Football's Redemption

Poison Points 1. Kneel down to your sister, the protagonist is always cheated out of money by her sister. 2. Parents kneel down, only find fault with their own children, and hit the protagonist whenever they disagree. 3. He knelt down as a drunkard and paid money to be trained by others. As a result, those children were not trained successfully. In the end, he recorded a video and gave it to the youth training in exchange for money. 4. Foreigners are bad, indiscriminate, and are all accomplices, and they all compromised in the end. 5. The biggest poisonous point is running naked and being photographed. Chinese people are so unbearable and vicious.

Adriano, the former King of Meazza This is not a player like Ronaldinho who chooses to indulge himself after winning all the individual and team honors. He has just reached his peak and he anesthetized himself because of the death of his father. It can be said that his destiny was changed by a bullet. It is quite a pity to think about it now.

To be honest, this book seems average in the early stage, and there are some bad points, but it gradually gets better and makes people unable to extricate themselves. However, the update speed is too slow, which is a big flaw. I hope the author can persevere.

K treasure

When I read Chapter 29, I felt so self-indulgent that the author would always add a narration that had no origin to the author. It was very uncomfortable to read. Then he would add his own pen name and use emoticons to pretend to be playful. Even if it happens once or twice, it happens often, which particularly affects the perception. Cheating and driving extremely outrageously. The midfielder shot from 50 meters, twice at the same place, a mindless trick. Then the protagonist is just a woman, a wife, a wife. I don't know whether sister Zhiling is a system elf or a guide, so I feel quite low. The so-called redemption of any star is just a gimmick, and there will be no follow-up after the mission is completed. I don't know whether it's a parallel universe where the stars will continue to be reborn after the protagonist completes the mission, or it's just a simple mission scene, and the protagonist will pass after it.

Dungeons are just dungeons, used for leveling up. The main world is the most important, so write more plots of the main world. For dungeons, just use chapters 1-5 to transition. The main world is the foundation 🙂

The idea is great, but the protagonist has too many psychological activities, and there are all kinds of auxiliary words that the author found funny. It's really annoying to read. Half of a chapter is about psychological activities. It's really annoying.

K Bao was born on April 26, 2006... He is almost 13 years old in 2019... It is too much punishment, even the Romeo and Juliet Act cannot protect it. . .

Dear author, I really feel that you are not pleasing to both sides. I think you might as well write the sub-world, because I think more people want to see Saving Regrets.

Very good, the idea is good, but I don't like to see it! Because instead of taking the idol to take off, I would rather see the protagonist fly by himself. And I am not a star-chasing fan and I don't have an idol. I really can't understand that kind of fan mentality~