The First Blade of the Jianghu

Hey, the first part of the story is so well written, it's simply amazing. The protagonist is well portrayed, doing whatever he wants and taking pleasure in the world. The whole book is very coherent from leaving the mountain to escaping to the bloody battle, making the reader feel that he is completely involved in it. But when I came to Swordsman, I was dumbfounded. Has the author changed someone? Why is the level gap so big? Swordsman has no way at all. Is it to improve martial arts? No. Is it to strategize in the dark? No. It's a hammer in the East and a stick in the West. He has no idea what he is doing. He goes with the flow and meets everyone. Regardless of the real villain, he will teach martial arts to the protagonist. It seems to be an NPC in the game. The entire Swordsman seems to have no wisdom at all except the protagonist. It is completely the same as the current cool novel routine. Hey, I don't know what happened after finally finding a martial arts book and it became like this.

I don't usually post in the book review section, I'm a very quiet person, haha. What needs to be explained here is: Let's talk about the setting again: The protagonist doesn't know much about the martial arts plot. If you feel that this setting is unacceptable and you like to watch an omniscient protagonist, you can ask other book friends to recommend some, or you can directly select popular martial arts time-travel works from the links of similar works at the bottom of this book. Of course, there are many very well written and beautiful ones. I think this setting is terrible. This is because everyone has different tastes and it has nothing to do with it. But if you want to criticize this setting, I think it is acceptable for one person to criticize once or twice, but if you have to criticize all the time in the chapter review of this book, and even ridicule other book friends, I think it is a bit too much. And if readers can accept different writing methods, they can take a look, it is very simple. I am used to being criticized for my previous two martial arts books, so it doesn't matter, but I feel it is necessary to explain the reason why I wrote it this way. I tried some "unpopular planes" in the previous book "Little People in Jianghu Planes". I personally think these planes are worth talking about, but if no one has seen it, the protagonist knows the plot and will skip a lot of content, which makes it difficult to proceed. So if the protagonist doesn't know the original plot, try to explain the story and characters clearly, and it won't affect too much. I later thought that this way of writing actually doesn't involve too much elaboration, so it's okay. Later on, I gradually felt that this way could bring out the personality of the characters in the original work and retain the flavor of martial arts. Instead of a protagonist who can predict the future and mess around with everything. (By the way, forewarning in advance, one or two real "unpopular planes" may appear later in the article) As for some people asking: 1. Ah, why does the protagonist join the martial arts world if he doesn't know the plot? This problem is very simple. All the characters in the original work do not know the plot. How they survive is how the protagonist survives. The protagonist is also the direct disciple of the Blood Knife Ancestor. 2. Some people think that the protagonist does not know the plot, so why can he still encounter the original plot by coincidence? There doesn't seem to be any forced coincidence. I think the only coincidence is that the first time I traveled through the world was deliberately arranged by the "Jianghu Order" that traveled through the martial arts plane. The following ones were an extension of the relationship between the characters. The protagonist was in the Jianghu, so he naturally couldn't help himself. The plot is not solely instigated by the protagonist, but all the characters will naturally promote the plot together. This is exactly where the plot of the prophet protagonist will proceed differently (similar to the nature of traditional martial arts). From the second volume to the present, the protagonist seems to have not followed the original plot that was forced to coincide. If you feel that some part of the plot development is very illogical, you can point it out directly and discuss it in detail. This is normal, rather than "just talking". 3. This protagonist makes people feel uninvolved. There is no solution for this book. The solution is to look at other more immersive and better-looking martial arts time travel works. There are many of these works, and you can recommend them in the comments below, which will save some book friends who don't like this book but like martial arts from reading this book. And if someone says, spraying is to let other book lovers see it, so as not to fall into the trap. So I will post here first and explain it clearly to new book friends. Having said so much, I should make it clear. Finally, I may post some discussion posts about the original work in the book review area in the future. Everyone is welcome to participate, thank you! Thank you again to all the book friends! 🙂 Okay, please start recommending other good time-travel martial arts series works in the comment area to those book friends who don't like this book 🌹🌹🌹

In recent chapters, I can feel the repressed desires in the author's heart. Why not let go and write, and make the protagonist's asshole explode. You can be regarded as making a name for yourself in the online literary world.

The protagonist actually doesn't know anything about the plot! ? Readers who come here to read basically like martial arts novels. You have never read the protagonist of Mr. Jin Yong's work? There is no sense of immersion at all! ! !

The protagonist doesn't know the plot at all! This is not fun to watch at all! On the contrary, it's very depressing! It's better not to be a time traveler!

Unlimited martial arts flow. The background of the story is that the protagonist is reborn in the world of Lianchengjue and becomes the disciple of the Blood Knife Ancestor. He goes out and gets involved in the struggle between Ling Tuisi and Wan Zhenshan. After killing Ling Tuisi, he is hunted down. Like the original work, he joins forces with the Blood Knife Ancestor to fight Nansiqi on the snowy mountain. After that, the master and apprentice finally win the battle by luck. Then he entered the world of Swordsman and was involved in the Golden Pen Washing Hands incident. Entrusted by Mr. Mo Da, he rescued the Liu Qu family. After his martial arts progressed greatly, he faced off against Zuo Lengchan and entered the Five Mountains Merger Incident. The advantage of this book is that the author's writing style is excellent. The fighting descriptions and character dialogues have a very strong traditional martial arts flavor. In terms of style, it better integrates the characteristics of the two martial arts schools of Jin Yong and Gu Long. It has the weight and calmness of Jin Yong's martial arts and the cleanliness of Gu Long's martial arts. The shortcoming of this book is that the character of the protagonist is unreasonable, and there is a problem of selling meat at the head of a sheep. The protagonist claims to be a time traveler, but in fact his actions and thoughts are that of an indigenous person. The sense of substitution is not strong, and the character is repetitive and the work style is inconsistent. It is difficult to justify it. Moreover, the plausibility of many plots in the novel has not been very high. It can only be said that it is barely above the passing line. To sum up, the main reason why this book can be recommended and read by many readers is just that "there is no hero in times, so Shuzi becomes famous." ----Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Book Desolation" Come to us for the book desolation!!!

The first volume of Blood Knife is the best, but there are too many poisonous points in the literary youth later on... Especially the volume of Swordsman, the smell of cologne can kill you Returning to Swordsman, selling wontons and demolishing the school, the whole diary of a great master pretending to be an ordinary person and pretending to be a showman. In general, it has a classic martial arts style, and there are some exciting places, but there are too many private goods, and there is no strong main line purpose to support it. The follow-up feels too scattered I feel poisoned after reading it, and I am not happy.

If you write the plot like this, no one will be willing to buy it 😅

How to say this book is incomprehensible. The protagonist is like a headless fly. Is the author obsessed with imitating the style of writing, but in the end he fails to see what the main line of the novel is and what is the purpose of the protagonist? I was confused when I saw it, and I didn't know whether to praise or criticize it... I clicked on it in confusion, and got out of here in confusion. But I still want to ask all you book lovers, what do you think is good about this book?

It's another eunuch male protagonist. If you don't want to give Shui Sheng a hope, don't flirt with others. The family will be ruined, and the relatives will die and then be abandoned by the male protagonist. It's awesome. It's even worse than the original.