Qingxu Family

Any novel you write must be logical. In the eyes of most people, a family is a big family. Even if cultivating immortals is the main business, there must be some feelings. Discussing seniority is a prerequisite for a family. Otherwise, we would no longer be a family and would only care for ourselves. The family would have been destroyed long ago.

The protagonist is not strict enough. He has such a good spiritual root and has the resources to practice at home, but he keeps running out to find death?

Everyone is welcome to suggest the names of some characters (not limited to names of people, places, and sects), magic weapons, techniques, and families

After reading only a few dozen chapters, I feel that there are some unreasonable parts. I can't help but want to say it. I hope the author doesn't mind. This breakthrough is as simple as drinking water. Is it reasonable to break through 2 levels in 2 months? Can the breakthrough time be extended a little longer? From the beginning, he encountered many adventures, and it felt like the entire family, including the ancestor of Jindan, were inferior to him! 13. You can take charge of family affairs at the age of 4. Those elders who have lived for tens or hundreds of years have all lived like dogs 😁 So what did you do before the age of 13? A little suggestion, the story is a good story, but the time can be more reasonable, the life span of the immortal cultivator will be longer, and the spiritual root cannot be too unnatural, right? I hope the author can adjust these poisonous points, and the pace can be slower 😊

I couldn't stand it after reading just a few pages of the first chapter. What kind of awesome writing is this? 😰

The book is quite good, a very well-organized book. It's just that the author rarely describes some fighting scenes, but more about life management. I feel that the author may be better at some farming and business writing, because there are relatively few expansions of various spells and skills, so it seems to lack a touch of immortality. Generally speaking, it is a good book that can be read. In addition, the exposure rate of this book is very low. I read new fairy tale books almost every day, and read a lot of books with 50,000 to 60,000 words. However, I only saw this book today. It is best to ask for votes or something to climb the list.

The author, you may have mistaken the level of this book. The golden elixir monster can transform into another form, and the period of distraction is nothing.

Let's discuss it and let the author know if you have any suggestions regarding the selection of the hostess. The tentative heroine in the outline is Ji Xihua from Taiyang Sect.

, If it doesn't look good, don't talk so much nonsense. Writing a book is not easy, why don't you write one yourself and let me see it. This book is good, good-looking and to my liking. Recommend "Earth Travel Era", "Eternal Kingdom", "Add Immortal Lord", "The Ancestor of All Monsters", "Martial Tomb", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Drunk Immortal Gourd", "Invincible with Eyes", "I am the King of the Summers", "Don't mess with that dragon", "White Dragon Lord of Winter", "Zombie Evil Emperor", "Mechanical Latitude", "This Lord is not easy to mess with", "Killing God", "Demon Sky", "Mysterious Journey" and "Rebirth as a Tree" "Super God Refinery" "A Mist World with You" "Nightmare Corrosion" "The First Emperor of the Human Race" "Ji Dao Demon" "Wizard World" "Spirit Login Device" "Huntian Star Master" "Ancient Games Invasion of Reality" "Ji Dao Fist Lord" "Global Spiritual Tide" "God of Killing" "Zhang Sanfeng Travels to Another World" "Soul-Eating Book" "Road to Heaven" "Ping Tian Ce" "My Wild Tribe" "The Ultimate Monster" "Carry a Lottery Panel with You" "The Strongest Non-Human" "The Farm of Gods and Demons" "The Torrent of Ten Thousand Laws" "The Beast Mastering Evolution Quotient" "The Lord of Destiny" "Let go of that demon pet" "Cross the Qin Dynasty to become a tyrant" "Start picking up attributes today" "The Wizard Earl" "The Eternal Great Summoning" "The Wasted Kingdom of Online Games" "Super God Wizard" "The Wizard World" "The Eternal Sword Master" "The Hero" "League of Heroes Invasion of Another World", "Super God Mechanical Legion", "Pirate Lord", "Farming Lord of Time Travel", "I Summon Heroes for the Emperor of Heaven", "Green Sea Tycoon", "Xingyao Canidi", "Fa Dao Zun", "Supreme Conquest System", "I Have the Talent of Evolution", "The Skeleton Emperor", "The Inheritance Showdown of the End of the World", "Portable Mountain and Sea Realm", "Immortal Space", "Monster Altar", "Horror City" Wild Fairy World" "I Have an Eye of Truth" "Summoning Nightmares" "Crazy Evolution" "Supernormal World" "Dragon Shepherd" "I Have a Big World" "Misty Hunting Ground" "Mage Secrets" "My Countess", "Shadow Dragon Law", "Lord Wizard", "Wizard World", "Wizard Immortality", "Poison is the Way", "Devil of the Abyss of All Realms", "I Can Redeem Merit Template", "I Am Immortal", "Shu Zong", "Sword Builds Immortal Road", "Book of Gods and Demons", "Weird World" "The King's Landing in the Starry Sky", "The Realization of the Dream World", "Plutonium Dragon Realm", "Cultivation in the Elf Continent", "The World of the Gods", "I Have a City in Another World", "The Tauren Lord", "Mountains and Seas Are Dragons", "Searching for Immortals", millions of words cannot be found on Baidu search. I am in a book shortage, please recommend the same type. I don't have money to support, but I recommend it to others.

The author's writing style needs to be improved.

Sorry fellow Taoists! This book can't be made up any more! It's all gone

If you have the strength to cultivate immortality, you will have the right to speak and others will respect you. You may be strong in the family, but you don't know its name. Just like in real life, if you are capable and rich, your relatives will fawn over you and take you seriously, but you can't just call your elders by their first names just because you are rich.

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 3, there were too many far-fetched parts.

I think the protagonist needs a chance to break through to the golden elixir. The protagonist's strength so far in the plot does not conform to the current logic. No matter how talented he is, it is useless without achievements and strength, which will also facilitate the development of the subsequent plot. We also need to bury the hidden line in the middle.

Doesn't the Tianling Root come out only at the golden elixir stage?

The writing is quite good, but the updates are not good enough, and the enthusiasm is exhausted.

What is a noble family? Dare you call yourself a noble family if you occupy a mountain? What is a family?

The exam is over, normal updates will resume today