Football's Redemption

Toxic spots 1. Kneeling to his younger sister: The protagonist is always swindled out of money by his younger sister. Second, parents kneel down, only picking on their own child's faults, and attacking the main character at the slightest disagreement. 3. The kneeling drunkard paid others to train him, but the group of kids didn't train at all.

Adriano, the former King of the Meazza This is not a player like Ronaldinho who chose to indulge himself after winning all the individual and team honors. His peak had just arrived when he became self-destructive because of his father's death. It can be said that his fate was changed by a bullet, which is quite a pity now.

To be honest, this book was just okay at the beginning, and it had its flaws, but it gradually improved and became completely addictive later on. However, the slow update speed is a major drawback. I hope the author can persevere.

K-Treasure

Having read up to chapter 29, I'm finding it too self-indulgent. The author keeps adding his own unsubstantiated narration, which is very unpleasant to read. He also frequently includes his pen name and uses emoticons to appear playful. These things happen often, which significantly impacts the reading experience. That's cheating, and the cheating is outrageous.

Dungeons are just dungeons, used for leveling up. The main world is the most important, so write more about the main world's story. Use chapters 1-5 as transitions for dungeons; the main world is the foundation. 🙂

The idea is good, but there's too much internal monologue from the main character, plus various filler words the author finds amusing. It's both annoying and padded; half a chapter is just internal monologue, incredibly tedious.

K-Baby was born on April 26, 2006... And will be about 13 years old in 2019... This is too much of a punishment; even the Romeo and Juliet Act wouldn't protect him.

Author, you're really pleasing neither side. I think you should focus on writing the sub-world, because I think more people want to see stories about saving those in need.

Great idea, but I don't like watching it! Because I'd rather see the main character take flight on their own than have them help their idol take off. Besides, I'm not a fan and don't have any idols, so I really can't understand that kind of fan mentality.