A Summer of Entertainment

The author's writing is passionate and embarrassing. He does a good job of writing a very good comeback against the wind as a bit of a passionate boy. The portrayal of the protagonist is too exaggerated, and he does not grasp the intensity of the appearance of the supporting characters. The author's writing method may be more suitable for a passionate anime, but I feel that it is not suitable for today's readers, especially entertainment articles. Forcibly and greasyly, I want to emphasize what I want to say. I want to make readers feel the same way, and I want readers to be moved and passionate, but the method is not suitable. It may also be that I am not used to watching this style. It is similar to TV dramas where I have to underestimate and then rise up every one or two chapters. A cheesy routine and greasy writing made me almost unable to see the content I wanted to see. To be more practical, the subject matter of this novel is very good and in line with current mainstream entertainment literature. The choice of female supporting characters and the beginning of the story seem to be very good. Since the take-off of Lumei, many book friends have wanted to read a novel focusing on Lumei. However, with such a good subject matter, I can say that this subject matter is not bad in any direction on the market. Even your writing style is very good. Yes, even the direction you have chosen now is still very good, but the problem I mentioned above happened, and it is really too slow. There are more than 300 chapters in a debut show without any works of my own. As a person who doesn't watch boy bands, I don't know whether the songs chosen by the author are good or bad. Moreover, the cool points of this book are too backward. This kind of expected and cool points makes me not happy at all. Generally speaking, it is a style issue!

IU wants a female lead, male and female solo roles

Oh my god, writing about rugby and writing about entertainment, the span is so wide, it really doesn't matter whether they are genres or genres.

After eight years, I finally saw you come back to write about Korean entertainment.

To be honest, the author's writing style is really good, but he wrote more than 300 chapters of "101". The male protagonist has absolute strength and then there are all kinds of oppressions that are not popular, and then he is going against the wind. If the author had written like this before revealing that the show was fake, it would still be possible to watch it. Now that everyone knows what the show crew is like, writing like this will only feel very fake. Just 101, the devil editor wants to delete a lot of scenes of the black protagonist, how can you fly against the wind if you don't even have a few scenes on TV? And the main character has a natural disaster constitution, so any bad thing can happen to him... The main character is abusive, and the plot is slow and watery. I only wrote 5 chapters after just one decision to participate. I really can't bear it anymore, it's so confusing.

I feel that the description of the main character is too much. All kinds of gorgeous words and sentences are applied to him, which is full of embarrassing déjà vu. I watched this while skipping, and the pace is too slow.

The male protagonist is described too perfectly, just like Venus Unfortunately, the author's puppets describe many difficulties But the feeling of sadness for sadness and adversity for adversity is too serious Really, it failed to bring any emotion The rhetoric is very gorgeous, but I really can't feel the sincere feelings Maybe it's a bit too much, I'm sorry.

How come such an excellent protagonist, with enough age and experience, doesn't even understand the power of capital? He has excellent strength and is able to deal with people with ease, but he can't make his debut and will always face various adversities? ? ? Outrageous

I wrote 27 chapters for a fan conference, which is long and watery. I skipped it and finished it quickly. Can you please not write too many arrogant feelings? I hope there will be a variety show plot.

How can a person who wants to debut as a singer in the entertainment industry and enjoy the feeling of being sought after by everyone be written as if he is doing a noble cause that benefits the country and the people? How embarrassing are the words used?

I don't quite believe that Ahn Joon Young had such courage in the second season, and he was still the number one in the Black Fault. Isn't Cai Xukun the first to debut in the Fault, and is he still a personal trainee?

Who is the heroine? IU

The plot can be too fast and too delayed. So many photos of a press conference will make people who watch it feel restless.

Too much literary youth is pretentious

Didn't notice that the author from Green Bay turned to Korean entertainment?

I hope I can speed up the pace, it's too watery.

The pace is too slow and doesn't advance the plot at all! Writing a daily life in more than ten chapters, I could have just finished it in one go, but the procrastination is so irritating!

Yooa! Yooa! Yooa!

The progress is too slow. I dare to write dozens or hundreds of chapters for one show. Isn't it going to take thousands of chapters to wait until the heroine appears?