The Qingxu Clan

No matter what kind of novel you write, it must adhere to logic. In most people's eyes, a family is like a large extended family; even if cultivating immortality is the primary pursuit, one cannot disregard kinship. Respecting seniority is a prerequisite for a family; otherwise, they wouldn't be a family anymore, and everyone would be looking out for themselves—the family would have been wiped out long ago.

The protagonist isn't cautious enough. With such a good spiritual root and resources, why doesn't he stay home to cultivate and instead keeps running out to seek death?

We welcome suggestions for character names (any person, place, or sect name), magical artifacts, cultivation techniques, and clans.

I've only read a few dozen chapters and I feel there are some illogical points, so I couldn't help but point them out. I hope the author won't mind. Breakthroughs are as easy as drinking water; is it reasonable for someone to break through two levels in two months? Could the breakthrough time be extended a bit?

I couldn't stand it after reading just a few pages of the first chapter. What kind of terrible writing is this? 😰

The book is pretty good, a fairly standard one. However, the author describes very few fight scenes, focusing more on daily life and management. It seems the author might be better suited to writing about farming or business, as the lack of expansion into various spells and skills makes it feel a bit lacking in the cultivation genre. Overall, it's a decent read, worth checking out.

Let's discuss the issue of choosing a female lead. If you have any suggestions, please let the author know. The female lead, tentatively, is Ji Xihua from the Taiyang Sect.

Author, you've got the level structure wrong in this book. Golden Core demon beasts can transform into human form, and Nascent Soul stage cultivators are nothing special.

The author's writing style needs improvement.

If you don't like it, don't waste your breath. Writing a book isn't easy. Why don't you write one yourself and let me see? This book is good, enjoyable, and suits my taste. I recommend: *Earth Transmigration Era*, *Eternal Kingdom*, *Point-Adding Immortal Venerable*, *Ancestor of Ten Thousand Demons*, *Martial Tomb*, *Ancestor of Ten Thousand Ghosts*, *Drunken Immortal Gourd*, *Invincible with…