The Immortal Path of Spirit Talismans

Give me a plug-in that can repair the broken talisman. Why is the protagonist better than others without it?

I hope it won't be written as a family story, and the heroine won't appear too early. For details, please refer to Journey to Longevity

Chapter 138: Breakthrough from the third level of foundation building to the fourth level of foundation building. It is obviously the breakthrough from the early stage to the middle stage, but you actually wrote the breakthrough from the early stage to the late stage, skipping the middle stage? ? ? .

The pace of practice is too fast and there is no detailed description at all. Secondly, by absorbing spiritual stones, your cultivation level increased so quickly? It's just a three-spirit root If this is not something that one person can do, then just use the spirit stone to cultivate people.

Unexpectedly, the author set the protagonist to practice the skills of the Nascent Soul stage, but they were actually donated by others. Your own skills are the fundamental secret and vitality of a cultivator. If the enemy knows the secrets of your skills, they will have direct means to target you. This means that your life and death are in their hands. Isn't this a joke? So sloppy and extremely disappointing. The exercises practiced by the protagonist are all written as highlights. Some even set up self-created exercises, which is a good thing for the author. What do you think?

It looks weird without a golden finger

I think those with spiritual roots should be able to complete the five elements as they practice, and those with spiritual roots should not have shortcomings.

It's too bland, the protagonist levels up quickly, and there's no sense of urgency like a small family.

There are too many settings outside of the plot, and it feels like watching a bunch of nonsense.

😁 Everything else is good, but it's all just a bit of a waste, and it's uncomfortable to listen to the book.