Emperor Qiwu of the East

I've been watching it for so long, and I probably know the reason why I couldn't get signed. One word - Western Too Western The ass is wrong There is no trace of our culture, just the name and the art of war, In the beginning, the identity was lost and the name was Westernized How do you sign the contract?

I went through the book again, and the problems are probably as follows: 1. The map at the beginning is very large, with a population of hundreds of millions. Exaggeration is not the point. The point is that it is easy to discourage readers, and it is easy to collapse in the later stage if it is not handled well. 2. I counted, there are more than 200 chapters out of 260. The protagonist is either fighting or on the way to fight. Moreover, the writing is so detailed that the pace is slow and even a bit watery. Although descriptions of large-scale wars are very attractive, fighting all the time can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. Moreover, the war scenes are not that tense. The protagonist relies on resourcefulness to defeat powerful enemies, but this also makes the rhythm slow and not exciting. 3. Why do we read novels? Relax. But I couldn't find anything funny in the whole book. Some people may say that this is a battle for hegemony. I don't deny it. But I also laughed a few times while reading "The Leader". The laughter in the book is not only to relieve the mood, but also to relieve the eyes. After all, you have to enjoy yourself after fighting for a lifetime. Books must have a certain characteristic, either they can make people cry, they can make people laugh, they can make people empathize, they can be thought-provoking, they can be exciting, exciting, and the simplest thing is to make people laugh. This book does not occupy any of them, it is simply telling a story. 4. The title of the book is too unpopular, and the title of the book is changed randomly. Generally speaking, when we readers look for books, they first look for their preferences. In addition to directly searching for the author's pen name, if you like history, you will search for Tang Dynasty, Ming Dynasty, and Han Dynasty. If you like game genres, you will search for horse and sword, World of Warcraft, Age of Empires, etc. This is self-propaganda. When I usually search for books, I don't search for the word "Dongfang", let alone search for the words "Dongfang Qi" to recommend this book. I know that the author's writing style is good, the story is also good, and the overall concept of the story is also very complete. However, if it cannot attract readers, or the readers do not know that this book exists, it is all nonsense.

Send a red envelope and generate electricity for the author's love! It's so difficult to find such an author who uses love to generate electricity these days. If you, author, can't hold on, I can understand, but I still encourage you to work hard ^0＾~

Support the author, the writing is very beautiful, the scenes are grand, and the structure is clear. I will also send out a red envelope of 5,000 points for recommendation votes. This is the first time I have sent a red envelope😃 so you must not be too smart 🤓. And after reading it for so long, I still want to make a few suggestions. First, the casualty ratio. The casualty ratio in recent battles, such as when transporting food, against cavalry and hijacking camps outside the fortress, is a bit exaggerated. People often risk their lives to fight when they are desperate. Moreover, many of the protagonist's troops are new soldiers and should not have such an exaggerated casualty ratio.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  but the tone of speaking are too Chinese. It's a Western fantasy and it feels a bit inconsistent. Third, I feel that the protagonist is too smooth and will achieve great success no matter what he does. Reality is often much more difficult. I hope the protagonist can suffer some setbacks so that it feels real.        ， In fact, the author's writing style is not bad, but the purely fictional Western fantasy and pure history are not very popular. The author may consider incorporating low-demon western fantasy elements such as The Lord of the Rings or A Song of Ice and Fire. Don't have a strong one-man army. Just have a left-handed battle ax and a right-hand fireball melee mage. The above suggestions are based on personal experience. I hope the author gets better and better.

If anyone else sees this book, I hope they will continue to read it. This book is very good. I personally feel that the author is not bad. It is no problem to be a high-quality book. But I just finished reading and found that the author has not signed a contract. Who can contact the author?

