Japanese Entertainment, Word by Word

To describe a scumbag with multiple heroines in pure love writing is a failure, either because it was obvious from the beginning that there were many heroines, because the entertainment industry accepts women. Either there will be a single female protagonist from the beginning, with a purely romantic approach, and the other female supporting characters will be collaborators or colleagues in the entertainment industry. By swinging back and forth, the male protagonist becomes a de facto scumbag, and he is described as if he has real feelings, which makes him even more annoying.

The protagonist is seven years older than Minami, and Hashimoto changed her name to Nanami. I understand, your ultimate goal is a pigeon 🤭

What is the use of a eunuch male protagonist arranging so many women who are interested in the protagonist, disgusting readers?

You can either write the protagonist as a scumbag, or you can write him as a single-minded person. As a result, through the people around you, especially Aya Kamei, it seems that someone else is forcing the protagonist to become a scumbag step by step. The protagonist is also indecisive. We don't like such a protagonist now.

I like Ye Lao's book very much. What does it look like? The sake that has been warmed in winter has a delicate fragrance, just like the delicate emotions between the lines. After reading a paragraph carefully, you will recall that feeling. It is light in the mouth, thick in the throat, and violent in the stomach. It is delicate but still right. Unlike the twists and turns of traditional Japanese light novels, Ye Lao's writing has both the delicate style and the directness of Internet writing. But of course there are shortcomings, but this shortcoming is not a shortcoming in my opinion, that is, the image of the characters relies too much on the construction of words. Whether it is Suiyue or Qingshui, the character's personality will always be revealed when it collides with other characters, and the sense of spectatorship is strong. However, this method can make the book better and better the more you read it. People who like directness may find it bland and watery, but people who like to think carefully will feel that the series of paragraphs is very strong. I am a person who likes to drink sake, so I like Ye Lao's writing very much, and also because I can't write with such a feeling. If my writing style feels like Sakura Masamune, then Ye Lao's feeling is that of Pu Xia.

Rena Nonen and Ai Hashimoto during the "Confession" period

Why write so many female characters if you can't write emotional dramas? The protagonist's stone-like personality is not suitable for writing emotional dramas.

Nana Min

If you don't know how to write about feelings, then stop writing. I really can't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

Kimono