Rebuilding 2008

Modern urban novels are truly beyond words. They're all about reincarnation and falling in love. I'm speechless. Perhaps many men have dreams in their youth, but as they grow older, those dreams fade. I can't imagine a mature man in his thirties or older going back in time and just playing house, falling in love, especially if he's reborn into his student days—he simply can't fit in.

Having also experienced a rebirth and a great rebirth through the Water Journey, it's clear that the author's approach follows a very orthodox early style of rebirth novels with multiple female protagonists. From 2003 and 2005 until the failed attempt to transition to fantasy, I can only say that I've been watching the author try to write something better – but basically based on the same…

The author should stick to business and campus themes; romance stories without a career element are unsustainable because it's difficult to develop compelling protagonists. Your 2005 book on the mobile phone industry was really good; the specifications were almost flawless. You could try writing about the internet, smartphones, and automobiles.

It's pointless to make money after being reborn if you don't use it to show off; this aspect could have been emphasized more.

Lao Da, you should really write about incest. Your writing is really good. I've reread "Champion's Arrow" several times. Writing multiple female leads only leads to chaotic love triangles later on, and I'm tired of that. The tug-of-war and passionate relationships with your sister are your comfort zone. I wish you all the best, and hope you write a blockbuster!

The protagonist is always worrying about this and that, while the scumbag probably thinks, "If that's how you think, there's nothing I can do. Whoever stays by my side will stay, and the next one will be better."

I think I know why I can't keep reading this book anymore; it's because the protagonist of this book is a bit inhuman compared to the protagonist of the previous book. In the previous book, he became a scumbag after realizing he liked two people.

I watched Champion Arrow again, and it's still great. Then I compared it to Mobile Hero. While Mobile Hero is often criticized, it doesn't necessarily have its merits. It also has an interesting long-term storyline and a developing goal. Champion Arrow is even more so; the protagonist goes pro.

Stop writing about your b-phone name.

I've been following the Champions Arrows series all the way up, but this is the only book I haven't read yet. One issue is that it's too similar to the previous books, making it somewhat boring after just the beginning. Another point is that sometimes having too many female leads isn't a good thing; it's better to control it a bit.