The author is so cool that he actually recruits people online

[Female Host Post] Regarding the heroine, please discuss here. These few chapters about female protagonists have stimulated some brothers. First of all, let me explain that this is about relationships, but most importantly, it is about the male protagonist's marriage. There are several main reasons why I focus on writing this paragraph. First, when the male protagonist travels through time, there must be a marriage, but the male protagonist is not a stallion, nor a romantic talent. His marriage is not a happy couple, nor is it deeply tragic, but an honest and fair marriage. Second, what fascinates the male protagonist about the female protagonist is "the eyes that don't care about worldly affairs. You can't see the shadow of the chaos in the world in her. All you can see is beauty." After seeing too much fighting, death, and battlefields, the female protagonist touches the softness of the male protagonist, and he sees himself. The meaning of war, that kind of peace, that kind of beauty, that's why he said "I saw the light in my life!" Third, the female protagonist is very important to the improvement of the male protagonist's identity. The male protagonist will even have some important commanders, all of whom have a close relationship with the female protagonist and her parents. Fourthly, the character and life experience of the heroine have not yet been revealed. I will write about it later and explain all this. There has been a lot of foreshadowing in the past, some of which are very obscure and book lovers should not be able to tell. Fifth, only great heroes dare to show their true colors. The male protagonist's pursuit method is direct and magnanimous. If you really can't understand it, I suggest book friends think like this: "This brother, except for fighting, has an IQ of zero in other aspects!" Sixth, the second volume is called "The Story of Kanto (Part 1)". The reason why there is such a turning point and the reason why the protagonist makes such a choice will also be greatly influenced by the heroine. This is the foundation of the cause. Seventh, as an older single man, I do not accept your dissatisfaction with the female protagonist. If you scold the male protagonist, please feel free to do so!

I can't imagine what kind of woman can be so beautiful that modern people who are used to seeing plastic surgery and various beauty filters are so obsessed with her. This must be crazy. 😰

Really, it is too difficult to generate electricity for love. If you don't leave me here, you will have my own place to stay. Don't waste your time.

After roughly reading the previous chapters, there are still many questions. First, there are too many meaningless descriptive words. The so-called writing style does not mean that one sentence can say something clean. If it is not divided into three sentences, it will only make the reader feel delayed. Image, but there are basically neither of them. The long inner monologue is just pure talk Third, at the beginning of the novel, or the first three chapters, the four elements of character, time, place, and background must be highlighted. If possible, it is best to hand over the golden fingers at this stage, because they are the foundation of your entire book and the key to letting readers really know what you are writing, rather than the accumulation of long and meaningless words. If you are just generating electricity by yourself, then treat it as if I didn't say anything. If you want to really write business, then you still have to take a good look at the most basic logic of business creation and learn it. That's all. Good luck, author.

The failure of this book to be signed must be due to many factors. I think the name of the protagonist has a certain influence. This book is in Western style, but the name of the protagonist is a bit nondescript. When I first read it, I felt it was very inconsistent. The name Xiao Yang Dancing in the East is neither Eastern nor Western, and it just stuck at an awkward point. Ignoring this point, this book is still very good overall. Through the author's explanation and foreshadowing, I can feel that the author is building a magnificent world. So, Tiehanhan author, keep writing bravely according to your own ideas. As long as you persist, I believe this book will definitely be signed. I and the readers who like this book are supporting you. Come on, Aoli is here.

It's not easy being an author. I will give you more recommendation votes in the future and try to get signed and be included in the list! 🐮Change the world!

It feels pretty good🙂

Let me just tell you who was moved by the author's persistence in recommending books among other novels.

There are red envelopes in the latest chapter. Please read it quickly.

A map of the four human kingdoms. If you have any questions, please leave a message.

I found another one with 1.29 Million words that was not signed

In the previous chapter, the 2,500-kilometer march started, and in the next chapter, we arrived directly at the fortress. You ran the 2,500 kilometers very fast. I really want to complain, really

Continent map, surrounded by the endless sea.

I have to say that the protagonist's name is really awesome. It's the first time I've seen it in so many years. This name is not too much to scare away at least half of the readers. I guess the editor also clicked on it after seeing this without signing the contract❌

It was a rare product, but later on it was never signed and never put on the shelves. There was no profit, so it had to be discontinued!

Encouragement

Dad, have you had it cut? 😭

I sat up in shock when I was dying, and suddenly I heard that a dead body was lying on the bed.

Please change the title of the book. This title is not very good.

Here you go, support the author greatly, come on! 😎

Digging holes and deceiving corpses. I hope I can finish writing and don't cut off the roots.

Why should the Emperor Dongfang Qiwu be called the Commander of the Wu Legion?