether the enemy was a good guy or a bad guy. An invincible person must have an invincible character. It turns out the first thing our kindhearted protagonist does is apologize. A gentleman takes revenge immediately. If you can't do it, just use a plan. Anyway, you must kill him. That's the basic truth. The author writes hesitantly.

In the battle on top, Garp said don't stop me, or I'll kill Akainu. As a result, the latest manga shows that Garp was taken down by Aokiji, and Aokigu couldn't defeat Akainu. After all, his leg was broken after fighting for ten days and nights, so Garp couldn't defeat Akainu. It's just bragging. Garp is old, and his strength has not declined, but it is impossible to rise. His potential has reached its peak. If he really fights Akainu, his endurance will definitely not be exhausted.

There is no justice in the pirate world The biggest evils are the Celestial Dragons, the World Government, the Navy, and then pirates. Some people say that no matter how bad the order is, it is better than no order at all. Then why don't you maintain the Qing Dynasty and let it rule for tens of thousands of years? Because if you destroy the Qing Dynasty's ruling order, the world will become disordered and the world will be even worse than before. 🙂 The brains of these senior naval officials in the Sengoku Warring States Period are quite ridiculous. Even if you say that the World Government is more powerful than us, and we are the only ones to be treated as dogs by the World Government because we cannot defeat them, I admire your sincerity, but you insist on saying that maintaining this rotten order is for the sake of the people, and you have to wear the cloak of justice, which makes me sick.

After reading chapter 400, I couldn't stand it any longer. Inexplicably, the Sengoku gave in and got the Demon-Slaying Order. After more than 200 chapters, I inexplicably went to the Holy Land. Imu Wulao Xing couldn't stay. Then Imu disappeared after 200 chapters. In the middle, the aunt also inexplicably went offline. I feel that where the author thought and wrote, the combat power was confused, the progress was delayed, and the fighting scenes were delayed.

After reading it, I felt that this article was useless. The protagonist obviously had so many opportunities to do other things, but he spent them all waiting for the timeline to end. And regarding the banana fruit and the fruit eaten by the protagonist, the results are different. If the protagonist eats fruit, eat the Nika fruit. At least it is more reasonable and better than your own creation. The plot is too watery. And I have to write about Luffy. In fact, I feel that for the protagonist, Luffy is a helpless existence. Even if he dies, it doesn't matter. In the later stage, the frequency of the protagonist's appearance is also too small, and the word count is always low. All in all, the protagonist can't get any benefit from writing Luffy. Killing him early is more important than anything else. Or just eat the nika fruit yourself.

I read the novel on QQ Reading, and I don't quite understand why the protagonist doesn't eat Devil Fruits. Still looking down on him, the famous strong men in the sea are all fruit ability users. Eating the fruit will not affect the protagonist's swordsmanship. The protagonist always says that the fruit-powered person is restrained by the Sea Tower Stone and sea water, which is the biggest weakness that affects the protagonist's combat power. The question is, would the protagonist, who has a similar physical quality to Kaido, be afraid of sea rocks and sea water? You don't like the Thunder Fruit, but you still don't like it, so don't you still look down on the Animal Phantasmal Beast Fruit? When you improve your physical fitness, there will always be a limit.

It was so funny, invincible, but he was knocked unconscious in the first fight.