The God of Death Sits in the Frosty Sky

The main female protagonists in the Bleach book are Yoruichi and Rangiku, followed by Zaihou and Hanajie. Sure enough, Rukia and Momoko are disliked and are not expected🌝

Let me start by saying that after time traveling as a novice, the soul must be different, so Hyōrinmaru will have some changes, whether it is ability, appearance or liberation spell, and then there is the potential. Hyōrinmaru in the Thousand-Year Blood Arc is not as good as Sode Shirayuki 😅😅. I really can't live up to the title of the strongest Zanpakuto of the frost system. Also, Aizen once said classicly that a Shinigami battle is a battle of reiatsu, so the two-hit kill of the wasp is useless. Not to mention that the protagonist is extremely talented and can control reiatsu so early. After the plot begins, his strength cannot be second to last. Finally, it is about feelings. With an adult's thinking, even if he is integrated into Xiaobai's soul, his feelings for grandma and Hinamori Momo will not be too deep, so don't be Hinamori Momo's licking dog anymore.

I didn't want to read it when I saw the direct line about protecting Hina Sakura. The women in Bleach hated Hina Sakura and Inoue, so I abandoned the book~

How should I put it? Since the main character is Xiaobai, there will definitely be Taozi's role, but Taozi's role is a bit too much. After all, Taozi's strength and ability can only be used as soy sauce. In addition, Taozi's image in the original work is very unpleasant, so there is really no need to increase Taozi's role.

When I first started reading, I felt that the author's writing style was weird, and there was always an indescribable sense of dissonance. But now it is getting smoother and smoother, and you can definitely see the author's progress. Come on, author! Don't mess up

It is really difficult to destroy the original work and write the original characters well. It is better to create a new character. This polite Toshiro is okay😅

In Bleach, I personally feel that Kujo Nozomi is the pinnacle of female beauty

I stopped reading after reading dozens of chapters. To sum up the reason, it is very simple. I abandoned it because it added an original plot. Moreover, the author did not fully understand the original work, and there were some errors in the description. Generally speaking, it is a pretty good novel that can be read by anyone who is not a fan of Death.

How much better can the protagonist be than the original Toshiro?

Hinamori in the original work is a bit like a star-chasing mindless fan...

It's wrong to call her Rangiku-nee. With Toshiro's character, he should be called Vice Captain Matsumoto.

I remember a long time ago that I saw a liberating sentence that fits Hyōrinmaru's original solution. "The whole world has turned into eternal frozen soil. Hyōrinmaru."

Something is wrong in the first chapter. The Zanpakutō doesn't even have an Awakening Hammer.

Ah, the protagonist, how come I don't even have a Zanpakutō?

I'm curious about how the soul replaces the soul.

It's been a long time since I've seen anyone write a Death fan fiction.

The Four Nobles chapter fills in a lot of pitfalls

Very immature, recommend the vote to support Death

I feel like there are a lot of bugs. The first original book states that Aizen was summoned by the Hollows after betraying the Seireitei and entering Hueco Mundo. He only gave them the abilities of Arrancar and Return of the Blade after having the Bengyoku. Secondly, the only person in Hueco Mundo who can independently transform into an Arrancar is the Wolf King, not Mantis, Nero, or Xiao Wu.

What does this book say? I strongly don't recommend watching it. In the early stage, he was too poisonous. He started talking when he went to Hueco Mundo, and he was a bit bitchy. In the early stage, the battle power was severely reduced. With only twenty or thirty cards, the 8th Ten Blade and the 2nd Ten Blade were all killed. Not being able to express emotions seems a bit bitchy. My own personal experience is that it was quite toxic in the early stages, and I didn't really want to watch it in the later stages. To be honest, changing Toshiro's character is not very interesting. If you feel interested, you can check it out for yourself.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I just read the beginning of it, and emmm, what can I say? The private setting of the ghost path is too inconsistent... If you really can't make it up, you can give up the chant. If the number is too high to discard, you can also refer to some unpopular myths to trick it... A lot of people see Death because of the bartender and the great poet... The first and third broken paths almost made me laugh out loud. Where did the third-rate old pseudo-jrpg game cast spells come from... And Lan Qi can be the teacher, ehmm... Anyway, there are not many Bleach fans who are serious about the setting. Looking at the plot, if it is not too bad, I just bought them all... There is really not much to see about the Bleach here... It is better to say that there are not many anywhere...

Are Rukia's weapons powerful in the later stage? How are they different from the protagonist's?

This timeline is obviously messed up. Then the plot of "wrong and wrong" is still very embarrassing to watch.

The main storyline of Death is too bland!

Isn't Yhwach dead? Nothing can still appear?

What should I write next? It feels like the story is almost over here. There is no room to continue. Should we change the map? I feel like I don't feel the same if I change the map. .

..., Yes, that's right...

The protagonist's character is very boring, not lusty and not ambitious enough. He can't get stronger quickly by cheating through exercise. No one has ever exercised.

I heard that the ending is not a peach line?