He and the Road

Also, the name. There is no desire to click into the introduction. This is unacceptable for online writing. It's not enough to just use writing to carve fences and jade bricks. Sometimes when telling the plot, the effect of "Wang Xiaoer, ate five big steamed buns and laughed so happily" is often better than the so-called pile of writing.

The writing style and story of this book are very good. I personally think that you should not read the list or follow the novices, otherwise it will lose its flavor. The most important thing for the author is to persist, not to stop updating, not to collapse, and to spend more time to deduce the world view and settings. This book is only 40,000 words long, and it will definitely become popular after I write it.

Too many ideas are not suitable for online writing. Simple and crude, pretentious, funny, silly all the way, and inexplicably passionate are still the mainstream of online writing. Alas... Although I understand, I don't have the ability to do it. If nothing else, this book is still not good. If you remove the thought from your writing skills and are willing to bend down and tell stories purely, you can expect to become a god. It would be a pity if you refuse to lower your proud head...

(I am not a sailor) Although I have not finished reading this book, the introduction and title really attracted me, and they coincided with my youthful imagination and passion. In this impetuous world, there are too many people who entertain themselves to death. Most of the current online articles do not have much meaning. The author may consider publishing a physical book, or starting with journal prose, which should sell well (although I have no experience), but I hope that the author can continue on the road of writing. This is also a regret that I have not been able to do it.

Almost everyone who has read it said it is good. I think it is good too, but it is difficult to get ahead when writing like this. The author's writing does not feel like a web article at all. The words and sentences are too concise. It is hard to imagine what it would be like to write hundreds of chapters in this way.

I am also writing a book, and I feel like I am living in the body of a dog 🙂

I have read two chapters and would like to give the author some advice. Can the chapter titles be added?

Indeed, when I first read it, I felt it was a breath of fresh air. I liked it very much, and I felt that I was beating up a lot of novice writers. But now that I read it, I really find that the more I read, the less motivated I am. It feels like the sky is flying, and people can no longer connect with each other. However, I still want to say that you are great, but maybe you are just not suitable for online writing. You can try paper books and short stories. Purely personal opinion. Thanks.

I feel like the author has submitted it to the wrong channel. You can try submitting it to short stories. It might be better

The writing is quite good, and I can see that the author cares about it, but I looked at the comment circle... How should I put it, it's a bit fake. In fact, what this book really lacks is a starting point recommendation, a little bit of guidance. The author might as well go find some starting authors and ask for a few end-of-chapter recommendations. This may be very effective.